Dragon Clan: My Senior Brother Can't Be a Girl

To be honest, I don't really like novels with female protagonists based on the original Ming Fei. There is no reason for people to like a bad boy, unless that person has a certain purpose and gives people the feeling of coaxing the man to fall in love. It sounds weird.

I have read a saying that Xia Mi is just Lu Mingfei's meal replacement for senior brother

It was supposed to be included in the introduction, but the last revision of the introduction failed and had to wait for a week.

I have read more than two hundred chapters so far, let me talk about my thoughts; The early stage feels very perfect and amazing, but it starts to feel a little weak in the middle and late stages, and it feels like there is a lack of explosive points; First of all, Lu Mingfei's plot is not enough; There is nothing wrong with Chu Zihan as the main perspective, but regardless of this role Regardless of her temperament, there is one problem that cannot be avoided. She is not strong enough, and there is almost no room to become stronger. Chu Zihan wants to fight Odin, but neither the A-level bloodline nor the Yan Ling Junyan are strong enough, even if they throw the whole Kassel away, she will face a dead end no matter what. In such a desperate fate, there is only one variable, that is It's Lu Mingfei. Lu Mingfei is also the only "extraordinary person" in the entire Dragon Clan plot. He is the only person who has the real ability (at least the potential) to change destiny, and this guy is a bad boy, which means that this guy can easily take over most of the explosive points. Therefore, the exchanges between Chu and Lu in the early stage and the transformation of Lu Mingfei can be interesting to watch until Chu Zi Han went to Kassel; I personally think it would be more appropriate to turn the perspective to Lu Mingfei at this stage, because Chu Zihan really has nothing to do in Kassel, and she cannot become stronger there, and it is useless to explode into a deadpool, so it is unnecessary to describe Kassel's life in detail; Secondly, the supporting roles are not in-depth enough. Up to this chapter, no supporting character can have enough connection with any of Chu Lu, almost all of them are strangers, and the line between Chu Lu and Chu Lu is blocked by Kassel - just like a long-distance relationship; In my opinion, Xia Mi left the scene too early. She is the Dragon King, has a relationship with Chu Lu, and is still tracking Odin. It is simply a perfect connection line. Chu Zihan ran to Kassel. Lu Xia and Lu Xia were able to do things behind the scenes. Lu Mingfei could learn about the dragon clan through Xia Mi. There was an information gap. Ming Fei herself had no hostility towards the dragon clan. It was reasonable for him to be abducted and used as a tool in a daze (anyway, the little devil, the Riddler, must not have understood anything); In addition, Concubine Ming can still connect with Old Tang. It may not be convenient for Xia Mi to run around in the United States, but Old Tang, who is a hunter, can. Old Tang comes into contact with Chu Zihan, which in turn creates connections between Chu Lu, Shan Huo, and Odin; Because Concubine Ming only has two-quarters of her life left to exchange, she should be more cautious in dealing with the BOSS, and if possible, pull in a few Entering the Dragon King camp is an option (Old Tang and Xia Mi are very popular), otherwise if you plan to kill Norton, Odin + False White King + Norton, Lu Mingfei will have to explode at least three times. Unless you plan to continue the combat power system dug out of the bug in Jiangnan, it will not be enough no matter how you calculate it, or you can directly become a Supreme after exchanging lives, but then there will be nothing to write about. Now I have opened a copy of the Snake Qiba Family. That Lu Mingfei must be exchanged once, and the last life must be left to Odin. I can't think of how to deal with the Mountain King and the Fire King (the original Fenrir, I read that the boss on the post forum said that the value is not even as good as Yuan Zhisheng). He can't really be stabbed to death by a hybrid's knife. Wouldn't that be following the footsteps of Jiangnan? Therefore, I think it is necessary to recruit enough help. Without writing bugs, the only mixed-race emperors who can really fight against the Dragon King are probably only a few kings. To be more strict, only Uesugi Koshi and Eri Yi. I don't think even Ange can do it. After all, Time Zero has no output.

I feel like the language is too literary and the plot seems a bit scattered.

