After the Taoist Couple Was Deposed, the Fairy Who Coveted Me Took Action.

The lazy author fainted while writing? 😡

This book is like a woman who keeps making you happy. At first, if you can accept her, you'll keep watching until you get bored. If you are disgusted with this woman who only treats you inappropriately from the beginning, don't read this book anymore.

The male protagonist's apprentice is mentally confused due to external forces, and he is still talking about the time when they were the only two masters and apprentices in the family. I always feel that I have seen a similar plot somewhere... Oh, it's the Blue Files, Little Bird Game and Sensei's 30 Years, Sagittarius, Golden Ring Ahem, to get back to the subject, I also feel that the male protagonist is too effeminate. Maybe it was written this way because it was necessary to arrange a plot in which the male protagonist was passive? Or does the author prefer this passive male role? I guess it's the latter You see, it's very common for tough guy characters to be passive every day. Of course, the tough guy next door has a clear understanding of his heart and will not avoid his inner feelings like the male protagonist of this book That tough guy character knows that both parties are important to him, and then he is in a dilemma for his whole life. The senses are much better than the male protagonist of this book. Although Mapo, Mapo's character is understandable. I am also forced to make choices every day by my relatives. I look unhappy every day, and I have been kidnapped by my family for my whole life. But it doesn't make people feel weak at all So, there is actually no logical contradiction between a tough guy and a passive person The male protagonist written by the author can only be said to be liked by readers within the audience range, but it will be awkward for readers outside the range

Watching this makes my blood boil, please update more

Okay, okay, this book is also called Qiongming Shenjunlu, right?

😄 The authors of Fairy and Qiongming both became good at the starting point

I'm such a cool guy, there are six female protagonists listed in the character list in less than thirty chapters, and the materials produced by the small workshop are fierce.

As soon as the mistress' gender was changed, he changed from a minotaur to a romantic comedy. The world was really turned upside down.

Author, this is a male video! The male protagonist is so cautious, cowardly, and even a little humble. He doesn't seem to have cultivated a Taoist heart at all, so he is still a swordsman! The hero and the Taoist couple have been together for so many years, can't they still trust each other? Is it difficult for Taoists to understand me by openly telling them about my past affairs? Just like this, the male protagonist is still a warrior of pure love. He should become Shang Miaoyan's star wrath again soon!

I read more than a hundred chapters in one go, let me tell you my feelings. I can understand that this book is a sexual inversion of that novel, so the male protagonist sometimes behaves indecisively and feels useless, as if he has been raped. But the male protagonist is too passive, he never takes the initiative. Maybe it's because I rarely read this kind of novel, but the protagonist's loss of initiative really made me feel uncomfortable. Let's talk about the major female protagonists. Almost all of them use various evil ways to achieve their goals, which makes me feel like a villain is succeeding. I see that few of them like them now. I don't want to point fingers at the author. I just hope that in the subsequent plot, how much they have obtained through evil ways and how far they have progressed in the strategy will be doubly counterproductive later on, instead of just making dumplings happily.

Can you write a lifelong record of Qiong Ming Shenjun? Oh Nei!

A nice novel that makes my brain spin👍

Reverse tweet, it's a pity that the male protagonist's image is too useless. He has obviously traveled to the world of immortal cultivation, and there is no limit on the number of immortal Taoist companions. The protagonist is bound to one, and he must either be an honest person in the 21st century, or openly express his intention when the other party sees it, and in the meantime, the male protagonist is quite speechless!

I feel that Cricket Starting Point limits the author's talent a bit. Promise me, my author is great. If the book is gone, go to Qidian and continue to publish it.

Let's put it this way, if you switch the gender of the pig's feet, you will understand this novel and you can't stand it.

I'm quitting porn recently. I'm sorry, the author has to say goodbye.

I was his first disciple. Those days were the best times of my life. Twenty years ago, he took me out of the cold snowy night in the capital and placed me beside him. We spent some time together, just him and me, master and disciple. Before his junior sister and junior wife appeared, he only paid attention to and nurtured me. A bond formed between us that is unbreakable. Stronger than the bond between junior sisters - even junior wives, because none of them had ever spent as much time with him as I had. Twenty years. Not that long, I thought. Twenty years is just one heartbeat compared to twenty thousand years. But even so. I still cherish that time. He taught me everything. "——This was never what I wanted!" "You betrayed your Taoist companions and panicked your disciples!" "If I can't save you from your failure, Master..." "Then let Hangong Jianfu burn!" ——Please watch the next episode: Qingyueqiu Rebellion!

Mainly, it's too passive. I like to be more proactive. It feels like you have to sell yourself in the end after trying your best. The previous ones I watched all started selling directly, and the plot was a bit over the top.

To be honest, I was a little annoyed watching it. Just by changing the genders, the female protagonists are all scumbags, the kind that no one will pity if they all die. Only Ye is better. Although it is against ntr, it has to be like this. But I still can't help but fantasize about when Lao Pei will stand up. Or maybe Feng Aotian can redeem him.

If the gender is switched, everything will be different

Author, I have a plan. You can change this unattractive title to "Two or Three Things About the Sword Fairy Who Becomes Fascinating After His Wife Is Incompetent". This book will at least reach the top 20 of the bestseller list.

If it were a second creation of other novels, I would definitely criticize it, but this is Qiong Nu's second creation, so I can only say that it's a very good job 👍

The author is a human being. He can seduce the protagonist anywhere on the roadside. Yueqiu cannot, and he even puts a curse on him. Is he sick?

If you are threatened by an editor, just blink 🥵

There is nothing to forcibly reduce the intelligence, for example, the master feels that when the crisis comes, he does not recruit help and drags it on, but it is true that the plot development is a bit deliberate and unfamiliar. I have always felt that stories are like playing billiards, colliding with each other, turning when encountering obstacles, and rebounding when encountering setbacks. But try not to apply a second force or pretend to change the ball.

It's finally over. The ending is generally good, but it feels too rushed and makes people unable to feel the emotions. If there can be a sequel to continue the story and Ji Shen Yun, it will be more perfect.

Male protagonist character picture→_→

I'm super, why is it over? There will be an extra chapter, right? At least fill in all the things that need to be filled in.

I don't think I even saw the protagonist's sword spirit in the end? Missing?

Is this the end? 😡