Two Cities: Lords of Zaun

Can the author change the introduction? Although I was attracted by the introduction and retained by the beginning, this introduction is still too niche after all. That is, people who stumble upon this book will see this introduction. Most of them will not be able to see the key points you want to write, so they will read it at a glance. I sincerely hope that the monthly tickets have been given

Not only does following updates mean that you can read updates as soon as possible, but it also prevents theft, so why do you need to subscribe for updates?

Goodbye if you try to prevent theft again, you are not disgusting with piracy, you are disgusting with those of us who subscribed in the first place.

Anti-theft? Be careful, has your book been stolen? Only the mythical storyteller next door has pirated copies. Your book has not achieved much and no one else is too lazy to steal it. I chase about ten books a day. If you turn on the anti-theft function, I will order it in two days. Just like this, I slowly forget about your book. After ten and a half months, it will be taken off the shelf after not reading it. You will subscribe again when the time comes. Less, less subscriptions. When you write a book, you feel that no one reads it, so you have no motivation to continue writing. In the end, you become a eunuch. If a lot of people read this book, it is okay for you to turn on the anti-theft. Then some people who read pirated copies and can't wait for updates will subscribe. You, others are too lazy to steal, and turn on the anti-theft, aren't you just chasing those of us who are already subscribing?

The suffocating feeling that no one can escape under the rolling waves of the times. The most interesting thing about Twin Cities is that everyone shows their own character arc in the face of difficulties. The second season of Twin Cities is not as interesting as the first season. The first season was watching The Godfather, and the second season was watching Super English. Many fans first set up a trap for the protagonist, letting the wind blow from the east, west, east, or west, and I break it with one punch. It doesn't mean that the writing is not good, but it just loses the core of the Twin Cities. Twin Cities is about the joys and sorrows of small people. Fander, who lost a bunch of his brothers and became a "little turtle", Hilko, who developed Glimmer and wanted to be independent in Zaun, Victor who was frail and sick and wanted to benefit his hometown, Jace, who was high-spirited and then constantly hit by reality, and Ike, who formed the Wildfire Gang to protect Zaun, has a clear positioning of himself. Servika, who only knew how to box in the past, and V who only knows how to box after two seasons, Jinx who has completed the super evolution of Blast (sister is the pillar) → Jinx (Hilko is the pillar) → Jinx (the pillar of Isa, the pillar of the dungeon), Catherine whose mother suddenly died and became the boss of Piltover, and Singed who just wants to resurrect the child. There are also minor supporting characters that pass by, including Isa who is displaced, Loris who has lost her family, and Renni who avenges her children. It's that feeling in an era where everyone is right but everyone is wrong, that is the most interesting and exciting part of the Twin Cities. Later, Victor suddenly soared and became boring. If you make a drama with him as the protagonist, it would be: When I was a child, I wrote about how bad the environment in the city was and people numbed their weak bodies. Victor was smart and clever and determined to benefit his hometown, and then interspersed with Skye's daily life and the learning plot of being Victor's assistant. A young man who is admitted to Pi City faces all kinds of discrimination and studies hard. He is recruited by a big family, bullied by his classmates, and is caught in the dilemma of looking down on him in the upper city and treating him as a traitor in the lower city. He has some abilities but cannot change the troubles in his hometown. Then I got to know Jace, studied Hex together, and finally saw the dawn of changing the bottom city, but Big Head asked to be sealed. He was obviously the inventor, but because of his identity, he couldn't get on the Evolution Day stage. I still couldn't deal with all the feelings in my heart. A missile blew myself up and became the host of Hex. I finally put aside my brotherhood and returned to my hometown to do something that I could do. Then the shock wave will come and help him transform from a human to a god. From the bottom of the city to the city, I will become the sacred F2 to connect you. What a mess. There is no need to worry about the subsequent time travel with Jess. I am familiar with this. The classic map is changed. The Twin Cities Novice Village is finished. It is time to go to the next map. You can also block an account on the new map. It is said that after traveling through the wild runes, the power is gone and needs to be restored again. This book is my favorite and the most palatable Shuangcheng fanfic, come on! The big brother who writes books!

Absolutely amazing. The first three chapters are completely copied from the original plot. I don't even know who the protagonist is.

It's too cumbersome and the protagonist's growth is too slow. We readers will just let it go.

There are too many foreshadowings. To be honest, I don't know whether these are foreshadowings or just water. After so long, I feel that the protagonist has not improved at all. His physique is poor and he has no strength. Doesn't he follow the power system? The protagonist relies only on his wits? That way I don't feel like it. This is the only novel that I rewarded with starting coins. I'm just afraid that the author will run away halfway through the book. I hope this book won't be a eunuch.

Unbelievable, the main character in Golden Chapter 3 does not appear, all the original plot descriptions are really yours.

The writing is good, the technique is group portrait, the pace is slow, and it doesn't look good The Battle of Two Cities looks like ancient Japanese villages fighting each other, without any scenes.

At first glance, it is all foreshadowing. It feels like it is a narrative record, after all, it is flaunting a group portrait. There is less fun in the climax of the plot, that is, because of the popularity of Twin Cities 2, why do you talk so much about fairy grass in the Braille comment area? ?

What the hell is that anti-theft thing? What about normal writing?

The book is very nice, and the author's writing style and plot are also very reasonable. However, this portrait-style writing method gives people a very bad impression when there are few updates every day. I can't see the description of the protagonist for two or three days, which makes people have no desire to follow the book. I still hope there are more descriptions of the protagonist. I also came here for Jinx and Dumplings. This feeling of never seeing what I want to see will make me stop reading after a few times.

It's good to watch, but it's too slow, the pace is too slow, and the protagonist has never been able to do things independently. He seems to guide and dominate everything, but he just listens to others' opinions. Without strength, everything is just a foil and empty talk.

For novels like this that are temporarily popular, 99% of them are eunuchs.

The first thing I felt after reading it was that it was written in great detail, unlike other novels of the same type that either have invincible protagonists, bad writing, or fast pace. Although I came to read this type of novel to make up for the regret of reading The Battle of Two Cities, for someone like me who has been reading novels for more than ten years, I really can't stand that kind of white text. This book feels very good, with writing style and details, but it is still too short and not enough to read.

The quality is pretty good, but the title of the book was a little delayed, and I almost missed it at a glance.

The daily guide can actually produce good books

Burning incense on the 13th day of the break_(:з∠)_

As a quickie, after reading it at once, I found that the last update was 9 days ago. Has the author updated it yet? Say something back.

The tenth day of the break _(:3 ⌒ﾞ)_burning incense

There is no protagonist in the three chapters of The God-defying Gold, and they are all original plots.

Are you a eunuch? He looks good.

It's been three days. Is this dead again? _(:з∠)_

Good looking, good looking, big cheers to the author!

Don't worry about the official setting. Almost none of the other fan fiction I read would write about this 😭😭😭. I read fan fiction just to avoid these disgusting official settings. It makes you feel even more uncomfortable when you say that you are 100% toying with me 😓😓😓 It directly set off my minefield😫😫😫

If you didn't write like this or didn't mention this matter, I could comfort myself. When I read fan fiction, I'm most afraid of others mentioning the disgusting settings of the original work 😢😢😢