Three Kingdoms: God General Development System

I read it and found it to be well written, but when the system customer service appeared in the book, I wanted to abandon the book every time I saw it. I don't understand the author's thoughts. What is the use of writing about the customer service of this system? Are you dating the system customer service? Or should he be a puppet of the system and guide the plot? I suggest the author think about it for himself. I feel that this is not interesting.

The vanguard force of one prince is only 5? It's still a 100% system... I gave up after reading the first chapter and have no expectations for the rest. The combat effectiveness of elite soldiers is 1-3, and the first-class generals are 90+, which is directly like the Three Kingdoms Unparalleled.

As soon as I saw that Xiaomi Xiaomi thing, I jumped straight away and it was so disgusting. I can still read the free chapters, but I probably won't read them if I pay.

The Bao family should pay attention to Cao Cao's cheating, and they must first find ways to kill Cao Cao. Historically, Bao Xin's family was cheated to death by Cao Cao, and his power was taken over by Cao Cao. Bao Xin's son was also killed by Cao Pi.

Change your name to Bob, it's catchy and pleasant to the ears.

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Take a look at the marginal characters you wrote in your profile. Are they hot topics that attract readers to watch? Do I watch the Three Kingdoms theme just to watch them?

Wu Anguo received three moves from Lu Bu and broke his arm. The one on 85 was also a small person! Not to mention General Pan Fengyizhou, there are still more than 80!

It's a very stable book. The setting in the front was originally brilliant, and the writing in the back was also very stable. However, it was all dragged down by Xiaomi in the front, so no one reads it now.

Let's overhaul it. Get rid of the system dialogue or reduce it. The protagonist looks like a fool and the force value. Write it all blindly, or it will be one, two or three. Write the data more reasonably. In the outline, each character appears. Set it up first...

Anyone who spends time talking to Goldfinger is superfluous, and it's still a piece of rotten flesh. . .

The protagonist looks like a fool who only wants to rely on the system. The system is superfluous. If a normal person is reborn in the protagonist's environment, he will have already taken off. The character is directly stereotyped. Before the emperor disobeys orders, Lao Cao, who will pursue Dong Jun alone, starts off as a treacherous and loyal person.