Can You Not Use Poisonous Tactics, Miss Treacherous Minister?

The writing is strong, the writing is smooth, and the characters are well drawn. The setting and worldview are also barely there. The most important thing is that the writing style is unique and the rhythm is good. It makes me wonder whether it is the reincarnation of the dirty land or the invasion of demons? This writing style, rhythm and subject matter and casting have a bit of a female channel flavor. Could it be that he is a female channel boss? The quality will definitely pass the test, but if a newcomer wants to pass the test by writing a book, it is definitely not possible to rely only on quality. Quantity must pass the test. If you don't consume resources before it's put on the shelf, half of it will be done. If you want to consume resources, you have to have the quantity. So update quickly

In a word, it's okay to watch without thinking. If I have a brain, I am really curious about a few points: 1. As a veteran, Lin Qifeng has no ability to plan. As a border guard, his duty should have been to defend the city and wait for reinforcements, but due to some inexplicable reasons (there was no water and he had to go out to grab it), he went directly out of the city to send it away. Let's not talk about how much water can be grabbed by this method of grabbing water. What happens after the water is grabbed? Continue to defend the city? Already at a huge disadvantage in manpower and materials, how long can it persist in an isolated city without reinforcements? What reason did he have to take such a big risk and gain so little? Moreover, there are not a few soldiers in the city, and there are many elites. According to common sense, there is no reason to be trapped in an isolated city. Now there is no news of reinforcements, and there is no contact with the fraternal troops. The best strategy should be to preserve the troops and retreat, but the middle strategy is to stick with a few people and wait for reinforcements (in reality, a small town with a few thousand people can hold off an army of tens of thousands for a long time, and the forest department cannot support it mainly because of lack of water). As a result, he sent it directly. Without the protagonist to bring reinforcements, the entire army would be annihilated. 2. What kind of novel does the author want to write? I feel that the author's writing skills are indeed lacking. To be honest, as long as the writing is good and the emotions are in place, even if Lin Qifeng dies, many people will say that he is a tragic hero. The main reason for the current poor evaluation is actually that the author directly used the stream of consciousness, fast-forwarding from the city out of the city to the defeat in a montage style, and the chapters previously used to shape the character of Lin Qifeng (Kuai Fang blew him) were written in general, and it did have the feeling of Gojo Enlightenment. Therefore, when the author cannot emotionally infect the readers (or deceive the readers), I am afraid he has to consider two methods: 1. Increase the real part and rationalize the plot, at the cost of sacrificing part of the appeal, which requires the author to have a certain knowledge base; 2. Reduce such sacrificial plots. Most people in the starting point only like to read exciting articles. If you make them happy (falling in love, pursuing a career), they will not care whether it is reasonable or not. Of course, you can also continue to insist on yourself. After all, do people make progress? (Laughs)

① Chapters 27-29 of Ye Yang's chapter, even the protagonist is portrayed with such care and moved me. ② After finishing Chapter 57-58 of The Night of Chi Yunhe, it was so sweet, even more wonderful than the plot of Swear in the early stage. ③The latest chapter of the puzzle game, and the reader's perspective of "being there, will you become more excited when facing adversity?"... I also like the part about Zhang Ping's death. I also like the plot involving Chu Siyue, it is lighthearted and funny. Come on, author😊 Final congratulations to Shang Sanjiang😜

The more the author writes, the more flavorful he becomes. The recent war chapter is very good, with the best chapters and clear intentions. I will give it to you with my monthly subscription.

Cao Cao sighed: "It is an elegant thing to make wine with green plums." Cheng Yu was amazed: The Prime Minister still knows how to eat!

I don't even bother to name those who are eunuchs, those who scold readers, those who are deliberately disgusting, and those who are still updating normally and asking for leave for no reason from time to time are considered the most normal.

Don't your female channels have their own channels? It's great that this thing can be recommended on the male video page 🔨

I'm all in. If you become a eunuch, just die for me.

It's a pity that the original writing was quite good, but I insisted on writing Lin to death. The writing is not thorough, and the IQ is not highlighted. The only commendable emotional drama between the two sisters and the protagonist still cannot save the book's unnatural operation. Now I can only say that it is good.

You have been encouraging you for so long, but you haven't seen it at all, right? You can only see criticism, right? I thought you would step forward after seeing the encouragement of many people. You deleted the eunuch declaration because you wanted to update it properly. But I didn't expect that you wanted to be an ostrich so that everyone would stop scolding you, right? This is the first time I have seen an author who is so easily led away by readers. I saw some people scolding you and not wanting you to write. Why didn't you see that there were many people praising you and wanting to continue reading?

laughing to death🤣

Don't stop and keep updating

A famous general, a fierce general, said that he would die on the way to charge. The cause of death was that he wanted to pretend to break into the camp and use the elite cavalry troops to bring a few buckets of water back to the city? ? ? What are you doing? Bring two buckets of water back for each person to take a shower 😊 I want to be passionate and righteous, but also want to be romantic and travel with beauty. It's okay if you take advantage of all the good things. You can just finish it and enjoy it. You can still make money by writing cool articles with a little writing. You are suffering from literary youth disease. Do you want to guide readers into your spiritual world in a sad way? Ha ha

You listen to whoever says it, right? You should read the book, subscribe and collect it This book has such good results If someone criticizes you for a few words, stop writing it Then the people who only read your book and don't talk are not human beings, right? What do you think of us? I basically don't write comments, I'm really angry The characters in the book are full of heroism and move forward indomitably What are you doing Can you elaborate

See the latest chapters so far in one go. The world view, atmosphere, and character creation in the early stage are all pretty good. Later, Lin Qifeng was surrounded, and the depiction of the battle between the two armies was relied on. In the light novel section, the writing is half like a group portrait. The mother-in-law and mother-in-law of the main character of FW spent a long time preparing for it, and then watched a scene where five horses are torn apart. It took a long time to write a poisonous plan, and everyone had to die. In the end, none of the two barbarians died, and the protagonist was both a turtle and a clown. It smells like a light novel, history, or military. Withdrew.

