
Douluo Jueshi: Pick up Liuying at the Beginning
斗罗绝世:开局捡到流萤
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Sam can explode stars when burning, which is much stronger than Douluo God King.
It's too watery, I haven't woken up after taking more than 30 pictures.
The protagonist really doesn't have any role at all. Except for two fights, the other perspectives are all from Shrek's, and it's hard to tell the priority 😅
What on earth did you write? Nothing has changed, the plot is still the same, nothing has changed. You are quite a passerby
No, there is no main plot at all. It has always been in the water. The protagonist has no intention of getting stronger.
What a good guy, forcibly boosting Douluo's combat power.
If you can't write, don't write!
I've read the last few chapters, and I can't tell you the plot. The protagonist dies, and the opportunity belongs to the Tang family.
Liuyingjiang
Liuying
Shrek, please end it quickly. You have been drunk for more than 20 chapters. Please be restrained.
So is Huo Yuhao the protagonist's father? Protecting him like this? Hating him to the core, hating him so much, is just depriving him of his identity as the son of luck. It will have no impact on Huo Yuhao at all. You can control luck, so why don't you let him suffer from bad luck? You know clearly that Huo Yuhao is cheating or the opposite, but you don't take any precautions or take any aim at all, and just keep making waves. Do you think you are Mr. E? But you don't use several AOEs with super large range and high damage. You are so awesome, what super recovery and super high damage are. I thought you were paving the way for the subsequent war. What happened? You use it, what's wrong? The skill CD hasn't changed well, right? Chunlai makes this protagonist funny, so what if this book doesn't have a protagonist? None of the major plot events have changed. What are you doing here? And that combat power, it was ridiculously low. In the early stage, Liu Ying reached level 30 or 40 and killed people randomly. However, as his level went up, he was unable to do any damage and couldn't be beaten anymore? Funny? According to your settings, at level 70, Liu Ying could defeat a titled Douluo in just a few punches? As a result, it took me half a day to get to a similar level.
At the beginning, the exchange memory almost made me embarrassed to abandon the article, but the subsequent writing is okay and within my acceptable range. As long as you are still at this level in the future, I will give you a full subscription. And after joining v, don't be as good as the free ones before. If you are still as good as the previous ones, I may also abandon the article.
It's too watery. Why is it not reincarnation? Liu Ying also lost her power when she traveled through time? Even if it is assigned to the protagonist, it cannot be so weak. Chapters 20 to 39 are all in the water, and everything before chapter 20 is a summary. If you are reincarnated and awakened, you can only meet chapter 39. You just time-traveled, so what? Does traveling through time consume Liu Ying's power? Isn't it the power of starlight?
Sure enough, there are dozens of chapters in one game, right?
Who are you, the author? Why not update? If you have anything to say, please tell me.
The author should pay attention to explain some details of the original work. There is no need to say too much about some insignificant Douluo common sense. No wonder it is said to have too much water. Most of the people who come to read Douluo Fans are relatively familiar with the original work. Some common sense can be explained simply, otherwise the whole book will be too watery. Afterwards, everyone will just look at the title and not subscribe. As for Ye Guyi, I remember that the original description was very clear. He was hidden for fear of being known by the evil soul master. Isn't it a bit too contemptuous of the evil soul master that you arranged it in the school? The Holy Spirit Cult randomly arranged a self-destruct infantry Ye Guyi and it was gone.
To be honest, it embarrassed me. Chapter 2 of exchanging memories made my feet smolder.
I've written so many pieces, but I haven't started typing them yet. Isn't it too watery? 😅😅
Mingdu explosion
By the way, author, you won't let Huo Yuhao blow up Mingdu, right? Then you won't be able to watch it.
Please read and recommend|•'-'•)و✧
It may be a bit slow in the early stage. After all, there are only two updates per day before it goes on the shelves. It will be much better if you update more after it goes on the shelves (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)
Yingbao
This time it's the war stage plot again 😅
Liuyingjiang