American Comics: Riding but Transformers

Write well, your imagination has great potential. Nowadays, all the knight stories on the Internet can be said to be a desert. Don't engage in emotional lines. Focus on shaping the characters. You can properly shape the spirit of chivalry. But don't change the text just because some readers say they like to kill decisively. Don't, because it will easily collapse the theme. In addition, if you feel that you are going to collapse and change the world, don't leave it as a souvenir, otherwise the main plot will be sent. Also, remember not to open it too large.

To be honest, the creativity is good, but the plot is too casual and too deliberate. When it comes to killing Megatron, I saw the protagonist start talking nonsense after turning on the re-acceleration. I didn't even need to look at the back, I knew that Megatron would never die. It was too deliberate. Otherwise, you said there was not enough energy, or there was a problem with the re-acceleration system and could not be turned on. Nothing could be written better than this. I understand that I want to follow the plot, but it is too bad for the viewing experience.

Question: The protagonist took away the son from a mother, and wanted to trick Adam into calling him daddy. Not only that, he also controlled the big head and wanted to throw Adam Warlock to the Black Widow as a collectible. Earlier, he also took it upon himself to transform Nebula to make enemies for himself, allowing Master Titanium to face the pressure of Adam's mother and Nebula's father. But he got all the benefits Conclusion: What he did was almost a low-level job, and he didn't have to bear any responsibility. Is this worthy of being a Kamen Rider or an Autobot lieutenant? I frowned and saw now, this is not Kamen Rider, this is Rider Weird 😥

If you don't write about Kamen Rider, I can still read it

There are many versions of Transformers I mainly watched the movies, Proof of the Leader and Transformers Origin About the transformation of the protagonist There are transformation forms and tire swaps in Kamen Rider Drive Transformation forms, I will choose the leader in Transformers Tire Exchange Instead, I chose ordinary Autobots or Decepticons So you will find in the book that the transformation form has a separate gear-shifting chariot, and there is no other If you have any Transformers you want to see, or the combination of Transformers, you can leave a message The new book issue needs to be read, thank you very much

Steady kill of Megatron resulted in a lot of fun. Stupid can

I said why did you write about Kamen Rider and comics again? It turns out you are the one The creativity is really good, but the writing is not good if it is arranged too hastily. The plot is the same as a running account, and it is not good to follow the original plot, and the writing is more hollow Really, the author, practice your writing, make the protagonist and supporting characters more vivid, and change the strength and form more gradually Don't think that it is one after another, there is not enough foreshadowing, it is really watery The family ethics of KiVa should be written in the previous book. In addition, there is something like American Comic Hell, which is less well-known. Apart from the original plot of the Ghost Rider movie and some other American horror works, you can only find it in comics, and you can't control it Really, this book is well written, please rely more on Transformers , there are so many movies out there, not to mention anime: The Leader's Witness Trilogy, the plot can be written for a long time if you follow along with peace of mind, don't jump too much, don't think that it will come out as soon as it comes out, otherwise how could your last book be finished in more than 200 pictures

I heard people say you are a girl? 😍

Now Kamen Rider is a piece of shit, I saw it and just rowed it away

If you want to write about Qingtian Sheng and the others, it can't be a gear-shifting chariot. The 01 sublimation program key and the extinction program key are very suitable.

In fact, the author can definitely write about human-machine love. It is best to include more Shura fields between Arcee and Black Widow 😁 After all, there is a scene in Transformers G1 where Arcee and a human boy confess their love to each other 🤭

I watched until Tony woke up. I will not judge the latter part, but I will make a few comments on the former part. 1. The drive speed can increase the ultimate move because Soy Milk Extra Rich is initially a sports car, so it can kick in circles. As a truck, Zhuzhu brother, I suggest changing the form of the ultimate move, otherwise it will be embarrassing and have no characteristics of its own. 2. The plot is too fast, as if it was improvised without an outline, written simply to show what you want to write.

The plot is too ordinary, especially the plot that is deliberately created to make people doubt the protagonist's IQ. The novel is not a film and television drama, and film and television dramas will also be scolded for deliberately creating plots. Make a plan and complete the plan, rather than what omissions were made in the middle or what went wrong in the ending and let go of the enemy who could have been killed.

I suddenly thought of Transformers plus Ship Girl's Mind Cube. Brother Zhuzhu becomes Sister Zhuzhu, which means there is a female protagonist 😍😍😍

... It's such a beast. After killing so many ordinary people, he almost kidnapped and killed Little Spider's family, but in the end, Little Tou controlled Big Tou to accept Black Widow. I couldn't bear it. As a result, Loki turned around and killed Ghost Rider's friends. The protagonist runs around and indirectly kills people, which leads to the conflict between the two parties. The protagonist just stands aside and watches and feels sorry for his own ax? ? ? Belt-san won't help such a giant baby

Of course Black Widow is not impossible either🤤🤤🤤

Alas, those who write about the Marvel series are all carved from the same mold It's not a question of whether it's sweet or not, it's just a matter of sticking out your neck and letting others chop it.

