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After watching it, it has nothing to do with the 1993 Buddha Jumps Over the Wall mentioned in the introduction. The rest is just so-so, not toxic at all.
If you want to imitate Ronaldinho, you have to understand how to play flowers.
No top talent, no failure. What do you write? How can you, a yellow man, beat those white-skinned rough guys without cheating? That's bullshit. Even if the writing style of your book is poor, it's strange that it's not a genius flow that can attract readers.
I don't know how the protagonist is positioned
Since you don't join the national football team, let's write less about domestic-related plots. Wouldn't it be better to just briefly mention it? I really don't understand why the more banana-like the protagonist is, the more he has to show off his patriotism. I came to watch the game.
There is no system, it is still a different kind of dwarfism. Do you think you are Yuxi?
Written. . . . Dry
If Bündchen was the heroine, he might as well have chosen Lima. She is a woman who has been verified by her ex-boyfriend and ex-husband. She is still a virgin at this time. She has been with her ex-boyfriend for 3 years and is guaranteed to remain a virgin. Isn't it better than Bunchen? Lima's character is at least guaranteed
Advice for authors
Can the author not use English when introducing the players? The movements on the court can be more concise. It is obvious that you can "pull and buckle" when passing people. Don't insist on saying so much. It is not too much of inner activities to show procrastination.
Writing ten chapters for a competition, the author is really hard-nosed. It seems that he has no intention of achieving results and is just practicing his skills.
It took too long to write about a game, and even after a few days of chasing it, it disappeared.
For readers who read books
First of all, I would like to thank the readers who read my book and voted for me to keep reading. Without your support, this book would be like The Eunuch. I rarely read online articles, and I only came across football articles during the epidemic. This is also the first book I have written. There will inevitably be many shortcomings, or the description of the game is too long, the description is too detailed, or it does not give readers much emotional value, or the small characters also spend a lot of effort to create, or the rhythm is not strong, or the excitement is not enough, or... These can be slowly changed in the future, but that is not what I want to say today. Some readers have some opinions about Chinese patriotism. I don't want to convince anyone here. Everyone has their own worldview and values. Some overseas Chinese have a favorable impression of China, while others are full of ill will towards China. It is foolish to overly believe that the Chinese at home and abroad are like one family, but it is equally undesirable to overturn a whole boat of people with one stick. In reality, not only the Chinese, but also foreigners are friendly to China. Do we have to push these people back to the opposite side? There is no need to be realistic in such small aspects when reading a novel. The setting in the article is a patriotic Chinese. This setting does not affect the reading of the full text, and there is not much content about the country, and most of it is concentrated in the first ten chapters. If you feel uncomfortable, you can skip this part. In fact, compared with some readers' complaints about this aspect, it is better to complain about the irrational logic of football articles, including my own book, because no one would read it otherwise. Asians who play football well can marry European and American stars and become global endorsers of European and American brands. Can they gain thousands of love in Europe and the United States? Isn't this all about obscenity? Same falsehood? Why should people pursue you, an Asian with a different race? Is it because Europe and the United States cannot produce top players? Just use a system to beat Messi and Ronaldo? Do you not understand football or do you look down on football? Comparedly, is it more unreasonable and illogical to set up a Chinese who is close to China than to lust for Chinese or Chinese to become the best football players in Europe and the United States? Compared with many football novels that cannot even understand professional knowledge, the setting of my book is reasonable, including the characters, which are as realistic as possible. For example, Villarreal Chairman Roig, the reality is as conservative as the text. Even the supporting characters such as fans, reporters, secretaries, etc. Are all real people in reality. To write this book, I spent 3 months collecting about 4G of text data before I started writing. In addition, I also watch and play football, and I try to be as professional as possible in terms of details. Compared with many people who write football articles in real life without even watching a few games, or even collecting information, I think this should be sincere enough. Some 8,000-word novel competitions remove all the elements about heightening emotions and removing all kinds of exclamations. The pure competition content is not even 2,000 words. Some novels can even blatantly insert the protagonist into the game without even knowing how many non-EU foreign players a team has, and even arrange for a head coach who has no transfer decision-making skills to personally sign him. This is a shameful content that has no knowledge of football. Some novels are even more outrageous. If you write about a game, you can even write an article without even knowing the names of the players. But I can't bear the thought of so many people reading this kind of book. I have read few football articles, and even fewer have been able to finish them. When I wrote this article, I really never thought about these inner dramas. I just wanted to write a more realistic football article. I prefer readers to pay attention to football itself, rather than the details. If you are interested in those purely illogical, non-professional and obscene articles, then this book is really not for you.
I haven't read it yet. Please read more. It's too little and I don't want to click on it. There is still something to read in the introduction.
It was really written by AI! Leave!