Traveling Through the Heavens Together: My Invincibility Is All Due to Hard Work

This TM character design has completely collapsed. People in the Tiga world are not like this.

Just open the map and it's over. Playing political games with f4 is the most boring thing.

Why is it the beginning of Naruto again? The novels I read now are all the beginning of the first Naruto world. It's too easy to get mentally tired.

The cool thing about the 99 stream is that you use your own power to speed through the dungeon and interact with Zhetian. It seems to expand the world view and write new things, but in fact it starts the traditional fantasy box stacking again. Moreover, most people watching 99 are looking for relaxation. The protagonist who has too many boxes stacked up is always under pressure, which makes people feel very depressed.

I hope there won't be any eunuchs. So far, all the good ones written by 99 Liu suddenly stopped being updated. Writing a lot of words is either trying to sell someone else's head, or it's trying to overwhelm the protagonist.

The setting of the dangerous species in Crimson Eyes is pretty good, but it's a pity that it's not detailed. Those super dangerous species are just background panels. The ever-changing Crosstail uses the body hair of a super dangerous dragon. I don't know how long this dragon is. The evil ghost is made of Tyrande, even if it is made into armor. The cells have always remained active and can adapt to evolution. If used too much, they will be eroded by Tyrande cells, begin to transform into dragons, and finally become Tyrande dragons Esdeath's Demon God Appearance·Devil's Temper, a super dangerous species at the end of the north. Of these three types of Teigu, apart from Tyrande, who has multiple individuals and clans, the other two should be separate clans, right? It may be that individuals have evolved to the extreme from the original ethnic group. Generally speaking, I personally think that Tyrande's adaptive evolution should have limits, but it was not mentioned in the original setting, right? Then feel free to play.

It's hard to understand the protagonist's behavior if you haven't traveled through a proper time period as a severe patient in a mental hospital

This is a big deal. How come your two novels haven't reached 100? 510,000 Words have been completed, and more than 300,000 words have been completed. This 🙂

There is a well-written novel in which peace is just the general trend. Sawai is influential in the local area. Outside the local area, no one cares about him. It is also shown in the TV series. He studies weapons abroad. The intermediary Hui said that this is not good, but the person did not care about her.

Sigh... It would be better to kill Fuyue and Mikoto during the coup... After all, Sasuke is a time bomb, you don't know how he will explode. This would make the plot difficult to write, and the Ai clan would not be able to watch you attack Itachi. There are so many ANBU, would they let you keep attacking Itachi? What about Kakashi? What about the people monitoring? A bit illogical...

One person is a little better Fox monsters and dragons, whoever writes about them will die as soon as they write about them.

Delete Tiga World. It's too baffling, maybe if you change it, other worlds will be fine

I have read a similar book before, even more insane, and the opening chapter was really exciting. Traveling through Naruto, what are the protagonists and supporting characters, strong beauties, the third generation of Naruto, Sasuke Asuma, Kakashi Metkai, and Sakura Tsunade Jiraiya, they will kill whenever they say. Time Travel Pirates, Garp Luffy and the beauty queen Zolona will be killed if they stand on the opposite side. Traveling to one person, Zhang Lingyu, Xia He, Wang Ye, Wang Zhenqiu, Lao Meng, and all the temporary workers except Feng Baobao were killed. In the final battle with Zhang Zhiwei, he seemed to be beaten to death. Seeing this place, the excitement subsided and a sense of emptiness appeared. What... Are you looking at? Fan people? Everyone is gone! This book is better, but the protagonist kills too quickly and plays a domineering manner. Relatively speaking, I prefer the royal style. It would be great if the Night of Genocide could be released, let Uchiha watch Itachi Uchiha being fucked to death and applaud with his own eyes, and then kill Sarutobi, Shimura, Shibu, and Mitomon clans, and the whole village would be blameless. Then he killed Obito and made him a specimen, and asked him to watch Lin resurrect and have her give birth to ten or eight children for the protagonist. Be kind~

Can. There are too many villains and protagonists, which makes me tired and not fresh enough. .

Finally, there is a detailed description of the Death Quincy's simultaneous time travel.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down

I'm really tired of seeing how the clone flow is all about a sea of ​​death and fire. There are so many two dimensions, so why is there a sea of ​​death and fire...

The name "Pig's Knuckle" is too strong in the second dimension.

The first one was written in a way that discouraged people from giving up.

When writing Zhutianwen, the author should write about the world that is well known to Chinese people. Many Japanese animations are very popular but many Chinese people don't watch them. He should write about one person, Super God, Armor series, 567, Conan, Chinese boy, Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit, Gu Long, Wen series. Don't write about Jin Yong, who has been written badly, Shenzhou Qixia, the new book Dragon Tiger Gate, bad people, try not to have too high a force value, otherwise it will easily end. These are suggestions.