Douluo: My Clone Simulates the Star God

Tang San can be considered so awesome if he can be written about as awesome. This is so impressive to Tang San. Wearing a star dome skin is disgusting 😅

Black Tower goes to forge and blacksmith? It would be better to switch to research and development of soul guide mecha, or do academic research. Why do you think Black Tower can assemble a group of geniuses to conduct research and development of simulated universe? She can talk about biology with Ruan Mei, talk about machinery with Screw Columb, and talk about invention and creation with Stephen. She is a true all-rounder.

Is there something wrong with you when you ask Heita to blacksmith, then become a disciple and then become your godmother? What would a genius like Heita do? You can't act well either, your character has completely collapsed.

To be honest, I can barely accept blacksmithing and being accepted as a disciple, but recognizing my mother makes me unable to stand up and accept it. In my opinion, if you have Bo Shizun to help you deduce, even if you are suppressed at least, you can be on par with the title. You might as well write a clone to play the black tower and communicate with this blacksmith on an equal footing for half a day to learn the skills of this world, and then invite him to join you in making Bo Shizun. Slowly gather people like this and create your own power. I plan to wait and read your book.

Although, Heita still has to be sharp to have that flavor. Hiding talents is not suitable for Heita. She is a genius.

The author, Xing Tie, didn't understand the game and the plot wasn't good enough. The black tower with the hammer is just a doll. The real black tower is actually a magical girl with long legs. Even Heita is extremely arrogant. On the surface, she is polite to you, but in reality, her heart is as high as the sky. It can only be said that no one in the genius club is a normal person.

Damn it, why have I seen so many similar novels, from Yuanshen to Beng Tie to Beng San, Mi Huhu cosmos fully invades the Douluo Continent, beats up the mistress, it makes me laugh to death. Douluo was written just to be fooled by Mi into PUA hahahaha.

Genshin Impact has only produced one or two high-quality fanfics in so many years. Don't even think about it. It's difficult to produce high-quality fan fiction because your iron-clad world view is obviously not something that ordinary authors can grasp.

That's ridiculous. Star God is full of character as the background of Star Iron, but the protagonist tramples Star God's character under his feet with his own dick in the first chapter 😒

I see, author, you deserve it. Since you have written about MiHoYo, you should know the wide range of this audience and its lower limit. There are many people who will criticize you just by looking at the introduction and title of the book. That is what you asked for. You don't even know how to trick people into killing them.

I read this book, well, I can't say that this book has no merits. Overall, it is really refreshing for me. After all, I am also looking forward to what kind of stories will happen with the characters in different works in the same world view and the same power system. The author of this book has a good imagination. Although there are various problems, it does basically meet my expectations in this regard. Let me talk about some things that I am personally not satisfied with: First of all, it is a common problem for new authors. The character portrayal is a bit thin and the description is not vivid enough. However, considering that this is a fan work and based on the original, this is not a too serious problem; secondly, this book chooses A very difficult direction to control - group portraits. It is undeniable that if the group portraits are well written, they can indeed directly enshrine the gods, but if they are not well written, it will easily make the plot drag out and become like a running account; the last point is from my subjective point of view. If the author holds a different point of view from me, you can ignore it. Personally, I I really hate the suppression of fan fiction, or even those who play with the original protagonists (except for the relatively new original protagonists such as Tang San, Xu Fengnian, and Gu Yue Fang Yuan), especially since the original protagonist was a relatively upright and upright character in the early stages of the novel. I have no objection to killing Tang San, Tang Hao, and A Yin, but solve it After getting rid of these, I still have to "kill all" Tang Wulin. Every time he shows signs of getting stronger, I kill him, arrange his life arbitrarily, and use his feelings for Liuying to kidnap him. These are all plots that I hate. Maybe it is because of my low cultural literacy. Wild boars can't eat fine chaff. I can't put it down. This book is treated as a behind-the-scenes group portrait. In my opinion, many of the protagonist's behaviors are like a Tang San who is more ruthless in cheating and more advanced in thinking. He has no personality charm at all and even has no sense of existence. On the contrary, Tang Wulin is more like the protagonist of the story I expected, responsible and responsible. Pay attention to emotions, integrity, and distinguish right from wrong. This is what I want to say to many fan authors. "If you don't suppress the original protagonist, we can make progress together. If you don't like the original protagonist and use the original protagonist as a stepping stone, the personality charm of the fan protagonist you create will not be as good as the original one." "Protagonist, that would be very embarrassing." In my opinion, the protagonists of most Dou San fandoms are not as good as the original protagonist Tang Wulin in terms of personality charm (most of them use modern knowledge or rely on cheats to crush the original Douluo people, grab blood, grab women, grab opportunities, and finally become the winner in life) , as a result, these modern time-travelers who rely solely on cheating, selfishness, lust, arrogance and pretentiousness have completely crushed the hard-working, honest, kind and talented original protagonist in terms of strength, career, and love. So sometimes it is really difficult to comment. I don't know if there is something wrong with me. Okay, I'm going too far, I'm speaking from my own thoughts, and it only represents my personal opinion.

