Infinite Sun in the East China Sea

The first survival dungeon in which the protagonist is the weakest is actually my favorite dungeon to watch. It is the closest to ordinary people. The main line of foreigners is also very interesting. It highlights the contradictions of the plot and the contradiction of the protagonist as a Chinese in the Japanese team. After the protagonist comes out of the big sword, he is a bit arrogant and deviates from the normal reader's perspective. He is constantly on the moon and in space. He is essentially a weak individual but has mastered too much supermodel technology. Personally, I still like to see the individual power of Zheng Zha. This kind of nuclear bomb with super powers and technology has no cost and no limit to the ground-crushing gameplay, which is more tiring. There is no pleasure in reading a book. What kind of work should you do at any stage? When you are only at level 2, you should do more activities that level 2 should do. You can elevate Sadako to the point of being invincible at every turn, and then use unlimited nuclear bombs that cannot be resisted by level 4 to clear the ground. It feels very ridiculous. The so-called breeding is neither good nor bad. The protagonist plots against his teammates a lot, but actually gets very little benefit from them, and even acts as a nanny. The teammates have no gratitude or trust towards the protagonist Only the first Shoko's portrayal of the heroine is okay, with sufficient motivation for the character. The others, including Tifa in the vase and the awkward witch, are all paper figures who cannot stand up. It's better to write about Xiangzi properly. There was too much ink on other vases without thinking. As a result, I couldn't even remember Xiangzi, who was the only one I could remember. It was a big failure. Of course, it's okay to read the novel as a novice, and it's still very qualified to manage when you're hungry. It's just that the opening chapter is amazing, which is a pity. .

I personally rate Liangcao-Haicao. I am used to watching Yuanzu Infinite fandoms with violent cheating or dangers. Such a book that slowly unfolds and unfolds at an unhurried pace is more surprising. The protagonist is the first group of team members to enter the space of the main god. The first volume of Foreigners is a bit dull, and the second volume of the disaster movie about the day after tomorrow is surprisingly good, bland and interesting. There are no brutal hostile fights or extreme natural weather to overcome. The plot of traveling all the way north across the Bering Strait and fighting the extremely cold wind is surprisingly interesting. The third and fourth volumes of Mr. Zombie and Pirates of the Caribbean are quite satisfactory and can be read in one go. Currently in the Great Sword World, because the rhythm is relatively dull and not intense, it is recommended to watch it every three or four days. It will be much more comfortable than chasing it directly.

The reincarnator sympathizes with the characters in the plot, but he has no emotional basis, right?

It's okay. I hope it can be written in the author's own style and not be pigeon-holed into the weird cliché of Yuanzu Wuxian saying that saints are not as good as dogs.

