It Starts with the Liar Game

It suddenly occurred to me that the confused father-in-law and mother-in-law would definitely get into trouble at this time, so I typed and mailed it directly.

Some of the ideas in the novel are quite novel, and the content of the story is quite substantial. The author revised it quickly after feedback about typos or clerical errors, so it is not a studio article. It looks good, overall "food and grass +", a few plots can barely reach the level of grass jelly.

It was a headache to watch. The first game gave people the feeling that it was a garbage semi-finished product without a good design. The main character complained very well about the rubbish planning. In other words, I feel like the characters are a bit weak, and the rules and plot narrative are weird. You can see, hay.

The author's writing is very smooth. I hope I can keep writing.

There are a lot of holes to be dug and various Riddlers. The author should have a good grasp of the situation. You don't give any clues. Even if the foreshadowing breaks out in the end, it is more about the original situation and the feeling of being solved, rather than how awesome the protagonist is or how great what he does. You have to at least write what the protagonist did. You don't write a single word. After a few chapters, you say that the protagonist has a backup plan. To be honest, it is baffling and you can't understand how awesome the protagonist is.

The book is okay, but there are indeed some holes in the details. The most important thing is that there are too few updates. If your volume is larger and faster, no one will pursue those loopholes, and they will only enjoy watching them.

This writing style will become popular sooner or later as long as there are no eunuchs.

It's very beautiful, why is there no one there?

Let me taste it. Is this a piece of shit or a piece of food?

The plot at the beginning is too confusing and misses the point.