The Most Beautiful Beauty in Football

Are you planning not to write about China at all? Since you want fan numbers, the protagonist has the ability, the appearance is from Real Madrid and Manchester United, and you can just register an account in China and have tens of millions of fans. Isn't this suppressing the protagonist?

Did the author want to crush the pig's feet or for some other reason? Pig's Feet needs fans and people's attention on the Internet to redeem skills! You can definitely do some sexy stuff off the court... If you don't do some gossip outside the court, why would the tabloids come to tease you every day?

The strong sense of fragmentation lies in the mismatch between the protagonist and the system. A silly boy who only knows how to practice hard is paired with an Internet celebrity system. It makes people feel uncomfortable. If you can't write about Internet celebrity players, why not change to the Liver Emperor system? With this protagonist, wouldn't it be a perfect fit?

In this system, with such good looks, he trains like a bird every day, and gets some gossip every day. He is still at Real Madrid and Manchester United, and the entire domestic account is invincible right from the start, and he still trains there every day to attract people. I don't understand.

Great beauty? Bronze? It can only be said that if you are masculine, you must be feminine if you are beautiful in your prime, otherwise you will be a sunny boy.

I came here based on the title and introduction. The idea is really good, but the reading experience is very fragmented! Your system is obviously rigged and does not match your stable protagonist. It seems very contradictory. What a pity this idea.

Author, what's the matter with you? You rent a yacht and go fishing? ! There aren't even any young models or stars, so what use do you need such great beauty and legs that can slide out of the third bar? ! ? !

It's a bit embarrassing and I look confused! Confused!

Author, your writing gives me a headache! The first two words of every paragraph you write are almost always cause and effect words, because, so, then, and, that is to say! Wait wait wait! Didn't your Chinese teacher correct this habit of yours?

The idea is right, the character is wrong. Everyone thinks that the protagonist is the marketing king and plays off the court. But the protagonist really has zero scandals and is training steadily, so what is the significance of this traffic system? Is it just a matter of keeping gold?

What is originally a good football article must add metaphysics to it. If you can't write funny and interesting stories, and if you don't have the ability to express yourself in words, just write about passionate football honestly, and don't eat what you can't eat. Write more about hard work and hard work, portray the characters well, write about the game well, be able to write with a good word count and still have a feel for it. This is relatively simple, and there are many football articles for reference. Don't just think about innovative ideas. First, you must have the ability to express yourself in words. If two people tell a joke, one may be funny and the other may be boring. Expression skills are more important than creativity. Let's write the story first and practice the traditional writing method first.

The setting is very interesting, and the writing is almost interesting.

I almost didn't mean it. Keep going. It's okay.

After the White Demon's skill was passively triggered in the first game, he became invisible in subsequent games. The triggering efficiency was too low. I suspect the author forgot...

It was okay at first, but the mysterious talent in the middle gave me a toothache just looking at it.

There is a little less passion, but the idea is good. If you polish it more, you can make a living as a novel.

To be honest, I saw this setting at the beginning, but it was not reflected later. Can I write more about the interaction with fans in this aspect, such as live broadcast to increase fans?

Haha

In Chapter 46, Lukaku actually played. Wasn't he injured? Obviously writing without care

This lineup is not right either. Ibrahimovic in the first season, Lukaku in the second season, and Matic. Carrick starts every game? As for Herrera, this timeline doesn't even match up.