The reincarnator Xu Feng, a native of Zhongzhou, accidentally joined the East China Sea team. In a pure sense, ordinary people are not lock-picking geniuses, not wise men, and do not have their own skills. The only special thing is that they have read the script. As a rookie, Xu Feng's biggest labels are [Stranger] and [Weak]. Because he is a "stranger", he is highly vigilant in the face of other reincarnations and refuses to communicate in depth with any teammates. He almost passed the first two games with a "lone wolf" mentality. Due to [weak strength], he showed an extremely conservative attitude when facing the mission of the main god. In the first two games, he only had to pass the level and had a minimum living allowance, and there was almost no active behavior in brushing up points and exploring side plots. The third game "Mr. Zombie" is a very clever choice. It caused a positioning change within the Donghai team in a short period of time. The protagonist became a "local" and his teammates became "foreigners". This produces two important changes: One is that the protagonist gains home field advantage. As we all know, the Lord God will send in targeted [Countermeasures] for every mission, and the Countermeasures for this one appears to be a witch, but is actually [Xu Feng from Central China]. With this, Xu Feng successfully took control of the team and completed the original accumulation. The second is to screen out real teammates. Those who would target the protagonist because of their nationality, and who were not intelligent enough to see the importance of the protagonist's identity as a Nakasu native, were all screened out in the starting team. The remaining monks, mikos, and Shoko became the prototype of the Tokai team. In a sense, this is Xu Feng's first "normal" main god mission. The fourth and fifth games were a period of rapid growth, and Xu Feng's labels became [senior/captain] and [team leader]. His combat power far exceeded that of his teammates, and everyone in the team was convinced. How does Xu Feng treat his teammates? First, Xu Feng never takes the initiative to do good things. Xu Feng is a highly "selfish" person, and his behavioral logic is entirely based on the core premise of "making himself better alive." Throughout the beginning of the chapter so far, Xu Feng has never actively helped his teammates out of pure goodwill like Zheng Zha did. Whenever he helps others, he must have an agenda. Will teammates die if they don't help? If he dies, he dies, and he has no psychological burden at all. Second, Xu Feng never does evil. A very strange point is that Xu Feng has almost never taken action against other reincarnations since the beginning of the story. If others disagree with you, just part ways (the day after tomorrow with the weather scientist). Other people's ideas and plans are different from his own, and he also stands by and never interferes, allowing them to succeed or fail on their own (in Stranger and Mr. Zombie, he watches the actions of other teams without ending). Even when others betrayed him, he did not kill them after weighing the interests (the female doctor in Big Sword betrayed, and the protagonist agreed to the professor's plea plan). The only time one can actually kill the reincarnator is in Mr. Zombie, when he uses distance to kill another veteran, but that's because the other party wants to use this method to kill them first, and the other party is controlled by the villain with two layers of armor. Even looking back at this paragraph, you will find that Xu Feng would not kill her if it was just because of the first reason (the initial plan was just to control Ren Tingting back into his hands, but the other party was controlled by the villain, so he temporarily changed to a murder plan). So, although Xu Feng has always been wary of his teammates, although he tried every means to get side lines and points from his teammates, although he stole 90% of his teammates' materials, and although he installed backdoors in everything he sold to his teammates... In actual behavior, he has never harmed his teammates. In a sense, the protagonist really calls the previous sentence "the moral model of the main god space". For now, the author has indeed written the story of "an ordinary person rising in the main god's space" as he said in his acceptance speech.

The character of the protagonist is suitable for cheating. If he didn't cheat, I really can't imagine how he would survive the final battle. Is it because of Zheng Zha's kindness? Or was it just luck?

