Under One Person, Start by Practicing the Method of Covering the Sky

I almost felt sick.

The author is Xiaobai, who didn't read the original work thoroughly, so he called Zuo Ruotong Mr. Kanglong! The title of Mr. Kang Long is a slander against Zuo Ruotong. Zuo Ruotong knew that the three levels of rebirth could not reach the sky, and all his life's pursuits were in vain, so he took the initiative to seek death. He was slandered because he had a bad temper and was angered to death by Li Muxuan and Wugen. Being dubbed Mr. Kang Long! There was also the unpleasant acceptance of Li Muxuan because he wanted to become his master but was dishonest to him and put on a mask to act in front of his master! Can this be accepted? If you are not sincere to your master and you are not sincere to yourself, you will have problems in your practice. Moreover, the third level of rebirth is a very important method of xinxing. If you are not sincere to yourself, you will easily go crazy.

Originally the idea was quite good, but the way it was written... It was a lame excuse to create a conflict plot by forcibly deintelligating the decent characters in the original work... The book cannot be said to be useless at this point, and it is also unreadable. It would have been better if you had written like this in the past few years, but these days...

The ability to practice in the world of Zhe Tian was done by Emperor Huang Tian. You are not in the same world, and then the world of the Sea of ​​​​Bitterness is different. Can the species be the same? It is similar to genetic testing. There is an 80% probability that the people on earth have reached it. If half of them have not reached it, they are not considered a species.

I haven't read the book, I just passed by and made some suggestions. Can you change the title? This title makes people feel like they'll eat shit if they click on it. I clicked on it several times and didn't dare to read it.

I can only comment on your novel this way. Say you are a primary school student, I would say you are a future great writer or novelist. If you are a high school student, I would say you have a bright future. If you are a college student, I will tell you to study hard and make progress every day. If you are an adult, I advise you to find a class, otherwise I am afraid you will starve to death. 😐😐

To be honest, it is better to practice the method of covering the sky in one person's world than to practice the method of deep space and the method of respecting one life. After all, there is an inner scene.

I understand that the protagonist, a time-traveler, has a crush on some people, but can you please stop being too fond of them? There is no difference between him and You Tanzhi.

From the moment the protagonist started to use the vest, he became ruthless. It was obviously very interesting to cover the sky in the Republic of China. Now I feel like I am ready to pull a big mess 😒

I found a dog-licking author, come and take a look

You can't raise a real dragon by diving, and the method of covering the sky requires too much divine source. Even if you open up the sea of ​​​​bitterness without the assistance of genius earth treasures, it will basically not be successful. And you must have a special physique. Mortals cannot practice the method of covering the sky

Dy came here after listening to the book. If you survived the first eight chapters, you can read it. But this is the result? ? ? The subsequent development is too similar to the early online novels, forcibly creating conflicts and reducing intelligence.

It has been laying the groundwork for the War of Resistance, but in the end it was briefly touched upon!

The idea is pretty good, but not much else.

The method of covering the sky is a method that can achieve the quasi-immortal emperor, but it cannot break through the immortal emperor level, and the sacrificial mirror above the immortal emperor or even any martial arts avenue are of no use to it, and if it is played with the vision of an ordinary cultivator, then it can only be an immortal king at best. The rest is forced brainstorming and forced strengthening of yy.

Xiao Chunan, falling out of love is not the reason for you to write without a heroine. Go and ring a double bell, call a few more, and lose your virginity. Then you will know how good it is to have more heroines.

Exploded, really exploded! The latest news from one-person comics, Duan Muying has been reduced to a fertility machine, Grandpa Lu Liang is the heir of Duan Muying, Qu Tong has been Duan Muying's maid and has lived for decades, it has been confirmed that she has both hands! ! !

There is only one drawback, otherwise I would have to book ten monthly passes. The protagonist feels like a fool. Don't blindly shape the character of the protagonist. It's natural and normal. It can be good or bad. But the fool really can't stand it.