I Just Want to Kill the Mastermind Behind It

The current conflict and sense of urgency are well designed. When the protagonist doesn't know how to win, it gives the protagonist a way out that he doesn't know but may naturally take. But I still want to see the protagonist win this game in another unexpected way. As for the following plot, if it is always so urgent, it may be easy to get bored, just like the early stage of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, most of the chapters are about fighting each other and eating people. However, the background setting of this book seems to be like people cannibalizing people. All kinds of inferiors only have a sense of class distinction through spiritual practice. At present, there are too many ancient fantasy genres with this background. Just like when writing about Naruto, one must write about the conspiracy theory of the third generation, Yanyanai, bloodline and advanced Otsutsuki.

Rumor has it that the big guys who write fanfics have recently collectively changed their original works because they want the rights to adapt anime and other similar original works. But this book, to put it mildly, is like a beggar who has just eaten three large steamed buns and is worried about high blood fat. The author must have a certain status and reputation in the Naruto fandom, or even within the fandom. But when you enter the original Xianxia, ​​your opponents will change from a group of fans of the original work to someone who has forgotten everything. The author's previous novels must have been huge sellers. The core competitiveness is the comedy of the plot collapse and the sense of satisfaction that the protagonist is not a human being. But this novel, first of all, has neither of these two points, and the storyline that appears in an original way is a replica of Naruto. Original novel has no personal style, nor is it too original. The most important thing is that it is too boring. I can also understand that the author must have his own pride, thinking that he has great control over the writing and plot, and that he can sell well without the routine of writing fan fiction. Then, let's use Faker's words in the S14 semi-finals: If you think you can succeed by writing this way, you should prove it to the readers first.

Parents who are born and die, there are strange beasts in the body, I understand, the protagonist is Uzumaki Naruto, this is a Naruto fanfic 🙂

Isn't it good to write about Naruto? There are so many old readers, there is less competition, editors are familiar with the process and it is simple. Original creation is time-consuming and labor-intensive, and the competition pressure is still high.

You may have to rush into the market. If the originality is not interesting, it will be difficult to attract readers.

I've been waiting for you for so long, I thought you were going to have a big one, but I didn't expect you to hold back a big one.

I almost felt it in my heart. I happened to remember that I had a lot of ink today. I came over to take a look. I have opened a new book 🤓

It's okay. Cut it off when it's time to cut it off. It's better to cut it off early than to cut it off again when you can't continue writing.

If it's a big deal, it's just a eunuch. The editor is probably confused.

It's so cool. I just saw a new book recommendation for an old book. There was a long paragraph of parallel sentences describing the new book. It made my blood boil. I quickly jumped to the new book. As soon as I came in, I saw the table of contents: Chapter 39 (completed) I couldn't stand it 😂

The author should hurry up and write about Naruto, there is nothing left to read! Do you guys have any recommendations for good Naruto-themed novels? No limit to platform, except stove

Every fan author has an original dream

Let's just write about Naruto, innovation is absolutely perfect

It's actually original. I'll give it a try first to see if it will kill me. Also, I think the wizard's book is pretty good.

It's better to continue writing the Harry Potter book... That book's data is not bad

It's less than 100,000 words, and after reading more than half of it, my biggest feeling is that the characters are very thin. . The character design has not yet been established, but in the course of the story, various "natural" things are said, which seems very strange. For example, Xu Shaobai? Is this person actually a lunatic? I don't understand the purpose of this person's existence (meaning that he seems to have no need to exist, whether it is to promote the progress of the story, the character's own purpose, or his relationship with the protagonist)… and that important role in the role of care, whether it is dialogue, the protagonist's feelings for him, or his actions, gives the impression of various inconsistencies. In other words, it is as if he is jumping around in a bunch of ideas, one after another. The image was also deliberately written from the beginning to look like he was sometimes manipulating the behind the scenes and sometimes just a pawn behind the scenes. When you look at it, you don't know what to expect this person to do next. A fu who seems to be good at everything and yet seems to be bad at nothing. Although many other characters appeared, none of them left a lasting impression. The author's Naruto is so beautiful, and the Hogwarts book is also beautiful. I feel like he really knows how to catch people's attention. Don't you really think there is something wrong with the way this book is written?

To be honest, it seems quite meaningless. The mastermind behind the scenes is so powerful, why do they condone you, and it is still under your nose, and you have no ability to break the situation, pointing to the unclear meaning of your parents' favors? Is the writing too empty, or does it just rely on the strange beasts of the mountains and seas that the young master requested? Just rely on the strange beasts of the mountains and seas that have not been upgraded to the four realms so they can't be taken out? Wouldn't it be possible to directly initiate him?

If you are good at writing about the behind-the-scenes mastermind, then continue writing about the mastermind behind-the-scenes and the protagonist. It's not like non-fans cannot know the plot. For example, if you make up a game and then the protagonist travels into the early stages of the game and becomes a minor villain, this kind of book is not something that can be written in large quantities. Besides, the author's previous books were a bit unfinished. After the protagonist becomes stronger and enters the second world, he has to follow the low-power plot in the early stage, playing for the sake of playing. To put it bluntly, if you have a foundation of the original world view and don't follow the plot, you don't know how to write. This level is still far from writing an excellent original. If you are still the same person next time, I would like to make a suggestion. When you start the infinite flow to the next world, use methods such as "delivering a low-cultivation clone"/"a trace of true spirit to seize the body". Except for golden fingers, don't bring too many cultivation levels or subordinates. Otherwise, it would be really hard for the protagonist to have the power to move the world but spend so much time trying to outsmart a few ant villains.

To put it bluntly, historical novels are a different kind of fanfiction. They all have "original works" that are historical materials for reference. There are timelines, major events, and characters. They are all ready-made things that do not require the author to create them. If you really want to transform, other partitions are too bulky and too selective for readers, so they are not suitable.

After working as a worker, you can't write a serious book about Naruto! ! !

I'm not a buddy. I did an experiment and didn't read it for a few days. I'll finish it when I get back. It's finished at the speed of light.

Original? ? ? It will feel the same as Purple Pig.

If you don't write about fan fiction, you can't be original. You still don't know what your strength is?

I think it's quite good-looking. Why are there so many people who are not satisfied and keep criticizing the author? At least it's not history like other defenses. Besides, is it easy for the author to type so many words so hard?

You know, it's best for fan authors to write fan fiction, and they have to be original.

Lord Naraku, please come back soon. This author actually wants to abandon our ideals. Almighty Lord Naraku, I beg you to severely punish this unjust person.

The group exploded😭😭The spiritual food was gone😭😢😢

Strange, why did it suddenly die after being raised?

I suggest you stop writing about Naruto 🙂 Wouldn't it be better to try One Piece and Hunter?