The battle with Da Jian is basically over. Let's review the protagonist's situation so far. The first game of "Strangers" was a 7-player field, 3 people survived, and Shoko joined the team. Home field: no branch, 1000+ points. Exchange technological weapons and materials to create human beings. Intermission: 1d branch line, 1200+ points. Tifa gains a special physique. Exchange: D-level space storage bag. Points can be exchanged for various technological weapons, materials, and one-time props. The second game "The Day After Tomorrow", 8 people played, 3 people survived. Home field: no branch, 1600+ points. Another trade with Xiangzi to receive half of the goods. Exchange: technological weapons, materials, one-time props. No intermission. (The game with the least gain) The third game "Mr. Zombie", there are 9 people in the field, 4 people survive, the monk joins the team, and the witch joins the team. Home field: 1c2d, 5900+ points. Exchange: C-level T virus evolution mode, D-level infinite bullet Gauss submachine gun, D-level internal power. Points can be exchanged for various materials and disposable props. Intermission 1: 2c2d, points 5300+. The protagonist opens the first-level gene lock. Exchange: C-level armor Sun Golden Wheel, C-level "Dragon Elephant Boruo Gong" cheat book, points can be exchanged for materials and props. Create human Allen. Intermission 2: 1d, points 1000-. Interlude Three: No branch line, hundreds of points. Exchange: D-level nano-medical robot, double D-level gravity control belt. Additional receipts: Obtain skills and materials from Uncle Jiu and others. The fourth game, "Pirates of the Caribbean - Soul's Chest", was a 12-player game. All 11 people except the leader survived. Soldiers join the ranks. Home field: 1b, 5000+ points, captain certification, protagonist upgraded to second level lock. Exchange: B-level swallowing fruit, points can be exchanged for a large amount of scientific and technological knowledge and materials. Interlude 1: No branch line, 750 points. Trade with new people and get materials worth 3000+ points. The protagonist's consumption of trading equipment is less than one-tenth, that is, the net income is 2700+. Intermission 2: 1b, points 5000+. The human being Allen dies. Tifa devoured the Poseidon and got a big upgrade. Exchange: B-level fantasy side output weapon Yata Mirror. The fifth game "Big Sword" has 15 people. Currently, 7 people are dead and 1 person is scheduled to die due to betrayal. All newcomers except the soldiers are dead. Among the newcomers here, the editor dies, the professor and the little girl survive, and the professor's female student betrays and is scheduled to die. The harvest of this game: The original article clearly mentioned the harvest of 3b1c5d, and nearly 30 awakened beings were killed by the protagonist but the level was not clearly mentioned (the last game was against two abyss joint camps, the first wave of large-scale AOE killed 15, and the awakened ones attacked the protagonist's formation One of them died on the spot, and the protagonist killed one in the ball form except Southern Abyss. There were more than a dozen protagonists competing with Southern Abyss for their heads. I don't know how many they killed. Even if they were all D, it was close to 30d. That is, the protagonist's current minimum guarantee is 3b1c35d, which is 2a1b2d after conversion. But the nearly 30 awakened people cannot all be D. The specific calculation