A protagonist who cannot attribute his power to himself is not worth watching.

It's a bit dizzying to read. There are too few other descriptions in the middle. In other words, there is too little water. Maybe the dry food is a bit hard to swallow.

It's a bit bt🙂 I always feel that the author wants the protagonist to play side by side with the female robot😆

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After reading more than a hundred chapters, author, do you really want to bring Wanda and Optimus Prime together? I'll leave if you play like this. I haven't been able to get the character arc of Scarlet Witch. I just think she's magical.

I just found this novel. It looks good at the beginning. I hope it gets better and better later on. I hope the author can capture the core of Kamen Rider. What is the core? It is chivalry. As long as you can grasp this core and keep it, I promise you that I will follow this book to explain. I understand chivalry. I hope to see that the protagonist's chivalry is exclusive to the protagonist, because every knight's chivalry is different. But in summary, it can be protected in one sentence. Kamen Rider Kuuga protects everyone's smiles, Yajida protects the possibility of human beings, and 555 protects other people's dreams. W, Shou What he protects is the city he is in. The old driver protects the citizens. Exide is the ultimate rescue and protects the patients. Kamen Rider Soki protects love and peace. Even Wang Xiaoming, who walks in the gray area, has something to protect, which is his girlfriend's world. In order to protect his girlfriend's world, he will not hesitate even if he is an enemy of all the knights. When he was a Kamen Rider, what the king protected was history. If history runs normally, no one will remember him? Including himself, but once someone interferes with the correct direction of history, the Knight King will appear and correct this mistake. Therefore, every Kamen Rider has chivalry. What is chivalry? It is the belief that you persist in. No matter it is good or bad, as long as you protect you, you are a Kamen Rider. Regardless of whether your guardian is someone else or yourself, chivalry is the only difference between a weirdo and a knight. Knights with chivalry are called masks. Knights without chivalry can only be called weirdos, or alien knights. The reason why alien knights look so ugly is because they use this power to satisfy their own selfish desires and their evil hearts. This kind of appearance comes from the heart. This is a strange knight. Because he has no knight's heart and spirit, that's why his appearance is so ugly. I suggest you find your predecessor, the Mask, Knight, and Rider who lives in the DC world. His name is Ke Wen. Learn from him and develop your own Kamen Rider form. You always use other people's discriminatory forms. When you go to the show in the future, you will meet two identical ones. Wouldn't you feel embarrassed? Therefore, it is best to create your own knight form. Only this knight form that is exclusive to you can exert 100% of your original power, or even reach 1000%, to use your strength. The specific words of chivalry are that when you hear the voice for help, you cannot ignore it, and you will lend a helping hand when you meet people in difficulty. Kamen Riders are not gods, they are also human beings, and they will also fail, but for the sake of the children, they hope for themselves The dreams in your heart, no matter how many times they fail, they will stand up. Even if many people in this world are against Kamen Rider, as long as there is one person who still needs Kamen Rider to call out the name of Kamen Rider, they will appear, because they are warriors who protect the weak. Children, go forward. Believe in the justice in your heart and go forward. We will always protect you because we are the heroes of children. The reason why Kamen Rider is a knight is because of the heart of a knight. Otherwise, what is the difference between it and a supernatural novel? In addition, don't ignore the essence of chivalry. Don't write the protagonist as miserable as most knight novels. The essence of the knight's heart is not that the protagonist wants to protect others no matter how miserable he is, but that he never forgets the heart of protecting others no matter when and where. What is a knight's heart? Heart, what is idealism? Some people do it for the hope of others, some people do it to protect smiles, some people do it for love and peace, some people do it for the health of patients, some people fulfill their obligations, some people do it to make a living, some people do it for the community, no matter what they do, knights are a group of lovely guys who have a reason to fight. Just like Xiao Ming said in the last chapter of Master Fa, knights never fight for justice. There is always a reason to fight. This is a comment I saw elsewhere. I hope I can also see the chivalry of the protagonist. Fight to protect what you love or something. Don't give up that tenderness. It's up to you to protect the bond with this world.

Can't everyone join this group? Why am I not allowed in? And I ordered them all. I read them separately on Qidian and QQ Reading. If you have the money, you can read them there.

There is a question. Assuming that Optimus Prime changes into a galloping armor, should it be life-size or larger? When it gets bigger, it becomes a Gundam pendant. If it's a body, is it considered strengthened or weakened?

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Wouldn't the author consider letting Brother Xiao Ming make a guest appearance?