Madam, Please Ascend

But Song Xinci's brilliance completely overshadowed the other female characters. The emotional scenes between Song Xinci and Yun Yi were very well written, making people feel that their relationship is stronger than gold. However, the emotional scenes between the male protagonist and others were too thin and left no impression. The author didn't think about how to accept other female characters, but he couldn't accept them forcefully. As a result, the protagonist could only pretend to be stupid and drag her along. It felt like I was watching a single female protagonist, but the male protagonist was having an affair with many female characters at the same time. He wanted to have a harem but couldn't. If he couldn't, he couldn't. I would like to suggest that if you want to write about a harem in the next book, you should deal with it carefully. If the emotional drama between the male protagonist and the female protagonists is too focused on one person, the others should not be too delayed In fact, I would recommend writing a single female protagonist in the next book. In fact, with your writing skills, you don't necessarily have to rely on a harem to create excitement or promote the plot I was attracted to Yun and Song's emotional line, so I will insist on finishing this book.

The author's old-fashioned taste overflows the screen

This writing style is definitely not a newbie, either a reincarnation of soldiers or a demon from outside the territory.

What! It's actually free of charge, so what does my full reservation the day before yesterday count for?

The problem with single and multiple heroines lies in the scale of description, whether there are too many ambiguous descriptions with other female characters. If there are many, write more, and less if they are single. I hope the author will confirm the idea early and not write an ambiguous article, which will start and end in the middle and later stages 😢

The writing is sophisticated, like the reincarnation of Lao Deng

Many books cannot be picked up once they reach the pursuit stage. This one is quite interesting and attracts people to follow it, but the results are too dismal.

At least I think the score is low for this book.

When will the introductory content be released? Let's watch it at that time. I like to foreshadow as long as I can, so as not to end up seeing half of it.

Urgent, urgent, urgent, the author updates quickly, I want to see blood flowing like a river. I want to see my husband's crematorium and torture him severely

So the author is going to develop a few 😌 I really like the subtle relationship between Xin Ci and Yun Yi. Su Qing is just a gentle sister at the moment, and Suzaku is not very smart, but they are both promising. Wish you to handle the relationship between the heroines well, and don't ruin the design of a single heroine for the sake of multiple heroines.

Doesn't the author have the entire character card?

Why does it have such a strong female flavor? It's just that the male protagonist's name is almost meaningless. Shouldn't the surnames Fu, Gu, Lu, and Shen be standard in female videos?

1. The jokes are fun 2. The writing is okay 3. I like the plot 4. I don't understand the world view.

The writing is quite good, I like it very much, but it has nothing to do with the introduction.

It's surprisingly good. The author's writing style is of a popular level. Maybe it will be a big seller when the opportunity comes. I gave all my monthly tickets after reading only a few chapters. I hope the author can maintain this level and not write about dog-licking men and turtle men.

Finally arrived at Senior Sister Su's! After the main palace ran away, the side chambers started to work hard 🤐

I read a few more chapters last night and they were pretty good. I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and now I am very picky. I either read books that are purely light-hearted and enjoyable, or I read books that are good in terms of writing and plot. The author's level is good. The character creation, wording and sentence construction, plot advancement, and the setting of the monastic background are all good. It can be seen that the author has worked hard in this aspect to check the information and understand it. Immortal grass is still far away, but from my point of view, as long as the popularity of this book is followed by subscriptions and readings, and if the data is enough, as long as the level does not drop, I will definitely become a great author. The author's level is really good. It's not like a new author, and it has the flavor of ancient martial arts. It's really good to read. I hope that the data of this book will get better and better, and it is best to be promoted to a great master. After all, it is a good work by a good author, and I feel comfortable with it 😎

Isn't the Way of Heaven a bit stretchy? What does it mean that it was created by humans sacrificing girls? Can it be called the Way of Heaven that was created in response to humans praying for protection?🙂

Doesn't this book make a book club? I feel like the writing style is quite to my liking, but the data doesn't seem to work well.

I've finished watching it again, I'll save it for next year 😄

I didn't expect that the content of the introduction was at the later stage of the story.

Too little, not enough to see

Quick update🙂

Song Xinci

There is something awkward about eating, drinking, prostitution and gambling at the beginning. They can be said to be four hobbies. We take these four things very seriously, but there is no need to rely on them in every sentence. Eating meat and drinking blood is too far-fetched. It is purely about curiosity. When eating, you like delicious food, and when you drink, you like fine wine or other rare liquids.

Update quickly

I thought I could still write, and that would be the end of it 🙂

Why don't many people watch it? I really think it's pretty good 😰

Please support my monthly ticket and work hard for the next book. The author's writing skills are very good