depends on the author's arrangement, but generally speaking, the minimum double A is guaranteed, which is expected to be 1s. (I roughly read it once, the statistics may not be complete, subject to the author) Extra gains: Knowledge and materials related to the great sword are expected to be a way to quickly strengthen the team's standard. The reputation of the Great Sword camp is very high, so you can consider using the ring to recruit people into the team to replenish the lineup. In addition, Soldier and Tifa unlocked the first-level gene lock. (The brushing is too harsh, the newcomer will be lucky...) All the redemptions currently spent by the protagonist (before the big sword enters the scene) total 2b3c5d, and after conversion, the total is 1a1c2d. After the return and enhancement of this game, the cumulative redemption will officially exceed 1 second. The current lineup of the Donghai team: (Teammates are too lazy to exchange) The protagonist, the main output, the main logistics, the exchange is biased towards the fantasy side (refer to the above content), but the actual combat performance is omnipotent on the technological side (thanks to the highly developed Tuntun Fruit). Extremely comprehensive. Flight mode speed Mach 5. Homemade nuclear reactors also have extremely long endurance. Judging from the combat performance in Big Sword, most of the teams in the early stages of the original work were beaten when they encountered the protagonist. Xiangzi, who enters the scene at the same time as the protagonist, is positioned as a sniper, and positioned as a spiritual system. It is mainly enhanced into telekinesis (refer to the original works Zhan Lan and Zhang Jie). He is naturally able to see through other people's thoughts and has strong communication skills. He is the lubricant between the protagonist and the team. Witch, Mr. Zombie enters, has the ability to see people's death (refer to the original work Zhu Wen), is positioned as an archer, and is strengthened into a special bow and arrow (refer to the original work Zhang Heng and Ming Yanwei). Currently, her mentality is unstable and her sense of survival is not strong. Xiangzi has been guiding her. Monk, Mr. Zombie enters the game. He has no special abilities, but his mentality is very good. Among all the team members, except Xiangzi, he is the fastest to adapt to the main god space. Strengthen into internal force and position in the front row. Soldier, Pirates of the Caribbean, lock-picking wizard, with driving expertise (refer to the original Rogando), a talent designated by the author to be copied by the Devils. Little girl, big sword enters, 11 years old, dual personality. The above 6 people are expected to become stable team members. The other five people all have special characteristics. Monk is relatively ordinary, but he is the front-row position that the team needs more. The professor's female doctor, described in the previous article, looks like a dead ringer. She has betrayed her. The protagonist will be liquidated after the battle. It is estimated that she will not survive the two days of updates. Professor, with a big sword and a talent for research. Currently, his student betrays and is scheduled to die. I don't know what will happen to him, but judging from his performance, his character and mentality are good, and he is expected to stay. Judging from the author's description, he doesn't look like a sidekick who died in several scenes.

