Ipartment: I Will Talk to Yifei, and I Will Marry Nuolan!

I read it elsewhere, so I came here to comment. First of all, I like the setting of multiple heroines. The heroine is Yifei Nuolan Wanyu, and the characterization is also very good, but the problem is that it is very stiff in creating conflicts and the whole article feels very segmented Let's talk about the first point first, in terms of creating conflicts. Yifei and Zhang Wei finally reconciled and even kissed each other. However, they were speechless when Yu Mo came and announced that she already had a boyfriend. Then when Vincent came to Nuo Lan's house, he walked away without saying a word and didn't listen to a word. This kind of conflict is very deliberate and mindless Second point, regarding the heroine, the first third is completely devoted to Yifei, and then almost two-thirds of the way, Wanyu's plot begins to be added, and then Wanyu exits, and it is more than 200 chapters before Nuolan appears. Time arrangement It's too late, I don't know if it was added at the last minute Besides, there is no sugar in the relationship, basically writing about daily life, and the progress with the heroines is too slow, especially Yifei. At the end, it is obvious that it starts to speed up, and it feels like an anticlimax.

After reading Chapter 32, I feel like the protagonist has been frustrating

God, the author, the writing is really consistent. A love apartment is not suitable for a harem of powerful people. It just needs to be complicated and detailed, otherwise it will have no characteristics. The best thing is that sense of surprise, it must reflect the details. In addition, the author should not stick to things like wealth empires. For love apartments, these are the background boards. You cannot put the cart before the horse. Entrepreneurship can be reflected in life. The author writes very well. You cannot start a business for the sake of starting a business.

The author must be a woman. At the beginning of the book, I thought it was a comedy with a main focus on romance, but then I flipped through the table of contents and went straight to the middle. After reading three chapters, I was sure that it was a twisted romance with many complicated emotional lines. Using a passage from Jia Xuming and Zhang Kang's cross talk: Today he loves her, tomorrow she loves him, the day after tomorrow he doesn't love her, he loves her, and she falls in love with her former him. Later, he and her, she and him, they and her, she and her former him, gave birth to children who looked like him.

Although..., Bigamy is illegal in China. Anyone who commits the crime of bigamy shall be sentenced to fixed-term imprisonment of not more than two years or criminal detention.

Others are fine, but can you please stop calling me Weiwei, it's a bit disgusting.

Lin Wanyu

I specially ordered a chapter to comment on. I saw in the comment area that the author said that Wanyu would accept more girls. But there was a big one in chapter 32. I was shocked and stopped reading. Can anyone kindly tell me whether Wanyu will accept it later to satisfy my curiosity?

As for Wanyu and Yumo, they are the same as each other. The heroines I like are Nuolan, Yumo and Wanyu. The others don't matter...

It's great. Since there are multiple female protagonists, Wanyu is so kind and I really can't bear to make her sad, so I should accept them together, and it can also help Zhang Wei's development.

I don't think the author is a rotten girl. Why does she always write some unusual things?

