National Struggle for Hegemony: My Swarm of Insects Is Endless

Some suggestions for the author First of all, I believe that most of the readers who clicked in are attracted by the Zerg and Infinity, but the author seems to have gone astray. What everyone wants to see is the Zerg's human sea tactics that pile up the enemy to death. As a result, the beginning of the book has been showing micromanaging. At the beginning, when there were only dozens or hundreds of minions, micromanagement was okay. In the latest chapter, there are thousands of bugs, and they are still showing off microcontrollers. They are divided into dozens of squads, divided into troops, center blooms, sieges and other tactics. I was a little confused by the tactics. The progress is also a bit slow. It is 70,000 words long. The protagonist's lord trial is not over yet, and less than 1/4 of his own plane has been defeated. They haven't become official lords yet, and it's very uncomfortable to keep up with them In the end, every bug has been given a name, and I can't remember it at all. There are dozens of bugs at the first level now. It's hard to figure out who is who with dozens of names, and many of them are transitional. There will be at least a dozen more types added to each subsequent level. Aren't you tired of naming them?

It's been an old cliché for years, I'm sure the protagonist will take big risks to save a woman who doesn't matter

One or two little monsters in one chapter, and you also have to name them. How many readers will take a serious look at your many insect names?

I know that there will definitely be conflicts between the protagonist and the villain, but is it necessary to use a girl who was tortured, raped, and killed by the villain to create the villain's character? Now that I've read Chapter 40, I don't understand. You said it's okay if you don't let others change seats, but then you resent you and want to target you. I understand. But why did "Lei Shao" write so many chapters? I want to know if a young man like this would take any girl he saw and rape her to death. In such an environment, human life is worth less than a dog's? If this is really the case, why are you qualified to study? Why do you dare to refuse to give up your seat? Why do you dare to collide with the Second Young Master? What do you need to worry about if you just get rid of it? That's right, what kind of supervisor is in charge, so people with abilities dare not touch you, but people with abilities dare to use their abilities to catch a few women, rape and kill them, and let them die in pain. Why are you so special? Besides, do we need such a plot to highlight the villain's "evil"? , Does the author have any serious illness in his heart? There are also those who say that the protagonist does not have Mary's disease, but he is really too brainless. The only protagonist in the world can't move for fear of being targeted. They also wrote about a student who deliberately used skills to cause the death of other students, was injured and sentenced to death, and warned others. What? In the past, people with abilities could kill people without incident, but now if the protagonist awakens and causes death, he will be punished with death? Is it a nuclear bomb attack for a newly awakened person? Isn't it possible that so many teachers can stop one student? Dozens of people were killed and injured all at once, and the protagonist felt a headache and said the plot was good. Is this good? Get paid to promote books?

The characteristic of Zerg has never been 1V1. Brother, who do you want to attract? For those who like Zerg, you didn't write about the overwhelming feeling of overwhelming, millions against one. It also didn't describe the sense of oppression that comes with fighting one after another and acting in unison without fear. It also didn't describe the feeling of being able to be shot to death casually but uniting the brain. I haven't yet written about the fear of swallowing up everything, turning soil, trees, minerals, water, energy, sunlight, and all living things into nothingness. There are only a few hundred bugs, and they have been taking the single-target strong route. Didn't you, Lord Wen, change your skin? Don't say it's because of the early stage. Even in the early stage, people's points can make two dragons come out. If you can make one of these things, it's extraordinary, right? Reproductive ability: Do you want to watch the termites in the African documentary? The breeding is too low, do you have the nerve to call it Zerg? The queen ants are not extraordinary, and fifty thousand of them are born in one day. At least you are better at breeding than the real queen ants. .

The writing is okay, the setting is a bit problematic, and the plot is a bit weak. I haven't even finished a single trial yet. And if there is not enough population in the interstellar colony, there are no restrictions on the world lord killing people or even killing people around the world lord at will. The key is that only enough population can give birth to more world lords, and more world lords can give birth to more and stronger world lords. The key is not to have invincible strength and allow the world lord and the people around him to kill at will. Also, the Zerg are playing the worm sea tactic. What kind of tactics are interspersed with them all the time.

This novel is a mess of worldview settings, and the realistic plot is so poorly written that it made me feel uncomfortable reading it.

I couldn't stand it when I saw the second chapter. This must have been a plot from 10 years ago.

I can't stand it when I see the latest one, but you have laid the groundwork for so many new online departments, and now you are doing this to me. This is still necessary to see. Originally, I became the world leader.

Withdrawn, no fun anymore. The Zerg are written like a card game, with each type of bug changing its name once it is promoted. Nor does it devour genetic evolution. Just an upgrade. It has a dick meaning.

This Zerg is written in a nondescript manner. Where is the Zerg Sea? You can write something new if you want, but you abandoned the biggest characteristics of the Zerg race, and you wrote the entire human society into a dark forest. This kind of human society simply cannot survive the battle with foreign races.

This little Karami made me laugh when he appeared. I haven't seen this kind of plot in a long time. It was forced.