It has been the same since Zhanchi. It was originally scheduled to end in twenty-five worlds. Now the protagonist is invincible. If he wants to continue writing, he can only suppress his fighting power. For example, how does the protagonist suppress the rating in order to protect two female pendants? The gap between this book and the speedrun next door is just The reason is that the author's aggressive tricks for the protagonist always make the protagonist feel frustrated at the right time, feel good but not happy, exciting but not exciting, and both sides are unhappy. When I saw Zhao Zukong's attack on the team, I knew that the author was completely dead. It was just to squeeze the protagonist's reward points.

I recently read book reviews and found that many book friends think the difficulty of Donghai Team is too low. Here I will talk about my ideas for designing the copy. The first scene of "The Legend of the Emperor's Blade" The choice of this anime movie is actually to highlight the protagonist's identity as a foreigner in the East China Sea Team. The main characters in the movie are all foreigners. The protagonist happens to be too. In terms of difficulty, I am referring to "Scream 2" in the records of the Central Continent team. When the Central Continent team experienced that horror movie, it happened to have just experienced the team destruction of "A Nightmare on Elm Street". Zhang Jie's special situation was not revealed, and it was basically equivalent to a newcomer field. And who are the enemies in "Scream 2"? It's very simple, there are two knife-wielding murderers, and the main target of the two knife-wielding murderers is the heroine. The main reason why the plot characters are so miserable is that they don't know who the murderer is. The two murderers just appeared and were quickly killed by the heroine and another person. The difficulty of The Legend of the Emperor is very low, but is the difficulty of "Scream" high? No one thinks that two modern people holding daggers are more difficult to deal with than two ancient bandits holding samurai swords, right? Then the second game "The Day After Tomorrow" When I designed this game, I referred to the first "Perfect Storm" that the Nanyanzhou team experienced after the team battle failed. At that time, the mental controller of the Nanyanzhou team and the strongest member of the team with the berserker ability were still alive. In this situation, the main god would arrange a disaster movie. The three protagonists have only gotten through the first scene. It should be normal for pure newcomers who have received guaranteed reward points to arrange a disaster movie that is not very difficult, right? After all, the protagonist is not like Zheng Zha, who can get a B at the beginning. In fact, the Zhongzhou Team also experienced the disaster movie "The Perfect Storm", but it was close to the final battle. It was considered a benefit to the Zhongzhou Team, so I will not make a reference. From the plot point of view, the difficulty of the day after tomorrow is very low. But the task I designed was to go from Tokyo to New York in the environment described in "The Day After Tomorrow". The straight-line distance is more than 10,000 kilometers, and the land drive is estimated to take 20,000 kilometers. There are indeed no monsters in "The Day After Tomorrow". But traveling more than 20,000 kilometers in a blizzard environment of minus 40 to 50 degrees Celsius, to be honest, I think it is no less difficult than escaping from hundreds of zombies. Moreover, at the end of the plot, I directly pointed out that the Lord God seems to have no restrictions, but in fact, he uses the drastic changes in the climate to limit the travel time. The protagonist hurriedly rushed but arrived seven days early. In seven days we will face a more severe storm. In general, the overall difficulty of that horror movie was to cover nearly 20,000 kilometers in one month. To be honest, I always thought that knowledgeable people would think this is too difficult. As for the third game "Mr. Zombie" When designing this game, I was actually designing a weakened version of "The Grudge" When choosing the world, I also carefully considered several alternatives. Finally, I suddenly felt that the Zhongzhou team entered the island country when they experienced the first supernatural movie, and the Donghai team experienced the first supernatural movie in China. This symmetry is actually a kind of tribute. "The Grudge" is difficult, but it should be noted that in the world of "The Grudge", there are not no plot characters that can be relied upon. Zheng Zha and others found a Buddhist scripture from a temple that could resist the power of the curse. And that temple can block the power of Kayako during the day. If it were the protagonist in my novel, he would just spend money to live in a temple. Not to mention whether he is safe at night, at least he can rest well during the day. You can say that the protagonist is useless, but there is no shame in ordinary people looking for help when they are weak. It is very easy for the protagonist to find a partner in the world of "Mr. Zombie"; but if it were a plot like "The Grudge" that takes place in an island country, the islanders of the East China Sea Team would definitely be more efficient in finding partners than Zheng Zha and others. What I want to write here is just a story about an ordinary person surviving and becoming stronger in an infinite world. If I really wanted to write a cheating and entertaining article, I would just choose the Zhongzhou team. Writing a fanfic about entering the Zhongzhou team does not require choosing a world, nor does it need to think about the character design of teammates. The difficulty is much simpler than writing about the East China Sea team. The difficulty of the Donghai team is low, but the main god is very fair. If the difficulty is low, the rewards will naturally be low. With the difficulty level of Donghai Team, the protagonist is slower to gain momentum in the early stage. After the captain certification in the fourth game, I couldn't even suppress the protagonist.