A haha, no fun, Liu Ying works as a nanny for Tang Wulin to revive the Tang clan

Black Tower goes to blacksmith? Intellectual characters can directly destroy star destroyers with their hands. Galaxy bombs are not better.

If you don't care about the original setting, you can read it 😒 There is also the fact that the behavior and personality of Bengtie's character's clone are different from those in the game. I can't use the author's perspective to think about why he did what he did, because I'm just a reader looking for fans to read. I'm looking for fans, right? I'm reading the novel for these people, right? Why did they print the novel with me? Is it different? Do I still want to watch it? Let's use an analogy. When you get home, you see your mother sitting in front of the TV with peanuts in her right hand and wine in her left hand, watching the game with her eyes motionless. Then your dad is lighting the fire in the kitchen and complaining, saying that your mother is not good at watching your bad football game every day. She was really blind before she fell in love with your mother.

Leather cover article, no wonder you were scolded🤫

This book is not that historical when it comes to history, and it cannot be considered a normal book. I can't get up and down.

So can the author write about the madness of genius?

It's also against Star Iron, which has the highest combat power limit, and it's the Black Tower Initial that has accomplished a double kill in terms of intelligence and strength. If I don't transfer to the Heavens, I'd probably have another 10 or 200,000 words that I can't write anymore. It's really my fault to beat Malone in all directions. If the author hasn't decided which world to move to, he can start discussing it now.

O triple-faced soul, please listen to my question: If the power and wealth of the strong can cover up their crimes, who can judge them? If the weak need to survive at any cost, who can guarantee them? If even the most pure and good souls make mistakes, who can comfort them? "If we use the strong to help the weak" is indeed the foundation of paradise, who just left them to mourn in the suffering world. If there are some chicks in this world who are unable to fly throughout their lives, how can we say that the sky is their destination? If you don't have the special identity given by the star core, and you are just a fragile member of all living beings, which Pinoconi would you prefer? A wild place where the fittest survive, or a dream paradise where everyone can be happy. In my opinion, the ideal system of society should be "seven days off"

I support no heroine and self-inbreeding (the clone is all female, the main body is... Optional)

Huang Quan: Huh? Why am I missing one combat skill point?

False male protagonist: Protagonist Real male protagonist: Tang Wulin

It feels a bit disgusting to write like this, I might as well have done it myself

Frankly, it's well written. It's just that the subject matter wasn't chosen well. Not many people have watched Douluo Three. Douluo 12 is quite popular. The following 345... I can only say that everyone understands it.

Read a book, eat two portions, talent

This method of writing that I was taught was very annoying. It was a small plot that would have passed in two or three chapters at most. He insisted on writing more. Then a bunch of inexplicable characters pop up. There were several spats there. Then he just brushed off some small explosive plots.

What about the protagonist? What's the difference between this protagonist and Quan Shui? I've been waiting for so long and wanted to eat some sweets and whispers, but it's about to end and it's not there yet.

I can almost guess the plot behind it now. Anyway, for a cesspool like Shrek, it's better to die quickly. Another thing I want is the plot. In the final battle, don't let the protagonist face that garbage alone. You can refer to the scene where Beng San beats Kevin and use the captain to perform a barrage attack. For example, I wish that this journey will eventually reach the stars in various languages.

Can Shrek be written to death quickly, and then go to other worlds and give the protagonist a little more candy? It feels like I finally trampled a cockroach to death and then discovered that there was a septic tank under the cockroach's body, and it happened to explode.

The front is wonderful, the back is a mess.