There is no point in adjusting so many types of troops in the early stage. Copy some of the arms from StarCraft and Warhammer, so as to gain popularity. If you write too much about the arms you want, you will be scolded, but if you write too little, you will have no impression at all. For daily arms, use the popular StarCraft and Warhammer bugs, and use the gene pool as a reserve. When encountering a war, you can test the opponent's shortcomings while fighting, and then use specific arms to target them. If the poison is weak, attack with poison, and use the long to defeat the weak. On a daily basis, I use highly comprehensive ones because they are cost-effective. Unless the Zerg cannot recycle biomass, the best way is to fight more and less. It will kill them quickly and recycle them quickly. There is no need to adjust so many names at all. The important thing is to load genes, or in StarCraft terms, technology. Puppies are used as the basic troops, and then two basic Tyranids from Warhammer are used as the basic troops for melee combat. Then there are hydralisks, flying dragons, cockroaches, etc. Use these influential names as basic templates to form a swarm. You will die more when fighting, and you will also test the opponent's weaknesses. It would be much better to directly add technology to these troops.

After reading the first chapter, to sum up, it is still the same old routine, and since it is an extraordinary world, one world master has a lot of servants, I don't realize that this world master is special and just like an ordinary world, it would be strange if he doesn't rush into the street

For the Zerg, just push with explosive troops. If you encounter strong enemies in the early stage, you can do some operations, but most of the time, the snowball development of the insects that are all over the mountains and plains should be to kill the enemies, occupy resources, and create more insects. Especially in the case of endless planes, the snowball should also be very fast. Furthermore, there are too many types of bugs, which are both good and bad. If they are divided too finely, they will easily collapse later. Readers will skip it because they cannot remember it. It is better to make the worker bees more versatile and responsible for collecting resources. For example, as the species analyzed become more and more abundant, the ability of the worker bees will become stronger and stronger. From the beginning, they can only crawl on the ground, and then slowly climb mountains, burrow, dig holes, fly short distances, swim, and become invisible. However, these are all for the purpose of collecting resources more conveniently and quickly. Others fight. Bugs can be divided into more types, specializing in ground, anti-air, water, tank tanks, powerful output, melee, long-range, transport, eyes, etc. I believe that those who like to watch Zerg should all play StarCraft. Please refer to the game and innovate new bugs, such as the Arak war bugs in Starship Troopers, brain bugs, tanks, plasma bugs, and even Juggernauts half the size of the astrological sphere, Kerrigan's Leviathan, etc. There are many for reference. It is also recommended that the realistic plot should not be too dark, you can have some pretense and slap in the face, but it should be natural. I believe that most normal people will feel uncomfortable when they see a female star being toyed to death by a rich second generation. If readers feel uncomfortable, some people will abandon it or start to skip watching.

Just give the same type a name, and then level 1 and level 2. Wouldn't it be enough? If there is a leader level through evolution and mutation, just give the lord level a name. Who can remember these names😳

I don't understand. The origin of a plane of the same level is only enough to change the terrain of this plane, or to not obviously strengthen the equipment? ? ? 😅 Why is it so expensive to change the terrain? How about playing? How many small planes will be destroyed if the planes are upgraded like this? Funny?

You can look forward to the future, you can try it, there is nothing wrong with the writing, just don't deliberately engage in bloody plots, others are not that stupid, there are many beautiful girls, why don't you hang them on a tree, and use the rights of supporting characters to find beautiful students elsewhere. There are so-called "school belles" every year, and it is outrageous to want to kill others after losing face. You insist on hanging this school belle, the IQ of the supporting characters is worrying

People change their destiny at the age of 18. The book always expresses the difference in status. The world leader is promoted to one level, which is not as good as the previous status. The golden legend. The main body of the book is killing and destruction. Technology, conquest, and development are not bugs at all. What about biotechnology? The society welcomes the arrival of the realm lord, but does not see the protagonist's positive attitude towards the society, and demands unilaterally. Everyone is flattering the realm lord, and they hold each other's thighs to share life and death. The protagonist kills 5-6 people every day, and the realm lords fight each other fiercely. 1% of world lords are born, and the survival rate of newborn babies is 60%. During this period, a child king will also be born. The lower realm masters are more ruthless than the county magistrate (2-3 for the protagonist every day). The protagonist develops in one year and can destroy the achievements of society in five years. Where is the insect hero unit? Is it necessary to strengthen the space channel? You have more buses, (flying units, aircraft carrier loading capacity) So where the insect is stronger, the world lord is almost off the ground.

The second picture is about an inexplicable woman getting married with an inexplicable villain... What kind of ancient novel?

Isn't it well written? Why didn't you say anything?

Driving high and driving low, it's boring and I dozed off watching it😪

What a talent, the Zerg units actually evolve and upgrade one by one! You are invincible. With this setting, you are not worthy of being named Zerg.

I put a lot of thought into naming the units, but they are all two-letter names. They are cool, but they are very poorly identifiable. I have no idea what the difference is from the previous unit of the same type.

Disgusting stuff, the author has been poisoning it, so he gave up.

Has the author returned? Have you offended someone before? A bunch of freelance writers created two things here. . . If you need something or something happens, at least send me a message, otherwise you won't even dare to place an order.

A novice tried and wrote dozens of chapters

The world setting is completely inconsistent with the wild Zerg, and the game designer who plays the protagonist is even more poisonous.

I don't understand why we built a college, so we miss the college style? Speechless.

I can't grasp the theme. This kind of article is unrealistic and pretentious. Who will read it? I write about how to defeat monsters every day. Is this a lord article? Did I understand it wrong?