As far as the Main God Space is concerned, I kept thinking that I was unreliable in my childhood, my teammates were unreliable, and I didn't know how I would die in the future. He also took the initiative to create a barrier with his teammates, making it really hard for him to be there when he was really alone. Do you want to fight or not? Believe it or not, your teammates behind you can sell you directly. Two teams can beat you together. Believe it or not.

I rarely read books and comment, but this time I couldn't help it. The reason for not accepting Esdeath is that she is weak. It is simply off the mark. Esdeath's combat performance in the comics, combined with the enhancement of storage space and the development of modern people's brains, as well as her character, it is definitely possible to at least survive the light of the soul. It will be a great help in the final battle. I don't believe that the protagonist's teammates in the later period can have this strength. On the other hand, how many resources did the protagonist consume in total? The current performance is still stuck on nuclear bombs. This kind of thing is only useful in the early stage unless the combat power of saint or above is not included in the later stage! Otherwise, the later stage will be just a decoration. I won't talk about the early combat power of an S before he changed the Tuntun Fruit. Now, an S wants to change his exercises. It's still Buddhist exercises. With these hundreds of thousands of reward points to practice, I really don't know what to say.

I see that many people are talking about the protagonist not wanting to see his teammates, and I think everyone is mistaken. First of all, everyone is right, a team must be formed. First, the Lord God Space will face many different situations. It is impossible for one person to cope with the difficulty in all different directions. It is necessary to form a team to make internal differences and develop. The second is the existence of team battles. Unless you have a powerful plug-in that can blow the main god's head off with one punch, otherwise every team battle will involve more than a dozen, which is simply asking for death. But the problem is that the protagonist is in the East China Sea team, not the Zhongzhou team. If the protagonist is in the Central Continent team, there is no need to compete for the captain, as long as he can have a position in the Central Continent team. If he can't be Zheng Zha Chuxuan, he can still survive until the final battle as Zhan Lan, right? But the protagonist is in the East China Sea team, and there is a natural gap between him and his teammates. Just like the reason why the protagonist voluntarily left the team in the first world "Stranger" - there is no guarantee that he will not become the team's cannon fodder or victim. Originally, the main god's space was just a group of strangers, with no basis for trust at all, and with the debuff of "not my race", it was almost inevitable to be betrayed at a critical moment. Therefore, if the protagonist wants to survive in the East China Sea Team, he must have sufficient dominance! Dominance comes from strength. In other words, the protagonist's own development is the top priority, and you must go back to find teammates! In the Zhongzhou team, it is enough to say "I am useful to the team, and Chu Xuan will not give up on me easily." However, in the Donghai team, it is necessary to say "I am the core of the team, and Chu Xuan does not dare to give up on me." That is, the team must be built with oneself as the leader. Then the question is, how can the protagonist guarantee that he can gain the upper hand by relying on his strength? That's intelligence! The protagonist's understanding of the main god's space is the biggest advantage, so he must always keep his information secret in the early stage. The best way to keep intelligence secret is to keep distance from other people first. There are many smart people in the main god space. For example, in "The Day After Tomorrow", JK immediately realized the important information that "the protagonist's gains from the previous game are not enough for the protagonist to redeem - he can return to the plot world to refresh the plot midway" after the protagonist came back to rescue. The wise man in this team has not yet entered the position. If he casually contacts and waits for the wise man to come in, wouldn't it mean that the protagonist's information will be stripped away in one scene? Considering that there are people like the Zhao brothers and sisters who come in with locks, people like Chu Xuan who are outside the discussion, and people like Cheng Xiao who bring their own skills, I think the protagonist's intelligence advantage must be maintained at least until the second level lock is opened before he can talk about other things. The author obviously thinks so. The protagonist doesn't tell his teammates how to create the best human beings, he doesn't tell his teammates that they can return to the plot world midway to complete the side quests, and in the latest chapters, even though he has teamed up with JK, he still deliberately conceals the existence of the gene lock. (In addition, after teaming up with JK, the protagonist is already helping JK choose strengthening methods. This information can be shared initially. The gene lock is a core secret and should be concealed.) In addition, I think the main god space can only select strangers who have never met each other. Only people who recognize each other after being familiar with each other can be called [teammates]. It is okay to help teammates, but forget about helping strangers.

The protagonist neither unlocks nor cheats and is still alive. How can he play house here? When did the Lord God become so kind to reincarnations?

It was nothing more than blasting Esdeath, and he only blasted a b. What kind of exchange of broken skills are you doing now? If you couldn't practice C level last time, why can't you learn a lesson? Martial arts training is inherently a version trap. I don't have talent and can't quickly form, and Buddhist techniques are not suitable for me. Moreover, I can't see how to interact with existing abilities to form a system. Does the author really think that the protagonist is too strong to follow the plot and wants to control the intensity? ? ? But the protagonist is going to blow up even Esdeath, who is already easy to control. I really don't think there will be a wise man in the future. Visually, in the later stage, if you don't have the combat power to defeat zz, you can't play at all? Play Control Combat Power Now. Are you awake? ? ?

Is this the final destination of every Yuanzu Infinity-flow fan? 😄. In the later stage, they will definitely exert their astonishing wisdom and put aside the wheelchair reinforcements, and start to fight against the readers. Hey, I just don't write what you like to read. I just want to blindly strengthen it and turn it into a black hole of resources and open it up 50/50 to the opponent.