Both books are eunuchs, and you can't stand readers scolding you. Maybe they didn't scold you? You have to accept it. Some readers like you, and some readers don't like you. This is the Internet, and a large number of people will read your book. Just because of this little thing, oh, I can't stand it.

I can tolerate the cutting off of water sources in an important border city, and I can tolerate leaving some water sources poisoned. When the author does not understand the difference between pollution and poisoning, a camp can be secretly mobilized and hold ten times the number of soldiers. After the battle, the entire camp is controlled and no one can find out. I really can't stand it.

You might as well just say no to your grades and writing skills that others don't envy. Are you planning to shut down your book? I suspect that someone who is jealous of you is doing this to you. This book is not about scolding Sanjiang. Most of the people who think your writing is not good are your colleagues. When you are gone, they will blame other authors.

After reading a little bit, I found it was not as good as the reviews said. It is a food grade. It has both light novel elements and heavier elements such as historical wars. In order to highlight the abilities of the two female protagonists, the male protagonist takes a bath and thinks about the headache and faints. It is quite speechless. It is very strange. It is inversely proportional to the image of the male protagonist in all materials at the beginning. This novel can easily cause problems by adding too many things and settings. It depends on the author's level.

You really disappoint me. Stop writing books. You won't be able to slow down for so long. Just move on. For the first time, I hated that iron could not become steel.

So far, the writing is quite good. I don't think there is any problem with Lin's death. Why can't he die? Why don't you update it? It's a pity. I'll take a few days off to think about my thoughts and then write again.

Many people criticize the platinum masters for writing books, but they insist on finishing the book. If you don't finish the book, you are cheating, I'm sorry for the readers 🙄

The biggest feeling after reading Chapter 50 is that the characters are logically self-consistent, including the cruel and capable "loving general" Ke Baguang, the selfish and family-oriented traitor Zhang Pingzhi, and the eccentric and resolute young general Ye Yang. These characters impressed me the most. I don't use much writing but I am more concise. The characters are three-dimensional, layered, with clear motivations, and the images are vivid on the paper. You can naturally picture the person Ke in your mind. He grew up on the grassland where the law of the jungle believes in the law of the jungle. He became a centurion by virtue of his own ability. He has both courage and a certain strategy. Therefore, strategically, the grassland side has the upper hand and has an advantage on the local battlefield. , When he was provoked by a few stragglers from the protagonist, he was very angry, but at the same time he remained calm. The actions he took were very correct and showed the cruel side of his character: Aren't you a little southern barbarian going to cause trouble? Watch me string your wife to the ground in front of you, and torture her later. Of course, he still hasn't done the protagonist's wall-hanging. You can also imagine Zhang Pingzhi, who worked step by step to the position of battalion general with his own efforts in the army. He has also reached middle age, and the ideals, loyalty and morals of his youth have been smoothed away, and he has transformed into a refined egoist. He considers problems based on personal interests, but at the same time he is also very caring about his family. So when faced with the impossible situation of a city destroyed and a family perished, he immediately wanted to vote. He could save his personal status and the lives of his family. As for the people in the city, the consequences of losing the border had nothing to do with him. If you dare to stop me from voting, then I, Qian Bojun, am not a vegetarian. I will do what you say with maximum execution. The two qualities of cowardice and bravery are wonderfully harmonious in him. The fact that he was still thinking about his daughter before his death further strengthened the three-dimensionality of this character and made him break away from the image of a flat selfish traitor. There is also Xiaoye. I think the scene where he uses a gun is the most exciting in the first 50 chapters. This character is very attractive when he first appears. He is young, strong in martial arts, courageous and very eccentric. Later we learned that this is related to his experience. His teenage years have been spent in the shadow of being bullied, so deep in his heart there is a strong impulse to change the status quo, so Zhang When Pingzhi offered him an olive branch, he immediately accepted it, but the protagonist knew that he and Zhang Pingzhi were not the same person, so he directly used his status to force him out, hammering out the self-reliance deep in his heart from the gentle countryside. Xiaoye's inner emotions also poured out very naturally in this paragraph. Anyway, it made me angry, and I wanted to punch the earth to pieces. Of course, it is not ruled out that there is an element of reading comprehension, but shouldn't a good work be such that even though the author didn't write it, the readers will figure it out? All in all, these little shrimp authors have worked so hard, and these little plot authors have written so excitingly that people are looking forward to the follow-up, and they are not allowed to run out of ideas.

Top monthly vote, you know the author, right?

The fake corpse died again after a long time, which made me excited. Please pay me.

Six chapters of monthly tickets, well written, more updates would be great

I came back in July to burn incense, but I still can't forget this book.

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I don't want to say anything to the author anymore