My Life as an Evil Superman in the Comic Book World

Choose an unpopular DC fan from American comics, then pick an unpopular Speedmaster from an unpopular DC fan, and then pull out the characters of the Crime Syndicate from the story of the unpopular Supermaster to write your own original story. An unpopular background + an unpopular character + a semi-original story (DC has too much work, as long as your work does not exceed human imagination, you can basically find a prototype) + a time traveler protagonist who doesn't know the plot + someone who doesn't know the so-called System + not very good layout ability (surprisingly, I didn't find much of a problem with the writing, maybe because the threshold was lowered after being destroyed by the Feathermen. As long as I can read it smoothly, I don't think it's a problem with the writing. I just think there is a problem with the author's control of the plot and focus of the story). You, the author, will challenge yourself. Powering for Love is a yes. I will read it for free. I will decide whether to subscribe when the time comes. In this case, I will most likely die violently if I write it, so I dare not subscribe.

Speedmaster and Superman, in turn, are restrained by sunlight and must absorb kryptonite to gain strength.

This is what makes it interesting. Invincible but not destroying at will. Watching too many careless people from the motherland makes me feel very boring.

This author also belongs to the category: "Everyone is drunk, I'm sober alone"

I don't feel any superman, any invincibility, not at all. This is a middle-aged unemployed decadent alcoholic, living day by day, living day by day, without goals and without hope. If someone hits me, just hit me, and I don't care. If someone scolds me, just scold me, because I have nothing. This is a gambler who is high and is about to end his miserable life. His whole body reeked of putrid smell, and his life was in complete ruin. You don't need to write a superman at all. You can just pick an ordinary depressed person and he can be the protagonist. Finally, I suggest you get some psychological guidance, because your invincibility may be different from that of normal people, and there may be problems with your fundamental cognition.

I read the first five chapters The word "confused" "confused" mainly means amnesia, which is too outrageous The key point is that the writing is not bad I couldn't help but read it in the comment area. It said that it was a million words of confusion I'll send it, and wish you a great success Bye

The writing style is chaotic and comparable to AI, but it is gracefully self-indulgent... And its attitude is constantly pretentious. . . . Most of this word count score is probably due to the popularity attracted by this performance art...

Invincible but not satisfying, the combination of these two is enough 😰

To be honest, your writing is difficult for people to understand. I browsed briefly and I can probably get an idea of ​​what you want to express. But your text segmentation/logic is very confusing. You focus on emotions and ignore how to make others understand. It's like a stream of consciousness like your message.

The protagonist in your novel is more like losing his brain than amnesia. He can be confused without any information, but you should write his thoughts so that readers can feel his confusion and desire to obtain information, such as questions to the people who rescued him. Even if you are on guard, you must write down his psychological activities. Why are you on guard against these people who rescued you? From what details did you conclude that they are not trustworthy. Then you easily accepted your partner's settings without trusting you, acted like a fool and followed the instructions of the person you were guarding against not long ago, and even sat on the restrained electric chair after Luther came out and said he lied to you? There even seems to be a person who doesn't look good next to you. Don't you think this is outrageous? If you think about it, would anyone be tricked by a stranger into sitting on a strange chair that requires restraint? Then, your description of the scene is also very out of touch. The previous paragraph is still here, but the scene is changed in the next paragraph. The scene needs to be changed. Or for the storyboard in your mind, I suggest you leave a few lines in the middle or add a dividing line, or add a place name in front of it To sum up, the problem with your writing is that the reader cannot feel the protagonist's thinking and subjective actions. The scene changes are fast and unobtrusive. Many characters appear but flash by, leaving the reader confused.

Unpopular material selection + new author + power for love. I find it strange if I don't die. The story is interesting, just a little bit. It can be seen that the original intention was to write a story about a confused Kryptonian looking for his goal and becoming a god on earth. It doesn't matter if he is confused, DC can defeat Superman's will. Either he is a background master, or he relies on trickery and Superman's soft-heartedness. A Kryptonian who kills decisively and is invincible in the normal story is difficult to write without being confused. The problem is that the protagonist is confused, the readers are confused, and the author is also confused. Isn't this the end of the story? I can only say that the idea is good, but the ability is insufficient.

I feel like the Speedmaster is like a big husky dog ​​that got too hot in the tropics and has no idea what's going on. It is very powerful, but it gets too hot and can't move its brain 🤭

After listening to a few chapters, I found it uninteresting. After reading the long review posted by the author, I feel that you know how to write at the beginning to arouse readers' interest in reading, but you just don't do it. This depends on your starting point for writing a book. If it is purely personal interest, then OK, just write casually and satisfy yourself. If it's just for the sake of food, then you can only say that you are a bit stupid, knowing that you can't do it but doing it and going your own way. If you don't satisfy the readers, then it's a waste of time. If you want to write according to your own inner thoughts, it is not impossible. If you want to write something with a little more depth and more connotation, and if you want to be regarded as a "sacred book", there is a way. Write a few high-quality products and accumulate a certain number of loyal fans! Only in this way, when you want to write a long foreshadowing, can these readers have enough patience to wait for your explosion. If you start playing like this, it's easy to get lost. First cater to the readers, then they can cater to you.

