Facts Aside, Do I Really Like You?

The writing is actually quite good, and the text is very comfortable to read, but the author didn't understand the focus and classification of the story at all! It took me a long time to write the first chapter of the novel about the protagonist. I was in arrears with rent and didn't want to join the factory. I gritted my teeth and wanted to join the factory, but I was hit by luck and was reborn. What next? Your beginning is a repressed emotion. Generally, the plot of the repressed match is that the protagonist is reborn and decides to change everything. As Yang, instead of putting it aside as if nothing happened! The way you write it is as if the protagonist was slapped hard, and then the author forgot about the slap and didn't care at all. Who wouldn't like this? What you start with should be the opening of an urban rebirth novel, not the opening of a love routine When you write a love routine, you must start with the protagonist and Bai Yueguang's emotions as the center. You must first write about the protagonist's thoughts about Bai Yueguang. Why is there another reborn person in the second chapter who explains how he died? The logic is broken! What on earth is your protagonist planning to do? You haven't explained it at all, so you can only say that you are a useless protagonist.