Elf? Welcome Your Slave Master!

I laughed when those races didn't kill Adam first, they just bullied honest people.

There is a lot of water in the article at the moment. I have written so much about the elf and the maid, and there is no revenge part so far. The elf appears in so many chapters and I don't even know that the protagonist is reborn. For me personally, there is a bit too much water. There is also the issue of giving the maid to the father. This is also a failure. If this is the case, why do you have to explain that it is the first time for the maid to be the protagonist in two lives? Now he even loves the protagonist, wouldn't it be nice to keep her in his hands, torture her, and use her as a venting tool to kill his sweetheart? A little weird. Isn't it good to learn stick bravery?

How should I put it, after seeing the protagonist's rebirth, the protagonist came to the conclusion that those races who had been helped by the protagonist betrayed him because they were ungrateful and were brainwashed by the aura of the "protagonist". Afterwards, no matter how the protagonist targets them, they all deserve their punishment, which is justified. But in the final analysis, the biggest reason is that the protagonist is just an ordinary person, and it was he who betrayed his own class first. The protagonist wants everyone to be equal. , There are things that cannot be accomplished in reality without any fantasy power. The protagonist, a silly son of a landowner, insists on playing this house game to survive until the death of the protagonist. How long can an ordinary person live? After death, he will go back to the past. Each tribe does not believe this. They just want to gain benefits. How to make people who are good at fighting and singing good at singing and dancing depends on more than just ideas. Secondly, the protagonist is not worthy. The protagonist's Regardless of your identity as the son of a slave owner, even if you are a prince or the son of a god, you are not worthy of racial equality. You are not qualified to wipe out the tens of thousands of years of feud between various races. The premise of daring to let the world adapt to you is that you must have an invincible golden finger to unify the world, conquer everyone, discriminate against everyone equally, and then have loyal and brainwashed subordinates who will not distort any of your orders. Implementing policies, idealistic science is linked to the development of productivity, greatly enriching materials, so that everyone can maintain goodwill and live well, and then the protagonist lives long enough to maintain the inertia of civilization. Long-lived elves have to iterate for more than three or four generations to initially complete the so-called racial equality. If there is a sudden war of gods and beliefs, the Devil's Gate DLC will have to be postponed. The creation of the world is easy, but it is difficult for all living beings to be united.

After reading a chapter and a half, it's hard not to wonder whether the author is an adult.

It seems stupid to read the comments, a diode protagonist who plays tricks

It's like the formula of Maozhan in the past, the rebirth of the evil girl and the revenge of the protagonist, the plot looks like a studio story 🙂 But I don't know the content, and in order not to involve Liu Bei, what is the purpose of giving the regretful evil girl to her father 🙂 How to put it is a bit subtle, 🐂No🐂, another way, he is indeed a filial son🙂

Although it's better to expose the rebirth and directly abuse it, it's better to pretend not to be reborn and hold it in. First of all, the protagonist in the past life is the Virgin who advocates "everyone is equal". As long as the aliens don't know that the protagonist has past life memories, the protagonist can easily win their trust. Secondly, the brave Adam has tricked a wave of aliens, and the aliens are naturally hostile to him. As long as the protagonist has no past life memories, then Adam is the most wanted alien from the alien race. The protagonist can act with his father, making the outside world mistakenly think that he still advocates "equality for all" and is willing to build a city, so as to win the trust of the aliens and stand on the side of the aliens to fight against evil (Adam). And silently upgrade in secret (find an ordinary person who hides in professional attire), then find Adam, protect/replace/control him, and create trouble for the alien race. If the alien race wants to build a city, then build the city, but the protagonist can operate secretly (faking Adam's attack, helping Adam to destroy the pursuers, etc.) To consume the alien race. After all the hard work to build the city, it will be bigger. For example, the city is a huge enslaving magic circle. When it is built, it will be the time when the alien race is enslaved. When the alien race is closest to their dream, they will be given the deepest despair, and they will also taste the taste of backstabbing. Those rebellious henchmen in the previous life are easier to deal with. Just like Lelouch said, "Watch me squeeze out every drop of your blood, and then throw you away like a rag." He used their "guilt" to PUA them and let them do all the dirty work for him (such as being a clan traitor, personally planting a slave mark for the clan, etc.), But they always thought that everything they did was for "equality for everyone." When they feel that they have no place to stay and can only rely on the protagonist, they will give them the final backstab. Everyone is a slave except "me", so why not "everyone is equal". Finally, I would like to recommend the similar revenge article "Dear, It's Time to Take Medicine", which is quite good.

There is too much nonsense. I can finish writing several pages with 10 words.

