CS2: I Am the Butcher on the Field

I can't accept it. It took one year for Donk to complete the journey that Niko would never complete in his lifetime😭😭😭

It feels like the writing is too flat, and the description of the game is almost entirely from a third-person perspective. The protagonist himself has basically no sense of involvement except in daily life, and even the description scenes of his teammates combined are more than the protagonist. The sense of participation was surprisingly low, and there was no emotional ups and downs at all during the game.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Update may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

Is there too much live broadcast commentary? There is basically no first-person perspective of the protagonist during the game.

The angle of view is very strange, and there is no climax at all. In one word, it is dry, numb, and not round at all.

Once the update is over, I will let you fly! 🔨

Why are they all from the commentary perspective? This commentary is not very good. Please use more of the main perspective. What you are writing about is a professional player, not a commentary!

You didn't say which anchor it was at the beginning. It would be okay if you used a realistic anchor commentary to corroborate the protagonist's performance in the first battle. It's not good to have an anchor commentary that everyone can't understand and the writing is not exceptionally brilliant.

The first monthly ticket in 25 years 😁 Give me a quickie, I advise you not to be ungrateful 😁

Mr. Ni fell again🙂

Is it directly in 2023? Then I have to write it very slowly. If there are no competitions later, I won't just stop updating it.

Come on author

This book won't be all about explanatory perspectives, right?