It was originally a play on the original drama. In the second season, Qiao and Zhang Wei got married and kissed in front of a priest while drunk. My initial idea was to use the plot to keep this joke going, but the only thing missing was Zi Qiao. I wanted to restore the character of Zhang Wei as much as possible, but unexpectedly it backfired and turned into a poisonous point. Indeed, there is a difference between group portrait TV series and novels. I ignored this point. My perspective of coding has always been based on group portraits. I didn't expect readers to see it. It was entirely from Zhang Wei's perspective. Being kissed by a man will naturally make you feel cold. I have also been revising many details, but this point with Zeng Xiaoxian happens to involve the subsequent plot and plot advancement, and I can't find a way to straighten it out after the revision. After the subscription crashed, I looked for many reasons. Later I found out that this was my own problem. I have always been accustomed to suppressing the protagonist to slow down the plot and follow the outline. No matter how much I say, I know it's useless. I don't want to ask for forgiveness, I just feel uncomfortable in my heart. I could have written better, but because of my old habits, the simple fan fiction became complicated. My state during this period is indeed not good. My mind is empty every day. I really want to give up and turn around to write other novels that I have already started. However, I promised to finish it and keeping my promise is a good quality. I didn't think about unnecessary words, and kept following the main story to speed up. I could only find something to fill the gap in the timeline. The setting with Yifei is a heartbeat engine, just like a savage girlfriend, who abused the male protagonist in the early stage, and gradually fell in love with her after abusing her. The reason why I am not angry is because the other party is tolerant of her bad temper. There is not only one way to love. If you accept the spikes of the rose, you will find that her spikes will in turn protect you. This is the first love line, but for now, I will merge the second one with this one. If it's a free novel, I guess you won't lose too much if you follow it up. It's very passive if you charge too early. Anyway, I'll learn from my lesson. I'll work hard to finish it. I also hope that people who want to read this book will read my review first and then decide whether to open it. When I feel most tired when writing a novel, I am typing on the keyboard alone and getting little response. The reason why Eggplant insisted on finishing the book that was sealed before, even though I had no money, was because there were book friends who kept chatting with me. I don't know why, but gradually, the novel changed. I don't have the habit of perfect attendance here. I feel that the royalties I earn do not exceed perfect attendance, and I feel like I am receiving charity. When I left for training, I said that the next time I come back, I will definitely not aim for perfect attendance. I will write fast-paced things in my next book. I will admit failure, but I will never fall.

After watching it for so long, I honestly don't know whether it is a single heroine or multiple heroines. The love apartment written by the author is more focused on the personalities of the protagonists in the original drama. It is not like some fandoms that unify the girls' love brains. However, it seems that Hu Yifei's side will not be able to survive if there is a harem. In addition, Wanyu can really accept the multi-heroine plot. She has a good personality, is independent, and has money at home to help the protagonist develop her career. Nuolan actually feels that it is okay and it doesn't matter whether she accepts it or not.

Yes, it has originality and original plot. After all, the novel is not a TV series. It would be meaningless to write it piece by piece 🙂

I just want to ask about this book, is it funny? Let me know if anyone has seen it. After all, the core of "Love Apartment" is comedy

Is the author of this book a woman? It smells like a romantic drama, which makes it awkward to watch.

Residents of the handsome apartment, please try your best to catch up tonight, and I will continue to update you tomorrow.

I was really confused when I saw Chapter 10. The ribs were five pounds less than one and a half pounds, and the fish was three pounds less than eight ounces. Do you still think that even if you find him, you won't change the world? What kind of brain circuit do you have? Are you afraid of embarrassing yourself? You were cheated, brother, and you didn't lose even a little bit, and you had too much money to spend? I can also watch the cute girl character in front of me, and I'll get over it if I tolerate it, but I really don't understand your plot, just to argue with Hu Yifei for a few words and then add some values? 😅

It's already this point and it hasn't been updated yet. Who can read it if it's even this point? The foreigners next door thought we looked down upon them when they saw it.

A branch suddenly popped up in my mind. Zhang Wei and Wanyu got married, and then met Nolan. Then wouldn't it be a match? Right, Richard Zhang Wei😰

The protagonist was Liu Xiahui, and Nuo Lan was about to push back. In the end, Nuo Lan was tied up and stayed there all night. There is still Chapter 274, the first kiss was forced by Nuolan. Do you know that the shortest way to a woman's heart is through Yin Prayer?

Will you write about Mia? 🙂

This is a light-hearted novel, so let people relax. There is no need for nonsense. Just accept it when it is necessary. Don't be ambiguous. In the end, it will make people feel relaxed.

Author, this is a novel with multiple female protagonists. The previous writing is good, but Wanyu is a bit of a bitch. Don't accept it at the end, it will be a bit disgusting.

I came here to watch Nuolan, and then I saw in the comment section that Wanyu is also the heroine (these two are my favorite characters), but after seeing Wanyu being kissed by Zhanbo, I really couldn't get over this complex (the male protagonist was kissed several times by men, and I felt a little uncomfortable, but it didn't matter). What kind of complex was the author in when he wrote about the female protagonist being forcibly kissed by the male partner?