Cinematic perspective? Weird, the beginning is too ink.

The development of the plot is too deliberate. The Speedmaster is obviously a time traveler and not the original version, but it gives me the feeling that I don't know how to communicate despite my low IQ. Things that can be clearly explained in a few sentences have to be forced into a situation where mutual understanding is not understood. And this trick is repeated repeatedly. I am really tired of watching it.

It has nothing to do with whether it is a good article or not, it doesn't look good. There is a problem with the plot

The theme of this novel is "My life as an evil superman in the American comic world." The protagonist loses his memory at the beginning, and the process of exploring this world is to tell the protagonist all the time, "You are strong, you are the evil leader of this cruel and dark world, but you have lost experience and strength, but even so, you are still invincible. No conspiracy or trick can harm you, and at most it will make you psychologically deflated." Confusion is normal. The protagonist is confused, and the readers are also confused. In my plot design, this confusion will last until the middle of the first world (the plot of the first 200 chapters is about 1 million words). I explore when I am confused, and get to know the world and myself in the process of exploration. I just didn't expect many people to report that they couldn't accept this confusion. In fact, I also know how other people write it. The first three golden chapters throw away suspense, show the selling points, and build up anticipation. Then, they keep fighting monsters and upgrading to leave hooks, foreshadowing the climax and reversal. But this kind of is neither "invincible" nor "superhuman". Many readers came in after seeing the Superman keyword, only to find out that [the protagonist is not extremely smart and powerful, and is confused and pushed away and deceived (even if it is later said that it is his teammates who are helping). After awakening the system, his actions change quickly (Chapter 5). After restarting, he was beaten twice by Bane, even though the protagonist immediately grabbed Bane by the neck and threw him to his death in the next chapter], so they felt disappointed. With this degree of failure, there is neither bloodshed nor substantial loss, and the dignity is immediately avenged. Without foreshadowing, there is no climax. I also regret that I wrote it according to this idea, so that readers did not understand what I wanted to express. I am sorry for not accepting this level of foreshadowing. (ps: In Chapter 5, the protagonist has no sense of immersion and treats the world as a copy of the game. Based on the one-sided information given by the enemy, he infers the wrong conclusion that this game is over and there is no hope of completing it. He decides to restart the game in the wrong way, causing the next game to lose his memory and become a real immersive experience to integrate into the world. However, the protagonist of last week also realized this, so he left a message on the system. Very abrupt but very necessary) (Treating the world as a copy of the game, you can kill everyone quickly, but you can't clear the level. This is not the story I intend to write.) (I am still confused that this is an "indigenous traveler". I feel that the loss of memory is because the author used private goods to deliberately disgust people and change the method to write about the unreasonable indigenous arrangements. I am sorry that this is not a copy that you want to see. The system is reasonable and the tasks are clear all the way through the level. This is life, mainly. Jiao's behavior patterns, thinking and concepts are not foreigners, but time travellers. If the protagonist regards himself as a superior game protagonist, treats mortals as data as dust, kills all the way, and survives in this world for three chapters with superhuman intelligence, I lose, and I am invincible. Any wealth and power are just a ball of mud and dust. Going home, writing a novel, and never going back, forever in pain, killing copies of cold data one after another, being alone forever, what is the difference between going to jail and playing endless painful reincarnations of single-player games? At least you only use the keyboard and mouse when playing games, and you don't have to suffer personally!) The protagonist is not a smart superman, but an invincible superman. His IQ level fluctuates within the range of ordinary people, and he makes many mistakes. I want to write a sense of immersion so that readers can immersively experience becoming a superman. Being too "smart" is inhuman and it is difficult to create a plot. The protagonist is an evil superman. Evil does not mean wanton killing. Treat a real world as a copy of the game and kill it all, and then go to the next world. Evil means unscrupulous means, breaking the bottom line, and taking one's side unconditionally regardless of law and morality, but he is still the "superman". In my understanding, Superman represents "hope" and practices "protection". I will not try to convince readers with big principles, I will use plot to show them. With the plot, the protagonist will gradually explore the world, explore himself (developing system functions, learning to use power), and deepen his bond with the world. World ≠ copy. The world is real. Here, there are friends, relatives, colleagues, enemies, social relationships, open jobs, hobbies, stacks of thick real estate certificates, cozy villas or luxury apartments, and a growing family. When you came home from get off work, your cousin (Ultimate Girl Kara) tried to learn to cook and fried the pot, causing a fire alarm. You comforted her and said it was okay. The house burned down and I had more money to buy it. Has the puppy we raised (Little Krypton) been rescued? Kara said, have you forgotten that it is a Kryptonian puppy? It won't hurt. Then you plan to stay in another villa for a while. At this time, your colleague (Ye Xiao) comes to visit and asks if you want to come and stay at his house since you haven't been to him for a long time. Your colleague's brother (Batman) stays up late at night and likes to be a masked vigilante, but he is too soft-hearted and leaves criminals unkilled, which leads to the death of his adopted child (Jason). You kill the murderer (Joker) to vent his anger, but he is still immersed in In grief, you refused to soak the child's body in the resurrection pool. Your friend (Super Queen) suggested that we go to Hades to fish out the child's soul and resurrect it. You scratched your head and said that Gotham is under the control of Hades. Isn't it heaven and hell? My friend said that, why not call the entire company (Crime Syndicate) to come over and accompany you to heaven and hell together. Just do it, and you will set off immediately... This is not actually the protagonist passing the level, but the world deepening the bond with the readers. Also, when I read novels in the past, I was tired of the text not meeting the title. The title and introduction are obviously powerful, but the inside is all about the struggle history of small people, and becoming a truly strong person is a reality that can never be achieved. Yes, it has a strong sense of anticipation, and the writing is well-paced and readers will also like it, but I don't want to see the struggle history of small characters. I want to see the true invincibility, and how society and the people around you will react to the actions and attitudes of the protagonist. I don't want to look at the daily bank deposit of +100+100. Today, I used a clever trick to deceive a fool and outsmart my opponent and get +1000. Wow, it's so cool. It's another day of improvement and gain. I want to see that the bank account is 9999999999999, even the official guarantee will never be spent. Yes, this is the end of this article. The end point that others can never reach is the one that the protagonist can get easily, lightly, and ordinary. It's not a hungry man eating like crazy at the buffet because he thinks he's taking advantage. It's a simple afternoon tea for a strong man standing at the top, a way to spice up his life. Novel will not suit everyone's taste. Even the four famous novels are often criticized. What's more, I am also a novice writing novel. I don't have exquisite writing skills, and my writing cannot be suitable for everyone's taste. The biggest mistake I made in this article is to regard confusion as part of the plot, and I want readers to be involved. But now it seems that with my writing skills, without clear guidance and clear tasks from the game system, many readers will feel that they do not understand what I am talking about. I also understand this feeling. I am afraid of wasting time and stepping on the wrong point. I want to know what is the selling point of this article. No matter how many novels I read, it will never be better than writing it myself. As a reader, I have long been tired of the routines. As an author, I have discovered that there must be a reason for the enduring popularity of routines. Why are there so many fake invincible articles all over the place? Why is it that in the later stages of the infinite matryoshka map change, the combat power suffers? Why do readers still buy into it even after they criticize it? Everything has an answer. The content of this article is about "my" "life" as an "evil superman". If superman is not the Virgin, has no mercy and regards morality and law as nothing, superman is still a "human" with flesh and blood and feelings, not a cold and heartless "god". What would be more powerful than Superman from American comics is that in countless comic plots, Superman often serves as a stepping stone for heavyweight villains (it is unacceptable for Superman to be beaten. In fact, it is normal for Superman to be beaten to death by kryptonite weapons or stronger villains in comics. It is a pity). Even if the protagonist is not Superman, as long as the author puts his pen to the pen, he can be strong enough to massacre the American comic universe, but that is not Superman, and it is not life. That's probably it 🙂

