Foggy Night

Author, listen to me, you can't grasp this name

The perception of the last few pictures has plummeted. Originally, the monster killing and upgrading were well written. Suddenly there is a causal fatalism (so far it seems like this). Not interesting.

It's not that it can't be done🚫, it's mainly because I personally think it's a bit of a show. When I see this name, I think of Xianzun 😁

It should be that old salesman came out to create a karma and reincarnation, and many people stopped reading it, and then the author cut it off?

I still can't figure out what kind of fate and karma stuff I'm doing in my spare time, which directly lowers Goldfinger's quality. The protagonist is essentially an ordinary person who got a golden finger. If someone had predicted in advance that the protagonist would get the golden finger, he would have no way to deal with whatever he wanted to do and calculate. In the end, we can only apply hot patches, which either strengthen the cheat finger or weaken the prediction ability.

I hope I can surpass Get Out and become the new leading brother.

The rhythm of sending is already a bit broken.

It was good at the beginning, but the appearance of the salesman immediately lowered it a few levels. It's not about this profession, but because your foreshadowing is too obvious, there is no sense of expectation, and the upper limit is vague.

What fate and inevitability are there after seeing these latest chapters. It feels like it's already hanging. To be honest, 99.99% Of current authors simply can't write this kind of thing well.

I joined the post office in one fell swoop and it felt pretty good. However, as soon as I started pursuing it, I became more fatalistic and thoughtless and pretended to be cool...

666, A little sad and a little angry. _ I said, why are these photos so cool recently? You, meow, just won't update anymore. . . . . . . . . . .

It really seemed like, especially the first 5 pages, I thought it was a desperate night.

What level is the protagonist? People who live in a precarious situation still despise martial arts schools for being a bad street 😅

I've read so many books Once the plot starts to get confusing, I'm confused and can't understand it. Most of the time I started writing randomly. In the end, I either sent it directly or spliced ​​various maps to extend the plot. I finished the book quickly after I couldn't hold it anymore.

It's very interesting to see before entering the town, but once you enter the town, you feel that the food is tasteless and it's a pity to abandon it.

How do two candles turn into lanterns?

Speaking of which, I seem to have read almost seventy chapters, and the fight with the pseudo-professionals at night was a bit exciting, and then I kept throwing away the setting and trying to develop. In fact, it would be better to write more about the synthesis of the male protagonist, or maybe the fights would be more fun to write, without always looking like a running account... Obviously the first ten chapters are quite attractive.

It seems that I still can't stand it, eunuch.

It's been very bad recently. There is no progress in the plot, and there is also fatalism. The expectation for the unknown is gone in a short time. It's a pity.

When writing this type of enhanced novel, you cannot write about martial arts, because once you start with martial arts, you have to write about various fights, various martial arts, and fighting scenes. The subsequent strengthening methods also have to turn to strengthening martial arts skills, fighting skills, and natural and earthly treasures. Directly put the strengthening into This omnipotent element is constrained in martial arts It's like a train. If you fix the potential track, it won't be easy to turn. Despair Dark Night only dares to write about simple combat strengthening and body strengthening. You can just come up with a martial arts system. If you take too big a step, it's nonsense.