Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei's Time Travel Diary

I don't know why it's not interesting to see Xia Mi and Chu Zihang together. Personally, I feel that these two people are together because it was forced by the green-faced beast.

Didn't you say that the second world is for Old Touhou? Why did you go to Sword Art Online? 🤔, And I also dragged Old Tang and Chu Zihang through the dungeon together. It felt weird. Author, don't really regard this book as your guinea pig. You want to try everything. The previous mystery chapter was so well written.

The mysterious chapter at the beginning is astonishing. The author grasps the adventures of Elise and Lu Mingfei and the love that arises out of them very well. The final scene of Elise elevates this chapter to a considerable height. It is rare to see such a well-shaped original heroine in fan fiction. However, after the return, the level dropped suddenly, not to mention the swords with more than ten chapters with wrong style inserted in the middle (the swords of Mystery, Swords, Elden's Circle are too abrupt). The setting of soul symbiosis should have been able to extend a deeper connection like "seeing the world through your eyes" like the spirit behind the scenes. People from other worlds come to the starting point of the earth and grab a lot of them, which can be sprinkled with sugar and have content. However, it is only written as a resurrection point, which is a pity. What's even more pity is that such an excellent heroine has been offline for more than 40 chapters. I am already obsessed with watching these two (the Return of the Dragon stream has too many tastes to find new ideas), and the way to promote more heroines is to take advantage of the S1 season champion to play the resurrection match. This plot will be destroyed by the cat next door. In fact, after returning, the Dragon Clan will write about twenty chapters and directly connect to the Circle of Magic. As a witch, Elise can also pick up Lani Melina on the way. After all, the title is Time Travel Diary. The Dragon Clan stayed longer than others, so the text is a bit out of place.

Will Lu Mingfei drink the witch's potion?

Your original heroine is very good. She has to clean up her harem, and she has to find a senior brother when she comes back.

Your method of acquiring many girls is indeed abstract, isn't it? Do you have to bind Eri to Japan?

What is the situation in Chapter 84? Was it because the author couldn't continue writing and started using AI to write for him, or was it because the author ran away and replaced someone else? The sudden plot twists, inexplicable character relationships, and obviously outrageous deus ex machina make it feel very poisonous.

The Secret Chapter is very well written However, the combat power is too high. Returning to the Dragon Clan has the same sense of expectation and crisis as going to the novice room, and it is not invincible. The impression has dropped too much.

In fact, there is a very magical problem in the plot of Sword Art Online. Kirito Asuna appears in the dragon clan. Kirito, the third dragon, eats ramen in Japan (laughs). I encountered this when I went to Japan~

The mystery chapter is very well written. What the hell is this new chapter? It's like the author is a different person.

There's 💩 in the back, don't come in! ! !

The mysterious part was okay, but the inexplicable deus ex machina at the end made me regret subscribing to this novel.

It is recommended that you only read the first volume, the rest are shi

But I still don't want the author to write too many heroines. In terms of Lu Mingfei's character, Nono in the original work is like that, and the little monsters are just meal replacements. Judging from Elise's current performance, who can shake her heroine status 🙂 When you have just traveled through time and are most helpless, a beautiful girl suddenly breaks in to help you. , Giving you love and taking you into the door of the new world, this is a beam of light for a failing child, this is Nono's script, and later Lu Mingfei is willing to accompany her to go crazy, two lunatics escape and travel at the same time, this is the script of the little monster, add the two scripts together, Elise is invincible in the world 😡 Before the heroine is resurrected, she can't see the way out Ming is not attracted to others. Judging from the current plot, Elise should be by his side in some way (if not I would have sent the blade 🙂), and it would be even harder for the widower Xiaolu to change his heart If there are really more female protagonists, I think the author will write two. One Elise is enough in the world, and one or two in the original world. (Zero is a constant companion) (The little monster may be a meal replacement like the original) (The heroines of most dragon fandoms seem to be them too 🤔) Of course, they are just some ideas. It is best for the author to have his own rhythm and outline 🙂 Finally, update quickly, don't force me to kneel down and beg you 🥺

The mystery chapter is very well written and will be skipped later. Worth a look.

Is the latest chapter really about firing map cannons? What the hell, is he still running away and replacing someone?

It doesn't always need to be Tokyo, the important thing is the story of time travel, 😁

It's time to go to Kassel again. Aren't you writers disgusted? The tragedy of Lu Mingfei's life in Kassel. Lu Mingfei's parents and uncle can be said to be 50/50, but you're still rushing to go?

Why have you finished the eunuch?

Feeding my family to death😭

I've turned on automatic subscription to support books. The update speed is really hard to keep up with. I hope you don't become too eunuch.

Brother, the new year is over, it's time to come back and update

I'm not a buddy, don't stop updating, the writing is quite good.

You know

It looks good, except that the sword writing is a bit poor.

I'll give you this month's monthly pass, I'm afraid you'll become a eunuch