The World of Cultivating Immortals Is Cautious, While the Martial Arts World Strikes Hard.

The protagonist should directly breed all humans. I started practicing it when I was young, and then when I grew up and practiced it well, I was eaten by the protagonist.

Although I like harem novels, your writing style

The writing style really needs to be improved. My main feeling is that the author doesn't know what kind of protagonist readers like and dislike in this type of novel. The character of the protagonist is unlikable and childish. It is clearly a harem story, but the protagonist insists on pretending to be a gentleman. Not only does he not dare to resort to any tricks, but he also wants to remain calm and act like Liu Xiahui. As a result, he was evaluated as "This kid has amazing determination and can become a great person." I really laughed to death when I saw this kind of plot. Please don't write it in such a naive way. Let's be more mature. Another point is that I like to engage in ambiguous oral pleasures and even untie people's belts, but I just don't dare to touch them. I don't dare to touch them without saying that I will do it on the spot. If you don't dare touch it, don't get high. It's a bit embarrassing, and you look like a middle school student. If the protagonist's thinking is more mature, the moral bottom line is lowered, and some tactics are used, more people will watch it.

Ask the protagonist if he knows the plot of traveling through the world of martial arts

The writing is average and feels a bit too bland, but as long as you are a harem, I support it 😍

The best choice for the protagonist is to print tens of thousands of copies of the sword technique to ward off evil spirits and spread it throughout the world. It can be used to ward off evil spirits, and it can be done quickly. It can also be practiced quickly with waste. It is very powerful. After cutting, it will be difficult for the body to be disabled and it will be difficult to make further progress. It will also cause the world to get involved. Everyone practices evil spirits, and the protagonist can absorb a lot of internal energy.

The writing is really bad, but the idea is pretty good

Collect it directly, I hope you don't disappoint me

Evil-proofing swordsmanship is the protagonist's best choice for quickly cultivating leeks.

Very well written (´∀｀*)

Author, do you plan to imitate Duck Tianzun?

Is it possible that the fake Zheng Mingxue is still alive?

Okay, okay, this introduction is so attractive. Did you cut it before I even looked at it? If you see a recommendation, don't think about it and change it.

Qi training, foundation building, jade liquid, golden elixir, Yuanying, and spiritual transformation. What's next? Out of body, cave, integration, Mahayana? How are the several star sects divided? Golden elixir has one star, Nascent Soul has two stars, and Shenhua has three stars?

Does time flow at the same speed in both worlds? I will still say that adjustments will be made later. After all, it takes tens or even hundreds of years for the world of cultivating immortals to go into seclusion.

Do you have any other works in Qidian?