Simultaneous Time Travel: I Am Eating Melons in the Heavens

The following is purely personal opinion. I see that you have been emphasizing that you are a novice author in the comment area. If you are a complete novice, then don't write too complicated. It is a magical animation and a real-person technology. The most attractive thing in your introduction is Hayao Miyazaki. You should write more about Miyazaki Hayao movies and pair them with some fairy tale world magical movies. Movies, TV series, games, etc., Such as Harry Potter, Jackie Chan's Adventures, League of Legends, Game of Thrones, etc., Are easier to write. Don't write hard science and technology articles like The Wandering Earth. You don't have to climb the technology tree to write a woolen technology world. You have to match the world around your own attractive points. I hope the author will get better as he writes.

Obviously you wrote Hayao Miyazaki's part and got it done in the early stage, but you simply passed it over and then wrote "The Wandering Earth" without any plot at all.

Seeing 25 is really unbearable. Something even more disgusting than Tang Shenwang has appeared, Cai! In the previous one, you still sympathized with the unfairness of the world, and no matter what you did, a living saint would have to deduct merit from you. In the last chapter, I felt uneasy because my loved ones wanted to go through the back door. Absolutely, I have to give the author a thumbs up for being such a bitch. By the way, the protagonist can only cooperate with the official. The eldest brother and sister-in-law are relatives and take care of him. In this case, the original text is: "A lot of convenience has been given, and the official will not turn a blind eye if the interests involved are too large." The protagonist's apocalyptic environment is a hand-made ecology, and this is just a few fragments connected. As I write this, I have no doubt that even if a mythical emperor met an emperor of a mortal dynasty, he would bow down and salute first. It's amazing, you can find everything online.

It's on the shelves. Why do you think readers are here? You don't have the flavor of Hal behind you. I don't know League of Legends, King of Kings, etc., But the style is obviously wrong.

I don't know why, I just feel uncomfortable looking at it 😒

Hayao Miyazaki's anime is really good

Let me just say one thing: Whoever writes the same thing will die. It's impossible to watch a movie without a main character who has a hammer in one thing and a stick in the other. I suggest that if you want to write a story about cross-dressing, you should fixate on one main character.

There was no DNF for calling Luke

Jumping too fast, Valoran is too short, and Howl's Moving Castle is too long.

Haha, you can end lol for any reason. Not many people are better now.

At least wait until chapter 300 before it ends!

This novel does not have the traditional opening of a sea of ​​death and fire. It appears mainly because of the excellent films that the author has watched over the years. There are regrets and imagination. I want to make up for these regrets through my own ideas and write them out freely. 99 is the first book to write about the Hayao Miyazaki universe, and the first to write about the LOL universe. There will be many firsts in the future. The plot design is not good enough, and it is not enough to grasp it. This is the limit of my personal ability, but I hope it can also serve as a starting point.

The subject matter is pretty good, but it jumps too fast.

{"NickName":"The man in the middle","UserId":337856099} What can I say, anyone who writes about the wandering earth is so desperate that it violates the laws of nature and the nature of the story

Luke can do a dungeon

This type of novel is very novel, 1 Hayao Miyazaki's animation world is very grand Come on

I have a question, will shared memory be shared with astringent memories? Can the astringent memories be turned into Mewtwo in the cyber world and then shared in space...

Look at this tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk-tsk.

Should Jackie Chan's Adventures be changed to me and Valon running for A-Mei's presidency? That would be more fun.

I have played League of Legends several times and basically played Honor of Kings. The computer is too troublesome.

Give the author an idea. Now that Nezha Er and Sun Wukong are so popular, Black Monkey should have finished writing. In the next world, Luke can use the magic of Black Mythology to go to Nezha World. Transform into a monkey and go to the Dragon Palace to get the golden cudgel. Refer to the original work of Journey to the West and the Nezha movie. When you pick up the stick, add two classical Chinese sentences to determine whether it will be popular.

I can't understand it. I've never watched the anime. I'm confused.

Why don't you update it? It's so beautiful.