From Spider Alley to Hogwarts

There are some bugs in the article For example, when I just subscribed, there was a huge bug that the patron saint is a crucible, and the patron saint has more than one form. Please fix it, it's awesome 😒😒😒

After I entered the school, the quality changed from high-quality fan fiction to studio writing, and the front and back were also quite fragmented. I couldn't read it.

No, did the author forget the "International Statute of Secrecy" in the wizarding world? And riding a broom to Diagon Alley to buy medicinal materials openly?

Am I wrong? The heroine is an owl?

I think the Daphne tsundere type is also good, but unfortunately it seems that the author didn't want to arrange it this way. It's okay if Daphne can't be the heroine, but Hermione is not the heroine. Too many stories are about Hermione, so it's a bit new and unique. The werewolf sister is fine too.

Not long after it was released, it became eunuch. Warning.

The first few chapters look good, but there are too few. Come on, author.

That... Part of the Patronus Charm might be a little overdone? Have you considered making small modifications? Provide some inspiration, For example, using Chimera is a good idea, The prototype of Chimera, The lion represents its "power" feature; the sheep part represents its The characteristics of "evil" (also said to be intelligent) (corresponding to the protagonist's potential for black magic); the hooves on the hind limbs represent the characteristics of "agility"; the snake on the tail (dragon tail in HP) represents the characteristics of "wisdom" and "cunning". No wings but can fly (some versions). In short, one body has multiple qualities. In the symbolic sense of mythology, Chimera means "impossible ideas", "unrealistic dreams" or anything we can imagine but cannot achieve. And this just corresponds to the characteristics of the protagonist, the omnipotent hexagonal talent and achievements, Becoming a legend in every magical field with extraordinary efficiency, The "chimera" at the pinnacle of all magical fields (chimera in English is chimera) Isn't this an "impossible idea" and an "unrealistic dream"? The protagonist is the reality of this fantasy in this world.

It looks good. The werewolf girl should be able to change back based on the foreshadowing. However, according to the current plot, the protagonist should be three or four years old. Maybe the author will arrange some kind of adventure.

The writing is good, but I feel like the title of the book is not very suitable.

Is the author currently writing a new book?

Is Sprout now a Sprout?

The protagonist's magic potion just delays the last step of preparing the potion to avoid the problem of short shelf life. It is essentially the same potion, right? So because potion masters look down on Squibs, no one has ever tried to give Squibs a magic potion in the past?