Football: I'm Only 16, and You Want Me to Retire and Come Back?

Among the midfielders I have watched personally, I think: Li Kang's "Destructive Midfielder" > Su Ke's "All-round Center" > Zhou Yi's "Champion's Heart" > Tang Ye's "This Book", the specific ages of the protagonists are not much different Li Kang: 17 years old (Leverkusen, 1 million euros), Bundesliga champion 🥇, Champions League semi-finals, European Cup champion 🥇 18 years old (Arsenal, 200 million euros), Premier League champion🥇, Champions League champion🥇, FA Cup champion🥇 19 years old (Chelsea, 250 million euros), Premier League champion🥇, Champions League champion🥇, FA Cup champion🥇, World Cup champion🥇 Zhouyi: 18 years old (Dortmund), Bundesliga champion 🥇, German Cup champion 🥇, Champions League quarter-finals 19 years old (Dortmund), Bundesliga champion 🥇, German Cup champion 🥇, Champions League champion 🥇 20 years old (Dortmund), Bundesliga champion 🥇, German Cup champion 🥇, Champions League champion 🥇, World Cup semi-finals 18 years old (AC Milan, 30 million euros), Serie A champion🥇, Champions League champion🥇 19 years old (AC Milan), Serie A champion🥇, Champions League champion🥇 20 years old (Real Madrid, 100 million euros), La Liga champion🥇, Champions League semi-finals, World Cup third place🥉 21 years old (Real Madrid), La Liga champion🥇, Champions League champion🥇 Tang Ye: 17 years old (Utrecht), Eredivisie champion🥇, Dutch Cup champion🥇 19 years old (Manchester United), second in the Premier League 🥈, FA Cup champion 🥇, League Cup champion 🥇, World Cup top 16   20 years old (Manchester United), Premier League champion 🥇, Asian Cup champion 🥇, FA Cup champion 🥇, Champions League quarter-finals

There has to be a reason for showing off, right? How could a 17-year-old boy behave badly for no reason? Since you play football, it means you like it, but if you like something, you will mess it up for no reason. The body's hormones don't allow it, either. Young people are always full of energy.

You can't lose the fire. If you have a broken system, it's fine. Isn't the problem? And then you start to mess up at the age of 16. What kind of athlete do you think you are?

I would like to ask if the protagonist of this book really takes the national football team to the quarterfinals of the World Cup. I really feel that even if the protagonist is the best in football, he will barely make it to the World Cup at best.

Those who have never eaten shit can read this book.

For the sake of a low word count and poor money, I forced myself to suppress the main character's strength and destroy the logic of the novel without even trying. Each chapter was too expensive, so I gave up!

It gives me the feeling that Tenhahe is the protagonist. The protagonist of the novel is just a marionette in the opponent's hands, or in other words, a silly and cute dog

There are currently 1.62 Million words, can it still be called the early stage? Let me ask you, the author, with the way you write more than 500,000 words per season, now is the time to produce results. If you keep writing like this, do you want to win the Champions League next season? That's more than two million words. The protagonist wins his first Champions League at the age of 20. Then I would like to ask you how many words you plan to write in this book? How many words should you write during the golden period from 20 to 27? Can your outline really last you this long? Or can you still suppress the strengthened protagonist after winning the Champions League? Then everything takes off, how much more content can you write? In the structure of this book, doesn't it seem like you're in front of something? The content of your growth period should be compressed within 1 million. Normally, 1.2 To 1.5 Million words will produce results at this time (UEFA Champions League, World Cup), and it will be delayed to 2 million words. Your protagonist is 2 million words when he is 20 years old. If not, I'll book it all. (Except for that kind of AI writing and meaningless content)

Yes, I used a template, and then succeeded, and then I continued to use it over and over again. The strength was all there. I treated other people as fools. According to the level of the protagonist he wrote, he treated the people in the novel as fools. I couldn't tell. Then he treated the readers as fools. It's not like he couldn't write well and his ideas were OK, but he fell into a devilish obstacle. Compared with the one who carries a knife on a rainy night and writes about behind-the-scenes stories, when readers read the novel, they bring their perspective into the protagonist, not into you. If you delete comments like this, isn't that just purification? Dog training? The Galaxy Market where you write novels, you can't be disgusting. I guess your editor told you not to listen to the readers' opinions. Write according to your own ideas. I can screw it. Tell me, which opinion of mine was random? When I read a novel, I am introduced to the protagonist. Am I introduced to Ten Hahe? You keep writing about Ten Ha He Ten Ha He. Do you think I enjoy reading it? Are you the kind of slow writer? You are a novice Shuangwen system writer. You make it seem like everything the protagonist has is Ten Ha He Ten Ha He. I can only say it is poisonous.

This book was quite interesting at the beginning, but to be honest, it is easy to get tired of reading, fall behind, have troubles with homework, and even lose a game that was originally a draw but lost after the protagonist. This is what a book that was originally very enjoyable and a bit funny has to do. I also said in the paragraph review that this is a cool article. The basic requirement of a cool article should be that it is better than reality. Otherwise, why do you write a cool article? Don't be a literary youth. My friend, do you really think what you write is so reasonable or logical. Also, does the author have any obsession with Manchester United or Tenghai? He must finish writing with Tenghai in the Eredivisie before continuing writing in the Premier League. In the middle, La Liga is almost described as another Eredivisie, and the head coach is described as an idiot. Can you not underestimate others so much? In short, I can only describe this book in two words: tasteless.