Hogwarts: It's Broken, I've Become the Devil!

I have been planning to enter Hogwarts since Chapter 1, but I haven't seen any sign of Hogwarts until Chapter 43.

Damn it, I was deceived by the cover

You have a big problem with the pacing of your narrative. There is no big problem with reading it in one go. After reading the content for a day, the update is lonely. The latest two chapters almost do not advance the plot at all. It seems that the three monthly passes are a loss.

The writing is very good, but the plot progress is too slow?

Call the system weak, but it can create something out of nothing. Call the system strong, but it can't solve the curse.

It's awesome, it's silently cold.

At present, 1-45 has not entered the original line, but it is well written and will make people want to continue reading. It depends on whether there will be such performance after entering the original line.

Is there a female protagonist? If so, I'll run away first

The writing is very good, the slow plot and imaginative thinking suit me very well Come on, author

Not limited to the original plot, very thoughtful

No, are you so cold? Not long after it was released, it became a eunuch. I'm going to curse.

Harry Potter fans cut a little too much

Nice idea, looking forward to more exciting follow-up content.

Update soon ~ not enough 🤫🤫🤫

I just got into the first chapter. Didn't anyone mention the punctuation issue before? Many sentences clearly need to be separated by commas, but they use periods instead, and there are only one or two words in a sentence. In this case. It just looks weird. Always make people stop while reading. Then gasping. Because. Too many periods. I don't know the punctuation marks in the following chapters. Would it be better? If that works. I hope I can use more conjunctions.