Elves? Prepare to Welcome Your Slave Master!

The current story feels padded. So much has been written about the elf and the maid, yet there's still no revenge plot. The elf has appeared for so many chapters, and the protagonist is still unaware of his rebirth. Personally, I think it's too much filler. Also, the part about giving the maid to the father is a flaw.

Well, so far, the protagonist's conclusion after his rebirth is that those races he helped betrayed him because they were ungrateful and brainwashed by the "protagonist's halo." Therefore, whatever the protagonist does to them is justified and justified. But ultimately, the biggest reason is that the protagonist is just an ordinary person, and he betrayed his own class first.

After reading one and a half chapters, it's hard not to wonder if the author is even an adult.

The comments are ridiculous; it's just a childish game with a diode as the main character.

It seems like a formulaic story from the old Cat Station: a reborn villainous woman's regret plus the protagonist's revenge. The plot sounds like a studio-produced story. 🙂 The details are unknown, and to avoid involving Liu Bei, the story involves sending a remorseful and wicked woman to her father as a concubine. 🙂 Well, it's a bit complicated. Whether he's impressive or not is another matter, but he's definitely a filial son. 🙂

While it's more satisfying to expose your rebirth and immediately torture others, it's better to pretend you weren't reborn and hold back a big one. First, the protagonist in his previous life was a saintly advocate of "equality for all." As long as the alien races are unaware of his past life memories, he can easily gain their trust.

There's just too much nonsense. It could have been summed up in 10 words, but I've written several pages of it over and over again.

It's also padded out, the plot progresses slowly, and it only repeats a few sentences over and over again. The first five chapters can be summarized in two sentences. It's about rebirth and then constantly repeating the idea of ​​becoming a slave owner.

Did the author travel back in time from ten years ago?

The subject matter is good, but the author tends to repeat and emphasize certain points. There are exciting moments, but they're written rather restrainedly, lacking a true explosion. A minor flaw is the Elsa character; I personally think it's better to mention her less often later.