When I saw the chapter about informing readers, I wanted to tell you, author, what is your original intention in writing? Is it to cater to the market or to please yourself? If you cater to the market, it is best not to criticize the readers, or don't say "I can make both parties unhappy". If it is for yourself, then you need to enlighten yourself and not be affected by other people's emotions. This chapter seems to me It's because you have a lot of emotional backlog, too much pressure, and you are eager to gain recognition from others. You are not writing a book for the market, nor for yourself, but for the recognition of others. When you deliberately pursue the recognition of others, your behavior will be distorted and not understood by others Come on, look more into your own heart

Sigh, I don't really like the kind of Marvel fan writing that treats the world as if it were a copy of the character design. Those are basically the same with a cheat system or something. I feel like there is only one Marvel fanfic called The Wolverine Reverse that has a unique writing style. It is more realistic and down-to-earth in its layout. The character design is also a big BOSS character with boldness and structure. Unfortunately, I have not seen a second Marvel fanfic with a similar writing style so far 😅

The preface does not match the afterword. It is not that the logic does not make sense, but that there is no logic. There is Zhang San in the front and Wang Wu in the back. What on earth does the author want to write? What is the main line?

One sentence of introduction filters out half of the readers. . .

In fact, I just couldn't keep writing and ran away. This book has no main line at all. I wrote whatever I thought of and it was the same as what AI wrote. The protagonist is like a fool with no IQ, extremely passive, just like a sandbag being beaten and not even able to fight back. This book is a little interesting at the beginning, but then it becomes boring.

The development of the plot is so confusing. I feel like I wrote whatever I thought of. I hope it's not AI.