Why are so many people complaining about this part of Esdeath? That's because taking Esdeath into the team as a teammate looks good. I want to see it: First, Esdeath is not a pendant. After joining the team, he can become a real partner. Second, Esdeath is a sex! Grid! Fresh! The bright person is in sharp contrast to other pendant characters who are portrayed as pale and weak. After joining the team, if the plot is well arranged, the overall level of the story can be taken to a higher level. Third, the other supporting characters have basically been reduced to accessories that cannot even beat the Cyborgs, and their portrayal is too pale and weak. The entire story is reduced to the protagonist dragging the entire team forward, which is not good to write. Besides, the author, you are not a great or platinum writer, but this novel of yours is! People! The novel is not an original novel, it was published on a male channel, and most of the readers are male. Most of the male readers of male videos don't like to comment, especially long ones. So you should have something in mind: if there is a plot in your novel that is criticized by many readers, then there must be something wrong with this plot. If there is a problem, it must be corrected. Instead of thinking about arguing with your parents, even if you win the argument, can you increase your subscription? Don't think about how reasonable the plot you designed is, how the protagonist will develop in the future, Esdeath is not strong enough to let the protagonist spend money to hire her or something like that. Say something ugly, you fellow! People! Small! The outline is no different than toilet paper. Now that the plot and preset outline have been criticized by readers, then wipe your butt with the preset outline, flush it down the toilet, change the plot, and then write a new outline. Don't imagine how awesome the protagonist's nine legions are in your mind. Tissue Esdeath is actually worse than toilet paper! Authors who love to go against the expectations of readers will have to be pulled down from the altar and tortured severely even if they are cuttlefish. The outline, setting and plot are contrary to readers' expectations, even worse than toilet paper, understand? If you later choose to change the plot of this novel to let Esdeath join the team, and then change the outline, it means there is hope. On the contrary, if you choose to stick to your own opinion, keep your eyes closed despite the floating clouds and close the moon, and have an iron heart in seeking the truth, then I wish you a great sale of your novel🌹

There are big problems with this plot recently. First of all, Esdeath's income and difficulty are seriously mismatched. Esdeath's fourth-level combat power can never be dispatched with a B-level branch. Apart from that, how much does it cost to exchange the Demonic Essence of her Imperial Gear with the Lord God? Can I win with a b? It's impossible when you think about it. Secondly, "Esdeath is too weak, so there is no need to join the team." This judgment is definitely wrong. Many people can't beat her in the final battle of the original book. Her combat power is definitely up to standard, and she is a ready-made combat power. Even if the protagonist is far stronger than her and feels it is unnecessary, the fact is that the teammates of the Donghai team are far inferior to Esdeath. How much exchange do you have to spend to strengthen your teammates to Esdeath's level? If you feel that these teammates are also unnecessary and the protagonist alone is enough, then you can arrange for all of these teammates to die in the next game to lower the rating. Otherwise, you will always face a problem in the future - you can't even look down on Esdeath's strength, why should these weaklings stay in the team? If it's just to get a branch line, what new teammates can't do it? Why does it have to be Xiangzi? If this plot is not changed, there will always be people comparing these teammates to Esdeath. Finally, why are you so obsessed with changing your exercises? The author himself has clearly stated in the previous article that the protagonist's qualifications are very poor. He can practice "Dragon Elephant" because this technique is stupid and can be practiced by even a fool. Moreover, it is also clear that there is a plot that can be exchanged for other techniques and the result is incomprehensible. Why does the latest chapter use the stupidest method of forced initiation to learn it? The protagonist's bloodline slot is still vacant. I thought it was a matter of course to change to an S-level bloodline. If I don't want to have a godly bloodline, can I make up another S-level? And considering the practical aspect, I don't see how changing the method will help the protagonist's combat effectiveness. The protagonist's current fighting style is mainly based on long-range attacks with technological weapons, rather than close combat. Does the addition of a new advanced skill really match the protagonist's fighting style? Do you have to give up your range advantage to box with your opponent? If you are worried about forbidden technology, wouldn't it be better to change your magical technical abilities or pedigree, continue to strengthen the various equipment made by the protagonist, and take the path of combining science and magic?

First of all, the plot is too slow! In fact, it is completely unacceptable that the protagonist gives up the rewards and side plots when he is not sure whether he can survive tomorrow! As for inner demons, under normal circumstances no reward points or side plots are allowed! Your protagonist can't even survive the second level!