It's dull, and the plot is too slow. It only takes a few sentences over and over again. The first five chapters can be summarized in two sentences. After rebirth, it keeps repeating over and over again that I want to be a slave master.

Did the author travel back ten years?

The subject matter is good, and I like to repeat it in my writing. It's a bit cool, but the writing is restrained and not explosive enough. The minor point is Aisha, I personally think it would be better not to mention it later. As for the protagonist's personal opinion, it's okay to play in a slave world where everyone is equal except me. You can also play Tyrant (this is easy to get banned). It still depends on how the author wants to write it. However, all the problems stem from the insufficient number of words. Ten or eight chapters are updated in a day. No matter how vulgar the plot is, more or less people will read it.

Damn, the author is really awesome. There is a book growing in the water. The plot and writing are pretty good. It reminds me of the movie Saiyans Become Angels. It can be summed up in more than 50 chapters in one paragraph. You guys studied in the same place, right? New to Qidian?

There are too many repetitive explanations that affect the viewing experience, and if you look at the first few chapters, this is not a story about a villain chasing a husband. The woman who is reborn as a good guy does not want to think about how to improve her status and strength by relying on future information, but only wants to restore her relationship with the male protagonist. Boring, boring, boring

I can only say that it's all because of the jealous dumplings. If you set the elf to like the man from the beginning instead of falling in love with him after half a month, the whole story is about love in the past and hate in the past. Che Lulu talked back and forth. I originally wanted to watch the slave race, but the plot didn't advance for a long time, 🙂🙂

I read novels to relax, not to feel aggrieved.

What about the main plot? I know you, the protagonist, are feeling aggrieved, but what do you mean when you keep quarreling? Go ahead and hit someone.

Revenge articles should be fast-paced and enjoyable. Try to speed up the pace as much as possible. The subject matter is fairly new and the writing is okay. As for hydrology, if you give it enough and speed up the pace, your results will be good.

Another rebirth and regret flow, there are many short video novels

The plot repeats those few sentences in Chapter 30 and the plot does not advance at all.

The protagonist feeds the maid's childhood playmate and her parents' meat fillings made into yellow radish meat dumplings to the little maid, begging her to forgive him for his evil deeds. I believe the maid hopes that the protagonist can forgive him, so the maid will definitely be able to forgive the protagonist too😋

If you can't write a good strategy, you don't have to write it down. Really?

It's almost a hundred chapters, and the plot is too dragging. I was already going to start telling the alien race, but in the end, this boring plot started on the way.

At the beginning of level 0, there are all the 25 guys at the level 9 demigod level. What is the role of the protagonist? Can anyone kill the protagonist with one move? (Don't mention the armor, no matter how thick the turtle shell is, it will still die if you take it away.) What's the point of fun? Is the edge OB? The next step is to use talents to quickly upgrade. Once the book is fully upgraded, it will almost be gone. Are you afraid that the opponent you set is so strong that it will crash?

Can you write about the plot of how someone close to you in your previous life cleansed yourself and redeemed yourself? After all, they are the people around you. Don't destroy them or give them away. I can't read anymore and I don't like being cuckolded by myself

Too ink, cool dialogue, too ink, I choose to abandon the pit

It's really good to follow the subject matter, but there's obviously something wrong with Aisha's handling. Why don't you stay and adjust it yourself?

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Come on, the author, I think it is very well written. Kill all these aliens, kill all these ungrateful aliens, make them slaves and take them with you, let them watch their friends and family keep dying, and keep resurrecting, unable to survive, unable to die, destroying this continent, and making everyone who has a grudge against you into a slave, so that they can continue to feel the pain. By the way, has the protagonist ever thought about becoming an emperor in the later stage? Take down all the gods in the sky and make them slaves. Are you interested in building an atonement machine like Warhammer 40k, stuffing them into it, letting them continue to have resentment, and then continue to fight painfully?

This kind of subject matter tests the author's control of the overall rhythm. For example, if Elsa and Ellu are not the heroines, there is no need to spend so many chapters to torture them repeatedly. Especially in Elsa's part, the Duke and the maid said almost exactly the same thing. It is really unnecessary; if redemption is arranged later, then at least leave some openings. Then the plot can be advanced. Now it has just stayed at the level of rebirth and coming back to liquidate the "betrayers" for too long. If it continues like this, it will be abandoned.

Let's talk about some suggestions. From the introduction and the latest content, it is obvious that the author made this dumpling just to scold the maid and the elf for being jealous. But if you want to write a longer story, you should focus on new characters later, the two little maids, the twins, etc. Continuing to describe "revenge" on them in long paragraphs will not always make people feel happy. I hope you continue to work hard.