Ultra: Become the Son of Ampera at the Beginning

The previous one was pretty good, but if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. There will be no heroine.

The protagonist flew up and down, and Zero was beaten into a pendant when he appeared. The hanging bucket has been opened to that extent. What is it written about?

I just want to ask if there is so much torture for Jinna in this. Jinna is almost psychologically affected. Also, if there is no female protagonist, then Jinna is nothing to the male protagonist.

Your book is too funny and doesn't have the seriousness that an Austrian style should have.

Since the protagonist's name is Ye Feng, is he as strong as strong as this one?

It's really a pity that I can't find the Magic Car God novel I want to read in Qidian. I obviously like that one very much. It's really interesting in it. It's a pity that most of the good Magic Car God novels are not good and very poor.

I trust you once, I don't want a eunuch

Come on, I finally came across a novel related to Shina. Write more plots about Shina.

Author, how many words do you plan to finish this book?

It's better to finish it quickly, I really can't stand it anymore

Will you start novels with multiple female protagonists in the future?

To be honest, the author, your latest chapters are really boring. In the later period, the protagonists either died or had their history changed. There is no protagonist anymore.

What's your ending? After finishing Mariina earlier, I thought I could write more about Mariina's plot. I can also mention the finale, but you actually didn't mention the finale at all and just disappeared it. Then what did you do with so many plots about Mariina, and you also asked the protagonist to ask for Mariina's blood, but now there is no trace of Marina. It's really boring. Originally, what I was looking forward to most in your novel was Mariina's plot, but this is the result? So boring

I don't know much about other aspects, but as for women, can you either write a single female protagonist? If there are too many women, it will be difficult to write, because there are too many women, and you don't know which one should be written to be with the male protagonist. Just like this book, it would be great if there was only Zhenna from the beginning to the end. You have to write so many women and the male protagonist getting together, and then, it can't be written well, so it's good to have a single female protagonist.

Kazama Mariina