What a Market Place!

The world view and setting of this book are very complete, and it is quite complex and interesting. In terms of power system: there are ten schools and eight schools, each with its own characteristics and inheritance. The secret skills of Jianghu are even more exciting. You can hear the thunder in a silent place, and many of the techniques use four or two to move a thousand pounds, giving you the feeling of a folk master. In terms of background: in the past, there were senior time travelers who buried secrets, and in the future, the era of great strife quietly came. During the turbulent changes, the protagonist, as the chosen leader of the market, got involved in the disputes and achieved great things. There is nothing wrong with the setting. But the writing power is average, quite average. It reads like a mule pulling a train, full of energy but not enough energy. Many plot arrangements are just to deduct points from this wonderful setting. First of all, the plot has a lot of flaws. There is nothing wrong with the Jianghu people's decisive killing. Everyone's actions are "reckless". Some things can obviously be solved through secular means, but they have to fight to the death. Their behavior style is completely lacking in the tact and sophistication of Jianghu people, and the conflicts are a bit childish. Ask yourself, is the early conflict between the protagonist and Zhang Dong really irresolvable? Zhang Dong's father's power can already get another quota. Can the friendship of a genius really not keep up with the quota that is available every year? You really don't care if your only seedling is criticized for being criticized by bad friends? I am a senior in the world of martial arts, and without saying a word, I just lowered my profile and targeted the youngest in an inn? No matter what, Zhang Dong's behavior is childish. The following scams are also full of flaws. How can the scam be broken and the person who set it up jump out immediately? This is no different from committing suicide. A thief will not call himself a thief. Some things are shady, so don't jump out. Furthermore, the competition itself is extremely unreasonable. From the perspective of being a businessman, a thief, liar, and killer stands on the street and shows off his profession to the public, just to collect rewards? Isn't this a bit abstract? The competition system is also unreasonable. Each of the eight businesses in the market has its own way of survival. You all have to look at how the performers are doing, and you don't want others to steal and rob others... What should you do if you let the thief and rogue kiln sister? You, the eight families, abide by the law and are righteous but evil, so why do you still do the wrong thing? In the final analysis, it is obvious that the author has a problem with the positioning of his book. His arrangement of the plot is completely contrary to the setting. What the author writes is the structure of ancient fantasy novels: practice, cheat, arrange adventures, encounter experts by chance, defeat powerful enemies in competitions, and then become famous... This logic can be fantasy or martial arts, but it cannot be that of ordinary people. Speaking of businessmen, the first impression is definitely that of a master who lives in seclusion in the city and relies on his unique skills; the second is a liar, an actor, a brothel, who does whatever it takes to earn a bite to eat, lives like a weed, and takes root in the lives of the masses. The eight immortals cross the sea and show their magical powers. I don't want the family to become a legend in the world, but it certainly has nothing to do with the world's most famous scholars. A group of low-level scoundrels hugging each other for warmth. If you arrange for them to be known to the world, arrange for them to play games in public, and let other sects watch and comment, then it will lose the flavor of the market. The well-behaved martial artist turned into an actor for a meeting. Furthermore, the intensive use of the market's unique skills has also made the market family become a bit secular. It is obvious that thousands of sects can fight each other without anyone noticing, and the dragon can see its beginning but not its end. But you let them use their unique skills to fight in the ring, and you didn't allow them to use off-beat moves... If I were a legalist, I would write down these liars as a reserve after the game is over In short, the setting is wonderful, but only the setting is outstanding. It reads like a mule pulling a train, or a wild dog wearing a wolf's skin. You might say it doesn't look good, but it is indeed readable. It's just that the goods are wrong and the reading smells strange.

I was so convinced that I put it on the shelf and said, "I will never be a prisoner. I must finish writing it. I will apologize when I turn around. I really took off my pants and let it go."

The boss is back to the starting point, looking forward to a wave

The writing is very good. I have been reading it since I saw it. Some of the descriptions correspond to real life. Please keep updating the author. I give you votes!

The introduction looks very novel. The first few chapters are also good and keep people reading. Although the supporting roles in the middle are averagely written. But I can get through it. I thought that the plot of this game would be a small climax, but I saw that Rongmen refused to steal. It feels like a show. Then comes the arena competition. It feels like you have to admit defeat several times to win once. It's meaningless, it's better to get first place in the end. In fact, the plot of the protagonist is well written. It's just a supporting role written to stretch the crotch. It's all a bit witty. I don't feel like I need to overwhelm the supporting characters. You can write it in the group portrait. It feels like the future is promising. Will continue to pursue it. Come on! ! !

I feel that the Chinese style Jianghu in the introduction is a bit weird. Are there any Jianghu that are not Chinese style?

Why does the author use single quotes so casually, and the names of people are not specific, and what does it mean to use single quotes regardless of whether it is in dialogue or not?

I haven't watched it yet, but I'll keep it up. If there's a good product, I'll jump in. I give you 5 recommendation votes. I hope you don't keep it up. It's a very interesting subject.

Not bad. The last one who is also interesting is Shennong Daojun. Let's see if you can become popular later.

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