​ ​ ​ One of the reasons for the poor performance of this book is that there are too many original writings before entering school, which are too redundant. With less than a million words, almost 30%-40% are original works before entering the school. One of the highlights of the Dragon Clan fanfic is to change the flaws in the original work, which makes people uncomfortable. The chapters before entering the school are not that long in Long Yi. It can be concentrated into twenty or thirty chapters of about tens of thousands of words, and it is enough to write about Lu and Chu after the world line has been changed. Another problem caused by the original work is that the main line is unclear. The first volume is a variety of branch lines. There is no clear main line that can be related to the content of the original Dragon Clan, which makes people more frustrated. To be honest, the story including the strengthening of Chu Zihang's part is not very exciting. It feels like it is overly literary. It is not a good thing that the novel is so scattered. The author has no intention of writing a unit drama style (it doesn't fit well with the dragon clan). Looking at the table of contents, after three months of perfect attendance, the author kept updating every 4-5 days. He still has perseverance. I hope I can finish this story completely. Come on.

It's quite strange. It's so clear that it's clearly wrong. Why did you add a restart setting when it's written so clearly? Can't you just let the senior sister redeem it?

Stack Nono and Senior Sister Chu Zihan together

Indeed, it feels like there is something wrong with the plot, and the character of the senior sister was not established quickly. In fact, it would be better to change the situation to the situation where the senior brother died in front of oneself, go back in time to save him, and then find out that the world line Chu is a girl, and struggle for a long time, and finally decide to take her to prevent her from dying in the future, to make up for the regret, change the world line, and start the dark flow of rain.

Not many Dragon Clan fanfics can be finished normally. They are either unfinished or eunuchs. When I read them, I wanted to read them again. .

There are many bugs in the Dragon Clan timeline. The ages of the characters are inconsistent with the events they have experienced. There are even many times when three or four ages appear in the same version of the book, and the new version blurs all the specific times. The timeline of this fanfic was organized by myself. The timeline after the restart has many patches on the old version. Therefore, it is not completely consistent with the specific timeline of the original work.

After reading a few chapters, there is no difference from the original work.

It's normal that few people read it, because it was written from the moment Lu's spine was broken 😒

First, the author please put it on the shelves as soon as possible!

Highly recommended, the Dragon Clan fan from Qidian wrote very well 🤓

The writing is quite good, very delicate, and the characters are very interesting. I have read more than 100 chapters, and I have some issues that I would like to give feedback on. Firstly, I feel that some short fragments jump too fast, and it is difficult to connect without reading them word for word; secondly, the progress is too slow, and there is no main plot of the original work in more than 100 chapters; thirdly, Lu Mingfei does not seem to have changed much in the second time, and it is still very frustrating to watch, and it seems that the focus is entirely on Chu Zihan. I felt a little tired after reading it. After more than 100 chapters, I felt that the author was running out of words. The haunted house incident and camping in the mountains to fight against drug dealers were the most important to the development of the plot. The part about meeting Caesar was also well written, but it seemed a bit redundant. It's because we readers want to see Lu Mingfei's change so much that we can't tolerate too many plots that have nothing to do with Lu Mingfei. I can't stand it anymore. Sorry, but I still hope the author can continue writing.

Okay, but don't just have a single heroine. There should always be a Shura field, wow.

