Entry: Cultivation: I Can Steal Secrets from Heaven

Some subtle settings are quite good, not brainless or wasteful, but also satisfying, such as: the setting of the talisman, the setting of the blessing itself, and the setting of the blessing structure, as well as the Qi refining period, where the difference in realm lies in the strength of spiritual consciousness and the growth of the capacity and strength of the meridians (I forgot the specific details) However, the novel itself has shortcomings in the specific character creation, emotional advancement, and some plot outlines. Also, what I personally think is a very important point is also a problem common to many novels, and it is not appropriate to go into detail. Overall, I have only read a dozen chapters so far and my evaluation is: Food! Come on, author!

Look here

Isn't this the colorful entry that is getting higher and higher?

The threatening remarks made by the woman named Ye felt very Shabi. Who is Lin Erya as the protagonist? Rebirth parents. I don't even know what she is barking at. Why, can she still kill the protagonist? There is absolutely no need to threaten. If you talk too loudly, you will die, right? If you have the guts, just kill the protagonist and then make Lin Erya into a puppet. That's pretty much it.

It is recommended that the author read more history books and learn from the historical and political stories of the Tang Dynasty and Ming Dynasty. First point, the description of the upper-level characters is too imbecile! ! !        ，，，，？ Too poisonous! In the absence of back-up tone, it is not difficult to understand why the male protagonist makes crazy arrangements. The answer has already been laid out in the history books. It would be good for everyone to offer it as a mascot. Is there anything better to grasp than a simple young genius with only an orphan? It is unimaginable that such a person can become an elder. The second point is that the arrangement of lower-level characters is even more explosive! ! ! I feel like I just write whatever I want to write.                                                                                                                                                                                         There is a steward character in it. The setting is that it doesn't matter how many handymen die, and the superiors don't care. They tacitly agree to test the arrogance of their subordinates, and want to take the inheritance treasure as their own. Knowing that they have offended the Lin family, it is strange that they still keep quiet. Don't you know that you would rather offend a white-headed man than bully a poor young man?                                                    The Lin family's husband and wife are ruthless characters who can go out on adventures more than a dozen times and come back intact, yet Wang Erma dares to offend them and let them farm the land. What kind of magical thinking is this? Not to mention the rest, it's a mess. Third point, after reading the fairy power setting in the book, I was really desperate.         ， For example, the protagonist's demon transformation kills Wang Erma instantly, but Wang Erma can easily bully a seventy-year-old old man. Are you kidding me? Go crazy. You said that it takes two and a half years for the protagonist to reach the second level. Let's calculate it in two-year increments. This old man still needs to practice Qi at the sixth level. Even in the later stages of Qi training, he can't break through. Even if it wasn't possible, he barely managed to cross the fourth floor, but when you said that he was beaten to the wall by Wang Erma and couldn't get off, you laughed angrily.         ，，，          ，，，                 ，， If you were to switch to a low-demon world, the initial planes and settings would be self-explanatory. I still hope that the author's writing skills will soar and the work will be widely circulated.

Such a big hanging talisman repairer, that's all

This plot is so classic. The sister who was picked up casually came up with a golden entry, and she will be a powerful person in the future.

It's very clumsy, the plot is bland and boring, the grievances are endless, and it's not sinister or cruel at all. It's just the idea of ​​the Holy Mother.

I just saw the 30th one and you gave me this water, two for the skill water and one for the skill. I didn't bother to look at it later.

Don't let the protagonist ponder for so long about an entry that is useless at first glance. If you continue to write like this, the freshness of reading brought by your fresh framework will also turn into a sense of disgust for the readers. Only individuals can distinguish which entry is good, let alone the choice of two useless and one overwhelming entries that will inevitably appear every time you upgrade your work.

You are so damn good at water. You are really better at water than those great gods. I have never seen a better chapter than Chapter 40.

Before reading this novel, I want to complain. I have read the exact same novel.

Alas, every woman is shaped to be full of flaws. Little junior sister: I fainted when I saw my senior brother. I am so in love that I am useless. Second Senior Sister: Even though we have established a foundation, we have never left the house or killed anyone. I am afraid that the society will be too much and will be ruined. Senior Sister: Not very capable but always asserting herself, always dragging her feet and retreating, she is useless. Master: He taught a bunch of useless disciples, and was reminded many times that his sect was destroyed and abolished.

The women here are each more insane than the last. That's called stupidity.

Why does it feel weirder the more I read it, I thought it was Gou Dao style, but then it turned into a soft rice style, and then the escape turned into a harem style, and then went to the secret realm of heaven, and turned into a love story. The most outrageous thing is that the writing style has also changed. After turning into a love story, all kinds of shameful names are thrown at you, what a liar, senior sister. . . I wipe

Ever since the sect was shattered and a few women were having an affair, it became boring.

There is a very serious problem. You said that we are both in the Qi refining stage, so it doesn't matter if we can't tell that you have practiced the breath-condensing technique. The Sixth Elder is at least a powerful golden elixir, but he can't see that you have the breath-condensing technique or the true state of your body. How high is the level of your breath-condensing technique?

I made some comments, but my post was deleted 😤, which made me vote so many times.

They are all trump cards, yet they show off to each other every day. What the hell kind of logic? You can't even take care of yourself and still take care of others. You're stupid 13

This setting looks so familiar. There is an entry with the same setting as his, except that the entry is changed to blessing, and that book has already been completed.

Zhan Hu's talent is really unbearable. It's too messy and complicated. For the protagonist team, even with the Stitch Monster, the role of the protagonist is becoming more and more complicated. Moreover, the harem must be delayed, and there is obviously no need for ambiguity, and the Crystal Palace has already become. I still feel pretty good about myself there. Disgusting, boring. I don't blame Master, I don't blame Senior Sister. What the hell are you writing that is so ambiguous? There is an emotional drama involved in people's ambiguity. You didn't talk about it the whole time for nothing. The lady in the palace said she didn't care. If you don't accept it, just write it down. I don't write about misunderstandings or anything like that. It's all Master and Senior Sister who licked the protagonist for free. You're like a chicken feather. The senior sister has cultivated both spiritual and spiritual skills, but she won't accept her. Do you really think you guys should look at your Stitch Monster setting and plot? Or are you talking about your way of writing in vernacular?

It seemed okay in the early stage, but the author started to let himself go from the beginning when he wrote the change in the way of heaven. He insisted on playing with the time flow, and the more he wrote, the more messy he wrote. All the time flow writings were unsuccessful. As a result, no one can do that closed loop!

To be honest, this theme is pretty good, but you can tell what level the author is by reading the comments section. The cheating method for this theme should be to randomly select blessings and rely on your own understanding to play the best set of constructions, instead of being stupid and chirping nine times more than others.

I watched it for a long time and didn't know what I was looking at. It was like running water.

After it was put on the shelves, the water dissipated and it became a stallion.

The plot has no development, it's so boring, and it's always watery

Wherever you think of, write a self-pleasure essay.

I thought this book was called (Beautiful elders talk and laugh as equals to me )

The people who laid the groundwork thought it was Gou Daoliu, but in the end the foundation building was exposed, and they said it would be easier to do things this way, bullshit... This is not a bunch of nonsense later. At present, it seems that the protagonist is nothing special except for his tricks, his temperament is average, his brain is not very good, and he does not have much loyalty, so... It can be watched.

Taking a closer look, Lin Erya's master looks down on the protagonist. Will it be her master or the protagonist who saves her later? Profit? Either relying on the relationship with the protagonist to get to the top, or other benefits, the plot is bloody.