I Asked You to Do Magic, Not Be a Creep

The folks are having a hard time, please help us.

I spent so many chapters writing about this classmate's birthday and pretending to be slapped in the face. I wonder if it was a pleasure to write? Have all the readers left?

Can it be reduced? It's too wordy and it affects viewing too much.

Based on feedback from the comment area, this book has fixed the following BUGs. 1. System mall issues: Reduce descriptions of daily necessities purchases and focus on reality. 2. The problem of male protagonist's fetish: Old readers should be able to feel it if the male protagonist's hand fetish and foot fetish are removed. 3. Issues with female characters: Many readers have reported that there are too many female characters, so all the plots of landlady cheongsam beauty Zhou Meiqin have been cut off, which will gradually marginalize the story. The plot of elementary school girl Yu Jian has been temporarily shelved, pending subsequent development. Currently, the only important female characters are Xi Ruowei, Xu Yingluo and Zhang Yuqing. 4. Water problem: Readers have reported that it is too watery. This is a problem that exists in most books. I will modify it as appropriate and delete some side plots. You can feel that the plot speeds up significantly after chapter 130. 5. Main plot issue: Readers have reported more magic main plots. After Chapter 160, magic performances are ranked first, picking up girls is second, and secondary performances such as books and paintings are reduced to third, eliminating unnecessary conflicts. (Why is it Chapter 160? Because I have now written Chapter 163 and the outline has changed) 6. Extraordinary magic is not a magic problem: There is no way to change this. The tone of this book is that the protagonist is ordinary and the props are extraordinary, but they can only be used for performances. The overall environment has not changed. Otherwise, ordinary magicians will not be more successful than Liu Qian. I hope you can forgive me. 7. No more bugs. We will collect bugs after correction. Thank you for your support.

This novel doesn't talk about things that are reasonable or unreasonable. It's a novel after all, but what the hell is it if it's not exciting? Anyway, I saw the protagonist learn a lot of awesome magic tricks and then pick up girls. I feel like the best parts of this novel are all in the introduction.

Liuyang Fireworks Show, do you have any ideas, large-scale scene magic, Stormbringer from the sky If you can make a magic circle depicting it, it will be even more beautiful Unfortunately, I only have the Light Envoy 😭

Magic is magic, okay, why do you suddenly change the scene to an urban bloody cool novel? 😰

Come on

I have read Chapter 40. The protagonist has just gone out to start a picture and meets a young rich woman who breaks up with her ex-bad boyfriend and is blackmailed by her ex-boyfriend. The manager of the bar owner destroys the bar under the instructions of the mastermind behind the scenes and threatens the protagonist to resign. Instead, he is whipped in the face by the female owner. Damn it, is this a cool story? !

How can you cool a city by 40 degrees without magic? Did the whole city tell a bad joke all day and night?