The writing is very, very good. I haven't felt sleepy at all since I started reading it last night. However, the character's movement route is not clear, or in this case where each "big event" is short, the characters' motivations are not clearly written, which greatly affects the viewing experience. 1. In Chapter 2, Lu Mingfei went to the Internet cafe and logged into Sunset's Notch, and found out that Lu Mingze was not at home. Without clearly pointing out that Lu Mingfei was going home, he suddenly wrote that he used to use a red dot to play StarCraft. He realized that the other side might be a hang-up, and quickly connected the mouse. 2. In Chapter 15, after the Maybach on a rainy night, Chu Zihan said before getting on the bus that the two families were going in opposite directions, but suddenly he met Lu Mingfei who was going to school at the bus stop. If the route is Chujia-Expressway-School-Bus Station-Lujia Then the senior sister should be on the expressway from school to home, but she met Ming Fei at the bus station the next day. Did she go there on purpose to find someone? Or is it a good student who has lost his mind and gone too far in school? 3. During the Trial of Courage and Tricky Conference, when I turned the page and skipped reading, I thought it was Zhao Menghua who was blocked outside. I didn't expect that there was an unknown younger brother named "Zhao Menghua's other younger brother." It was my fault. But in an empty building, when two people were captured by Deadpool, they didn't even scream? I think this can be written at the front to hint that there are actually two Deadpools. Concubine Ming or someone discovered something was wrong, and then combined with Deadpool's claw marks, it would be more suggestive 4. In the early stage of the Huanlong clan copy, when I wanted to lead out Caesar, I only gave a simple character introduction, without locating Caesar's position. I looked back and forth over and over again, and then I saw "Exploring in Ancient China" in the nooks and crannies between the lines.        ，，，，        ，，，""，      ，，，，🙂      bug，53，，，， 5. Because it was so good that I stayed up late to watch it, so the problem of unclear motives for character movement, and the plot after Ming Fei moved out, made my smooth brain feel very uncomfortable   ①Why did Fingel flash to the flea market? Why do you say "give me the medicine" to the mask seller? After reporting to the police, when did the venue show up to the Public Security Bureau? When did Ye Sheng form a team with Fingel? Didn't Fingel never graduate? What other tasks have been assigned? Why was Chu Zihan deceived into a poster girl holding a sign? When asked to hold a "huge" sign, shouldn't normal people realize that they are working in vain? Why did the senior sister alone become the poster girl for ten minutes? Wouldn't senior sister feel embarrassed being surrounded by so many people and holding signs? ②Chapter 103, why did the senior sister flash into the crowd and kidnap the leader? The hypnotized younger brother is so crazy that he starts attacking the police. Will he give up the attack because of the loyalty of the boss who has been hijacked? ③In Chapter 109, how did Chu Zihan find Yaren? How did Chu Zihan confirm that there was something wrong with his teeth? Why does Yaren have so much trust in Chu Zihan, who is obviously not of the same class? Instead of envy, jealousy and hatred? How did Chu Zihan find Father Chu's secret base? If Chu's father directly writes the address in the notes he handed over to others, wouldn't he be afraid of being discovered by others? Why did Xia Mi come here? How did she know Chu Zihan's route of action? ④Why did Chu Zihan break into the racing scene? There was no foreshadowing that she was coming to relax, nor was there any explanation of how the motorcycle came, so why did it just appear in a flash? ⑤Why did Ming Fei decide to go to Japan? Since I have never systematically learned Japanese, and I have been learning English from elementary school to high school, if I can at least have simple communication with Americans, why not just go to the United States? Why didn't he go directly to date his senior sister instead of going to Japan first to save the country? If you're in a long-distance relationship, especially an unrequited love, and you haven't caught up with your senior sister yet, why not just go to the United States to increase your favorability? Why should I go to watch a Japanese opera when I don't understand Japanese? And he made such retarded remarks as "pretending to be a cup", "boring" and "come on"? Concubine Ming's experience should make her the most discerning, right? Why did you arrange for Concubine Ming to be kidnapped and not escape? Why can't we let Concubine Ming escape first, respect her good-for-nothing character, and then let the little devil come out to remind her, so that Concubine Ming can feel worried about gains and losses? Why, in order to arrange a meeting between Chu Zihan and Sakurai Nanami, all the other expatriate students were "arrested"? How were they summoned? Why did Nono suddenly appear from the room where he was under house arrest again? How did she get out? Why did Yue Uesugi play early? Shouldn't profiling be about knowing the psychological activities of the person concerned? When Kazama Ruri and Lu Mingfei didn't know Uesugoshi at all, why could they find Uesugoshi and let him play in advance? Why did Fingel flash onto Lu Mingfei's escape route? Why wasn't he arrested? Senior sister, how did they find Concubine Lu Ming? Why did the maid shop suddenly start again? Where is Kazama Ruri? Didn't he want the commissioner to deliver the message? Where is the planned escape route?

Polite self-recommendation, Dragon Clan fan "Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei's Restarting Life". If you are interested in reading it, welcome critical comments🙏🙏🙏 Friends who like Dragon Clan can come to criticize and give advice, and communicate more

There have been a lot of updates recently 😍 This is the Chinese New Year? (Really)

Isn't the image of Chu Zihang, who has changed his gender, that of Toyokawa Shoko?🙂

Based on the author's 24 years of comments, it turns out that the book has not yet been completed. The introduction is pretty good. I prefer dragon fanfics about male and female protagonists falling in love. I sincerely ask if it's worth it. How long will it take for the plot to be completed? Do you have any recommendations for other books?

It's been a while since I've been back to check it out. The author is still playing p3.

Boss, why haven't you come back yet?

End? I also specifically looked at the format of the number after the title and never wrote the end. Isn't that the end? 😭

Why hasn't it been updated for so long?