Pirate's Black Hand

Damn, what are you talking about about the eldest brother and the second brother? What the hell are you doing, do you think this is the world of martial arts? Not all pirates call them by their first names.

By the way, the three protagonist brothers should not have been in the navy for many years, right? It feels like it will take less than ten years at most. When the three protagonist brothers grow up, they will leave the navy for various reasons and become kings on their own... So, while the protagonist is not noticed by the world government and develops in the navy in a low-key manner, we can also intercept those strong people with good potential who appeared in the original work (such as Zoro, Kuina, Sanji, Law, Kira, Ain, etc.), Recruit them all into their own family camp, and train and grow together! When the protagonist and the others break away from the navy and are wanted by the world government, these friends will be his foundation to fight against the navy and the world government! Of course, even if the protagonist does not plan to leave the navy and wants to be a naval admiral or even a marshal, that doesn't matter. These friends who were cut off in advance can also stand behind the protagonist and change the direction of corruption in the navy together! 🙂🙂

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The eldest brother, the second brother, the third brother. It's like the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. What a drama. The Dover family, the Capone family, and even BigMam are not called that.

There are a few points in it that would be much better if changed 1. The names of the three protagonist brothers have always been the eldest, second and third brother, Balabala. This is the world of One Piece, not the world of Martial Arts and Water Margin. It is normal to use it occasionally, but it would be too dramatic to use it from beginning to end. 2. Of the three fruits, if they fit the original work, only Ace's Balrog Fruit matches. In the original work, Sabo also took the Burning Fruit and was able to use the Dragon Claw Fist. From this point of view, the Red Dragon Fruit is more suitable for Sabo, and the remaining Gale Fruit is more suitable for the protagonist to be a mobile natural disaster 3. The time plot is not dealt with. The time span is too big. Ten years have passed by in one go. The protagonist is directly 18, and Ace is 15 years old. Luffy seems to be 3 years younger than Ace? Still 2 years old. At this time, he went directly to the East China Sea to have a fight with Smoker. The time in between was not reflected at all. The protagonist went to sea with Garp when he was 15 years old, and there was no movement in 3 years 4. Regarding Ace's psychological problems as the sinner's son, Ace's heart has been suffering in the original work, even with Sabo and Luffy It was the same after we became sworn friends, even when we were in the Whitebeard Pirates. When I was chatting with Garp in prison and on the execution ground, I still felt sorry for everyone, and I didn't let go until the moment I died. But once I became sworn friends with the protagonist, there seemed to be no problem, and the protagonist didn't enlighten me much 5. The protagonist is a As a time traveler, except for the plot of the three brothers Garp, the location of the Golden Country, and the sea floor stone training method, the others do not feel that there is a good plan. Why did you join the navy, the significance of joining the navy, the layout and planning after the navy, your own ideals, etc. These are not reflected. One Piece does not talk about dreams, are you really If it doesn't get popular, even if you want to eat and die, it's still a dream to kill the people who prevent you from being a bastard. The main character in the book next door who has accomplished nothing is shouting that he wants to be a bandit, a big landlord, rob gold and silver, rob the rich (for the rich and unkind people), and help the poor (himself). That book is quite popular, and that book often writes about the protagonist's dream of a big landowner.

So far, it's pretty good. Good luck, author I also want to ask the author, will the protagonist eat the fruit in the future?

I want to see the protagonist tell the enemy that he has never seen the Black Hand, right? Be careful I let you fly.

You little bastard, have you never seen a black hand? Do you dare to gesticulate with me?

I once read a novel. Red dragons eat magma to survive (you know it). Just like black dragons eat corrupt animals, green dragons eat plants, and colorful dragons eat ores to enhance their imagination. Otherwise, Kaido Qinglong can use wind and thunder to make fire. This red dragon is too bad, not as good as Punk Hassad's artificial pink dragon fruit.

After reading it, the author felt cold. Maybe it was an illusion?

Turn yourself into a stitch monster? I really can't accept it