People Are on Campus, the Marriage Counterattack System Is Coming

What can I say? After watching it all night, I felt that it was like a primary school student's puppy love. It was too childish, especially the male and female protagonists and the two supporting female characters. The male protagonist was extremely childish. The two supporting female characters are also annoying. No self-knowledge at all.

I feel that the protagonist should not purely follow the system in terms of emotions. This will make him seem very passive and interact with the heroine in order to complete the task and obtain rewards. From the current point of view, the male protagonist already knows that the female protagonist loves him wholeheartedly, is so kind to him, and is very proactive. Then some things should happen naturally and not be driven by system tasks. Like "Good night, go to bed early", if there is no previous chat content, and then suddenly say something to the heroine for the sake of system tasks, it seems abrupt and lacks true feelings, which is a poor strategy.

Every time I go to bed, I read this novel because I dream about it🙂

(The book has been signed by an internal investment gold medal editor, so you can invest with confidence) One more thing is that writing pure love articles is very demanding. So, don't curse, I'll be in a bad mood for a whole day when I see it, and then I won't be in the mood to write. You can make comments, but please say them carefully and we will provide some reference. Also, this is a single girl, the main plot is pure love, and the other plots are auxiliary plots. So if you fall in love after reading this, I am not responsible~

Shu Yin

Support me, as long as there is no further plot. I am a bit tired of doing business. Now, there is a book shortage. . .

I saw 72 photos. Since the introduction says there is only one female protagonist, I shouldn't write too much about so many female protagonists. The female supporting role is always entangled and I feel uncomfortable. Otherwise, there should be multiple female protagonists.

Single heroine, come and support me

There is a problem. The protagonist knows from the beginning that something is going to happen to his mother, but after reading the next seven or eight chapters, I feel that the protagonist does not take this matter to heart at all.

I hope the author didn't kidnap or anything like that.

It's a bit out of context, either too much has been changed or it's just bad. It can be used to kill time, not to use your brain.

Personally, I think it's pretty good, but there are too many scenes that have to be changed before the plot is finished.