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I'm really speechless. The writing could be a little more fucking embarrassing.

There is a problem in the first chapter of Speechless. The first time Zhang Chulan was attacked in the mountains, the second time was in a hotel near the school and she was taken away with almost no resistance. Where did the scene of a group of zombies chasing her to the beach come from? Moreover, those zombies only have the athletic ability of ordinary people. Can the protagonist be knocked unconscious without resistance?

The protagonist has a bad mouth and a low IQ

Since Xia He's second attack, I can no longer watch it.

The protagonist of a good clown... He was poisoned in the first three pictures... He lay on the ground pretending to be comatose and said he didn't want to attract attention, but after he said it, he immediately practiced the Vajra Indestructibility to attract everyone's attention... Later he said he wanted to survive, but he immediately called out Feng Baobao's name to pretend to be mysterious... There is a serious personality conflict in one chapter, just like a severe psychopath...

Why do so many people like to join Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba and become servants and worship the devil lord?

Is this written by a level 4 author? Why does it feel like it was written by a novice? I feel like I want to write it well but the things I added at the end make it look different.

Look! Various dangers threatened the protagonist's death, but in the end, the protagonist didn't kill anyone! !

Have you sold your account? Don't you feel like a level 4 author?

The sentences are particularly awkward, and it feels like they were written by AI.

Shen Nong finished reading The protagonist was speechless. IQ is low. I also like green, especially self-green

I read the first two volumes of the last book. If this book had followed the first two volumes of the previous book, I would have read it, but with this subject matter, I can only wait for the next book. This kind of book is difficult to write. It involves too many extraordinary systems and is too complex. In addition, other novels in the introduction are even more difficult to write. It's so confusing to read the introduction. I saw a question before, who is more powerful, Cthulhu or the Lord God? My answer is Cthulhu's home ground, the Lord God is a mask, and the Lord God's home court, Cthulhu is a monster. The writing is so in-depth that I am worried that the author really understands the worldviews given in the examples? Let me give you a simple example. Does the author know that Hogwarts is a magical world view? Is Naruto a science fiction worldview? Why I say these two is because Hogwarts is about idealism, the heart affects magic, and magic is the source rather than power. Naruto is science fiction, and what is fought for is the alien inheritance, and the inheritance is countless. If in the world of Hogwarts, the character's magic power remains the same despite the change of heart, in the world of Naruto, because the protagonist has an extra legacy... Also, there is no book with this system that will not collapse. My suggestion is that the author chooses the one he is most familiar with. There was an urban novel written by an author before, but he was scolded as a licker. The latter book was revised and the results were not bad. I was afraid that the author would write about an unfamiliar worldview.

Does the author have Journey to the West, Honkai Impact III, Beng Tie, and Universe Star God?

Actually, I'm a little surprised. When it comes to physical training with the talent of Yuanqi Affinity, I think it would be better if he can practice martial arts similar to Qigong or not.

If the protagonist doesn't have a high IQ, don't pretend to be smart.

The protagonist wants to be sliced ​​up, right? You reveal the information as soon as you have the ability, and you still need a golden light spell? ? ? Aren't you afraid that Heavenly Master will give you a try? I stopped watching when I saw the exchange of golden light spells.

Let's go back to writing film and television novels!

If the combat power is not good, what Harry Potter insists on saying is closer to a fairy tale. As we all know, the combat power in fairy tales is unreasonable, so the combat power in it is sometimes very exaggerated. For example, travel through time, or the stage play Voldemort rules the world.

The "mana" or "magic power" of HP is completely different from what normal people think. It refers to the intensity and proficiency of a wizard's use of magic spells. To use a gun analogy, it is "caliber" and "rate of fire." The "magazine capacity" has never been considered, let alone the magic value. These wizards don't even have the concept of "magic power". The spells have always been divided into difficulty levels, and there is no such thing as consumption.