Douluo: Martial Soul Winged Dragon, You Say I Am an Evil Soul Master?

Multiple female protagonists (tentatively there are about five) Huo Shuangbiao has changed her gender and is one of the female protagonists (what can be said is that she started developing it before Huo Yun'er sent it, so don't force it if you can't accept it) Anti-Shrek, but the plot requires that you will go to the early stages of the story Lake will probably leave after the first soul master competition in the original work Although the protagonist has an evil spirit, he is not an evil soul master in the sense of the original work. Readers who like to kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, please note The rest will be added

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Now Douluo rises and loser rises again

First of all, I am not a full-time writer. In reality, I have something to do and have a side job. Now, I mainly write online articles because I like it, and then I want to try to write out the plot in my head. In addition, the front part of this book is indeed a bit big, so Quanqinzhi has booked it in advance I respect all suggestions. For readers, I usually explain based on the plot and the original work. For example, in the case of Xu Sanshi, there is indeed an example of bullying by this person in the original work Like this kind of reader friends, some opinions put forward will be listened to and modified. As long as it does not involve large-scale changes and subsequent plots, it is still more acceptable. I advise Many readers have also raised the issue of the previous three chapters, but this involves important plots and settings that cannot be cut, and can only be postponed. The problem with postponement is that the 85 chapters that have been sent out and the 100+ archived manuscripts have to be changed. Some people may say that why not Rewrite, this rewrite is because I don't have time, and secondly, it doesn't make sense. If you put this plot at the end and people are still spitting poison, you might as well put it at the beginning and filter it out The main reason why I say these things suddenly is that some of the recent comments have been excessive. At best, they are disrespectful to others, and at worst, they are too full to criticize. "I can't stand it after seeing more than ten chapters, so I thought it was a platinum master", "Don't write another one, just rewrite it, no one will read it anyway", and what kind of "restart with a new account" To put it bluntly, akbk, I have been working hard, can I still be humble to you? It's more utilitarian and you won't read it anyway. I scold this kind of people when I see them Finally, I'm not RMB, and neither are the books I write. Everyone has their own preferences, some like multiple female protagonists, some like pure love, some like bulldozers. There are so many online articles to read whatever you want Just read if you think it's okay. Support me and give me a warm welcome. Thank you very much, but if you have to say something ridiculous, don't blame me for criticizing you.

Probably like this

Don't let down a good girl, don't let a bad girl go to waste

The protagonist goes to Shrek Academy, so I won't watch it.

Wait, this Winged Dragon should be the one I thought of. Will it also change forms? First it was a ball, then its normal form, and finally its phoenix form.

At the moment, there are some secondary designs at the grain and grass level, but those secondary designs are acceptable and don't have any major problems. I also want to complain, you have too many heroines, some of them are invisible and have almost no role. If you write more heroines, at least give other heroines more roles, otherwise it will be like collecting stamps. Unlike some fan writers who like to have secondary designs, they are all over the place.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can't stand it anymore. Let me share my personal opinion. This main plot is basically the same as Yu-Gi-Oh. Without playing Yu-Gi-Oh, it is difficult to know the general identity of the protagonist, and it is confusing to watch. Some of these things are hard for non-enthusiasts to get their hands on. Also, the multiple female protagonists are not harems, and basically everyone is welcome. There are already 7 or 8 female protagonists in more than 100 chapters, and many of them have no description, no characteristics at all, and are purely tools. Then I took a look. It has over half a million words, but there are still so few comments. I guess many people can't stand it. My advice to authors is that they can write fan fiction, but they should focus on the world they write about. They can add their own things, but not too much, otherwise the readers will have a very average impression. Even if you set up a protagonist who only has the Winged Dragon Spirit and nothing else, it will be fine. Just set the Winged Dragon to be higher than the Dragon God. The heroine can choose some that she likes and is popular to write about, and it can be about daily life. From the current point of view, Huo Niang and Dugu Yue are okay. Others have no special features and are basically pendants. The popular female characters that Douluo II can still include are basically Snow Emperor, Ice Emperor, Gu Yuena, Rui Shou, Wang Dong'er, Xiaoxiao, Meng Hongchen, Ning Tian, ​​Wu Feng, and Ma Xiaotao. The last five are all average. The suggestion is to write about daily life, which can not only portray the image of the heroine, but also improve the number of words, and also alleviate the shortcomings of Douluo's empty content.

If guys like Xuanzi attack the protagonist later and don't kill them on the spot, then the foreshadowing and forcefulness will collapse.

I feel that the writing is pretty good, and the author's attitude is good. I will change my opinion when I see it, but I feel that very few people read it...

As long as it's girly, I'll watch it for a while