Silver Dragon's Space Law

The first few chapters are really not that good. They endure the humiliation and bear the heavy burden according to the requirements of the red dragon, and have to fight beasts and kill innocent people. I won't say whether the plot is logical or not, but it is really appetizing to watch. Later on, there are excuses for killing people, saying that this woman can no longer survive, so you have to kill her to give her a good time. Sorry, after seeing this, I feel that the protagonist is indeed a person who gives up the bottom line in order to survive. What's more, if you criticize the red dragon, it will not necessarily die, but if the author throws out the setting that a five-color dragon can kill a metal dragon cub at will, I have nothing to say.

The plot setting is really nonsense. Everything has to go wrong again and again. I could get some protection from the Red Dragon Lady. Although it was not a good life, it was enough to survive the infancy. In the end, I decided to run away. I could run away, but I had to take the treasures. After taking them all, I had to carry a certain position on my back. Then I turned around and fought against the Red Dragon Lady there with the golden dragon. This is considered a climax plot, and it should have gone through a gentle plot, but it ended up messing up again. It can be the same as the previous scenes with life gems, 💩 it's not good

I'm here to read Long's writing, not to see you write novels.

It's quite satisfactory, but the fact that the baby is still alive cuts down the reading by half. It's inexplicably meaningless. Travelers basically have flexible moral bottom lines and are not bound by camps. You are no longer a human but you still have to be kind to others. There are so many dragons to kill.

Nowadays, people really don't have much patience. Every chapter where the protagonist endures the humiliation and burden at the feet of the red dragon is a way of persuading him to quit. They are all designed to be a space version of the time dragon. He should run away early. There is also a baby locked in the protagonist's space ability and being cared for by a red dragon. It's really outrageous 🙂

Nick Sara (sleeping) and her treasure (please make up your own mind if you are lazy)

New writers at the current starting point are not qualified to write slow and popular articles. If you suppress first and then promote, you will be abandoned by readers. Without a reader base, you can't write anything but exciting articles.

I sincerely give the author a piece of advice. This book should either be completely scrapped and rewritten or cut out and written into a new book. It is useless to be stubborn at the current starting point. There is still some hope if there is no improvement in the beginning. If there is no improvement in the beginning, it will be dead later.

A time traveler failed to defeat the dragon's greed for treasure

It's not updated enough. I should tie you to the Red Dragon Lady and squeeze you dry if you don't write a book.

Silver Dragon Schwarzen

This is the authentic dragon text 👍

Regarding the scene about the children, it was actually handled quite well, but nowadays people basically don't have much patience, and they just walk away without being able to see what's behind, so it suddenly went from a relatively good plot to a super embarrassing one, because those who can watch it patiently can't talk, and those who can talk can't bear to watch it.

I hope there won't be any dragons in the future who forcefully become hostile to the protagonist and give him the dragon's head. The Dragon Mother was pretty good up front, but it didn't feel good when she suddenly forced the protagonist to kill the golden dragon and had to fight back. The young red dragon in the back was pretty good.

I want a friendly discussion with the author's book club

It's been getting deflated, and it's basically finished.

Brother, which group is it? I also plan to write a dragon article, so I want to ask.

Become the same person? Also, I read some comments saying that the protagonist has been suffering from depression, which makes me a little worried.

After reading it, I think it's okay. Maybe I've read too many books, but this one is still okay (mainly because the protagonist is not the same old story of farming + founding a country), and it's more in line with my appetite.

There are too many articles about five-color dragons and too few about metal dragons. I hope this book can go further.

Well written, the characters are both realistic and realistic

It's a mess when a dragon becomes a dragon's kin. I've never seen this written in any dragon novel.

Why is it so watery? No outline for me? Haven't figured out how to write it specifically?