After reading so many comments, I feel that the focus of most readers is not on killing Esdeath or not, but on strengthening the whole thing. If you say you shouldn't be killed, no one will say anything if the author himself explains it in a few sentences. After all, women can only be ranked second in Shuangwen 😜. I have other opinions about Esdeath. First of all, the author said that Esdeath is not very strong (relative to the protagonist) and can only clear out the miscellaneous soldiers. In fact, that is correct. The problem is that if Esdeath is not valuable, then all the newcomers in the entire Donghai team will have no value. I don't think any newcomer can catch up with Esdeath in three scenes. In terms of appearance, there is no one who is prettier than her in reality. In terms of strength, as mentioned above, and in terms of growth potential, it is obvious that the newcomer is not good, unless the author sends Chu Xuan in. In terms of control level, there are newcomers in the dungeon from time to time. Although it does not cause any big trouble, it is annoying to see too much.        ，，，， If you bring a plot character into the space, you will be compared with Esdeath again. If you can't compare, you will be scolded. The result is that the protagonist may be the only one left in the entire Tokaido, and everything else can be discarded. It is impossible to add any new characters.

The protagonist cannot grasp Esdeath and insists on describing her as useless.

Is it a breeding team? I have been looking forward to the protagonist of the breeding team since ten years ago

Selling dog meat with a sheep's head, what kind of theory is this? Also, the title of the novel is not reflected at all, it is all written in one stroke, and it is all about science and technology. The first two copies are also mediocre and hard to read.

Author, are you getting sick and starting to write blindly? These two chapters are really a bit sick 1. Esdeath's rewards are low. Regardless of the comic version or anime version, her strength is definitely not weak, and she is enough to fight in the final battle and the beginning of the fourth battle. The result is only a B. This is not because other teams in the Zhongzhou team are not as cheating. You did it on purpose, right? 2. The plot development is too sloppy. There are many plots to be written in Zhan Crimson Eyes, but they are all mentioned in one stroke. If you can write, you can write even more than a dozen chapters, but if you can't write, it's better to explain clearly 3. Selling dog meat over sheep's heads, the day in the East China Sea, the characterization is too one-sided and too little! I recommend you to watch Infinite Horror: Being Breed by the Senju Team at the Beginning! The protagonist in the movie is a member of the breeding team! The character creation is much better than yours. Sometimes Liao Liao can bring a character to life with just a few strokes. Moreover, the team members who are capable of being obedient will stay, and those who are disobedient will be kept under mental control. Cruel but flesh and blood! This book even has problems with the main character, who doesn't have any personality like a tool 4. The main character's broken redemption is really a matter of internal strength, can't he just cultivate himself! If the protagonist is really talented, he should take the path of cultivating runes. Science and magic are integrated. Only when the level of knowledge and technology is improved can resources be better utilized. Zheng Zha's internal energy in the original work has turned into true energy! It can be said that the internal strength is excessive, and cultivation is the upper level of internal strength. Without Wang Zongchao's talent in the Infinite Way Warrior Road, don't die in martial arts 5. The character of the protagonist really does not conform to the Buddhist line. The enhancement is too rigid, as if he is being manipulated by a powerful person. The team should also take care of it. There are always moles causing trouble. One or two plots of betrayal are enough, but too many are just mentally retarded!

Author, have you made a mistake? If the protagonist has this level of strength, why should he arrange a Fellowship of the Ring? What kind of trick are you playing to win people over? What's the point? In the original work, Zheng Zha began to kill gods in the fourth chapter of The Lord of the Rings. 😅

💔 The Black Hand of the East China Sea did not learn the essence of not deleting the post after being criticized for this book. After insisting on not deleting it for a few days, I still couldn't help but delete the post about my drug test. The other deletion was the Sea Tiger World. It's really hard to find a book that doesn't have reviews these days.

She's obviously very good-looking, why did she do it?

Resurrection, author Qiu Mingshan!

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To be honest, this novel is quite interesting. The choice of Tifa for creating humans is really smooth, and the fighting and strengthening are also very strong. Unfortunately, it was too violent in the end and it crashed, so I couldn't write it.

This book was very good in the early stage. It basically outperformed other books. It was pulled as soon as it was released. The protagonist basically turned into a camera, with no performance or operation. A good subject was wasted