
Movies and TV Shows: Starting from a Home in an Alley
影视:从小巷人家开始
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- 420k Words
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- Male
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- Myriad Worlds
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- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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In fact, I admire Li Jia very much in the play. She has indeed achieved the best that her family can do. He relies on others but works hard, likes Tunan but knows how to give up, dares to seize opportunities but can also put down his face. I don't like the utilitarian nature of this character but I have to appreciate her authenticity. We like the purity of Dongzhe and Xiaoting's love, but disdain the pros and cons of Tunan and Li Jia. In fact, it is because we long for the former, but always the latter... And among the latter, Li Jia is already the most suitable person despite being naughty.
I came across this book by chance and read the latest chapter. The writing is really good. The writing style is not exaggerated and seems real. And so far, there are no poisonous points. The three views are also very positive. What the protagonist does is also reasonable and unshakable. It is really good.
If you want to write it well, you can't follow the original plot.
After reading Alley People, I wanted to read a fanfic, and I found that everyone said it was good for this book, and I didn't read the others, but after seeing the 10 chapters on the shelves, I thought the quality was okay But in the past two days, I feel that the quality has declined. The writing style and grasp of the original characters are still online, but I feel that it is missing the core point of the online novel, the sense of satisfaction, and the key points of writing a fanfic, which is to deal with those plots in the original work that make readers sad, sad, and unhappy. This book can be divided into three parts so far The first part is the initial stage of transformation of Zhuang Chaoying's thoughts. This part still has some unpleasant plots in the original work, but the plot has just unfolded, and it is acceptable, and the length of each thing is not long, and there are some refreshing points later The second part, Xiaozhuang went to mark the papers, this part is pure and refreshing The third part, when Xiaozhuang comes back and goes to Zhuang's father's house, is really unbearable. It stretches out the short-running contradictions between the original work and the TV series, and turns the back and forth between Huang Ling and Zhuang's father and Zhuang's mother into a story where the protagonist is unilaterally being annoyed and enjoying it, thinking that he has the upper hand. It makes me feel like I'm watching a novelization of a domestically produced bloody TV series. I think the main reason why this part of the plot was not handled well is that the protagonist occupied Huang Ling's output position. Huang Ling is not a weak person here, otherwise she would not have gotten back two-thirds of the people. As an adult and a financially independent person, Huang Ling can be in an equal position. Position to have a dialogue and fight, and the protagonist is only 11 years old and has not yet reached the rebellious stage. There is no way to directly resist the father and mother of Zhuang. At this time, to face these contradictions, we can only add some chocolate powder to the shit of the original plot to make the protagonist seem to have won, but the final result is not as good as the original plot.
The writing is very good and I hope it can keep up. It is rare to see people who treat the plot characters with a normal heart without too many personal likes and dislikes. What they say and do is in line with the social customs of the plot era. It does not deliberately intensify family conflicts but silently changes the "filial son" and makes him change for the better 👍👍👍
What did Suzhou people bring when they went to visit relatives in other places in the 1970s?
It is usually date paste sesame cake, and the traditional packaging is a cardboard drum with a lid. The most lively and prosperous place in the center of Suzhou is Guanqian Street. At that time, it was free to enter Xuanmiao Temple. My aunt's house is just outside the alleyway on Guanqian Street. When my little cousin was a child, the nanny at home would often take him to Xuanmiao Temple and sit on the doorstep with him in his arms to watch the excitement. My aunt was very angry and funny when she mentioned it. Generally when visiting relatives, the specialties brought with them, such as Huang Tianyuan's pastries, Caizhizhai's sesame thin crust, shrimp roe soy sauce, pine nut rice dumpling candy, halva and other snacks, are difficult to buy in other places. The book said that Huang Ling's father knew how to cook, so buying two bottles of shrimp roe soy sauce was indispensable. As for things that can be found in Changzhou, there is no need to bring them all the way there. Suggestions based on my own life experience back then.
Break up Tunan and Li Jia
Li Jia is the male version of Zhuang Chaoying, who took out a loan to buy a house before marriage. Don't jump into the pit.
I am here to speculate that if this TV series continues to explode🔥, in the next two years Qidian Novel will probably have a large number of fan fiction about people living in alleys, just like there were a large number of fan novels about people living in alleys on novel websites in the past few years.
It's a pity, the previous writing was quite good, but suddenly the divorce broke away from the plot and moved away from the place where the story took place. I was far away from the neighbors and found that there was nothing to write about, right? The protagonist himself does not have an architect plot, and many subsequent characters cannot appear. It seems that the author has never come back.
Author, if you don't like this, just put aside the original drama and directly transform into period entertainment. You can't continue writing about the original drama, so you might as well just throw it away. The foundation of this book is still very good.
Only a female author who is full of tea can write such interesting plot dialogues!
Tomatoes are all the same
Brainless rants, blaming the sky and the earth, blaming the air, see what's the difference in this book
The author probably has not experienced life in Suzhou before the 1970s and 1980s.
From one detail, it can be seen that the author did not live in an era when ordinary people in Suzhou did not have bathrooms. At that time, people in Suzhou used toilets at home, so it was a routine for women in that era to go to public toilets every day to empty and brush the toilets. They usually brushed and dried the toilets in the early morning before going to work, and then took them home for home use. Some people have two in rotation. There are also people who pay two yuan a month out of their wallets to clean the old lady who specializes in cleaning toilets. Most people's homes are small and the toilet is placed in a hidden place behind the bed. Some more sophisticated people have a toilet room specifically for the toilet. Close the lid after use and there is almost no odor.
Can Tunan stop talking about himself so much? It feels so weird that Tunan talks about it all the time.
Wait a minute, did the author forget that there is another system 😰
I hope I won't be the chess king in the Children's Palace again and grow up quickly. I feel like there's nothing to write about now. I'll take a look after I go to college.
It's not like you just have to write about people in alleys, you're writing about astronomy. If not, speed up. Accelerate directly to adulthood.
It's so well written. Divorce is so enjoyable to watch. Come on, author!
It's a pity, actually it's good to write it like this
Are there any other good similar texts? This book is a pity. Reading books now is really like digging for gold.