My Narration Is Full of Demonic Atmosphere

The book is good, with a strong sense of rhythm, neither too fast nor too slow. The story advances just right, the plot is reasonable, and the foreshadowing is recycled in a timely manner. It is understandable that the author is very generous. If the proportion of the description is reduced, the content can be better balanced. Overall review: medium to top grade

It should be renamed: "My Narrator's Brain Is Full of Yellow Waste"

There are many female protagonists in this book, 10 of them. (Originally there were 8, but recently I thought, I might as well get 10.) The first heroine: Hua Qingrou (recommended) The second heroine: Xie Yuzhu (recommended) The third heroine: Leng Yinhua (recommended) The fourth heroine: Li Jin'er (recommended) (pregnant) Heroine 5: Yunqiu Se (recommended) Heroine 6: Muxue Ping (recommended) (pregnant) Heroine 7: Qi Yuxuan (recommended) Heroine 8: Qi Jiuyou (recommended) Heroine 9: Liu Yuzhi (recommended) (pregnant) Heroine 10: Jin Yue'e (recommended)

I'm so angry, why are the harem all female, when will men stop being discriminated against!

"The Story That the Drug Rehabilitation Male Protagonist and the Pornographic Waste Narrator Have to Tell"

The emotional scenes are poorly written, and all the conversations with the heroine that promote the relationship are awkward, but the normal plot is pretty good, just a bit bland.

The author writes love stories very stiffly, he can't be an old virgin, right?

What the hell! After dozens of chapters, my strength has not improved a bit.

I said there are too many useless narrations, and I'm going crazy for the water numbers, so I'm going to throw myself into the street.

I just read Chapter 27, and I found that the male protagonist is from the perspective of an ordinary person with a good outlook on life. On the contrary, the chapter reviews are more magical than the narration. Every CS idea comes out of his mouth. How did you all come up with it?

Everyone knew that Nangong was seriously injured and was being chased, but Jianlu didn't know about it, right?

After looking at the chapter names, one problem is that the strength rises too slowly at the beginning, and then it is rushed to the top. I hope the realm of the protagonists can be divided more evenly.

After flipping through the character cards, can the author grasp the many female protagonists 😅

Health-nurturing realm True Qi realm: divided into small true qi and great true qi Marrow-cleansing realm: once to three times Divine Gang realm: initial realm (small divine power), peak (big one) Shen Gang) The realm of the king: the beginning and the peak The realm of the emperor: the beginning and the peak The realm of heaven and humanity: the beginning and the peak Thunder Tribulation Realm: Small Thunder Tribulation, Big Thunder Tribulation Ascension Realm: True God Realm:

Finished Spreading Flowers🎉 Remember to order the finished copy and order the full novel😋

It's actually over? It took me a long time to read Chapter 45 🙂

It's okay, the stallion text has been marked in advance.

It feels ok, plain water is fine every day

In stories with multiple female protagonists, the setting and subject matter are good, but the plot is a bit watery at the end and there is nothing very eye-catching. Generally speaking, it is very good among the readers. I feel that it is worth it for having over 10,000 or 200,000 book readers. I don't know why so few people read it.

Everything else is OK, except for two points 1. The protagonist is very naive, has no main plot, and has no ideas of his own. The plot relies on the narration, and the protagonist is not very smart. He is always surprised when something happens, which is a bit difficult for him personally 2. If there is a problem with the logic, the first thing is to bring ghosts to start the fight, and then it ends, it ends in an anticlimax.

Not bad, good, love to watch, Modo Modo

It's so good that I ordered 200 chapters and voted for 3 monthly votes. Come on and write~

Personally, I think the writing is okay. For my taste, the description of women is really good. After all, they are all Da Lei, almost all settled. I will not read the last few chapters. I look forward to the next one 😁😎

There are too many language errors. It is recommended to use AI to correct them.

Come on