Naruto: a Part-Time Worker from the Akatsuki Organization

You secretly learned Xiaonan's secret paper escape technique through the system, and you just used it like this? This thing was developed by Xiaonan himself. If the protagonist doesn't give a reasonable explanation, he will definitely be regarded as secretly learning secret techniques. I'm really not afraid that Nagato will kill you.

After all these years of Akatsuki organization fandom, there still has to be the mastermind behind this book.

Tsunade, Konan, Azamo, Satsumai, Terumi Mei, Yukito, Kurenai, and Hayakura These are all good heroines 😍

The writing is okay, but it takes it too much for granted, the characters are dull, and the enemies are all idiots. Only the protagonist is smart and does not have his own fighting system. It is a mess. A strong person is not called a strong person if he has various abilities. Except for the battle with Gai, which is well described, the other battles are either cruel or turn-based. Some of the abilities that are obtained too easily are useless. Even if I say that I like ninjutsu, I don't see it. The details are too lacking, and the emotions are taken for granted, and there is no sense of expectation.

Can I fuse primary-generation cells with Nagato?

Good guy, it's just a complete mess, not much different from the eunuch.

I can't say who the heroine is, but I can always tell who the heroine is.

In the battle with Minato, Minato was portrayed as too weak, or in other words, the opponent was simply outwitted, and the rhythm of the battle was controlled by the protagonist who was not as strong as Minato.

Why are so many people who write about Naruto so obsessed with flying thunder god? Flying thunder god is indeed a very practical ninjutsu, but it is really useless against real masters. Madara looked at flying thunder god like a child jumping around. Tobirama sneaked up on Madara in the fourth battle, but was instantly defeated by him. After defeating him, Minato could only use the Flying Thunder God to save people, and had no chance to attack Madara. This shows that the Flying Thunder God is not a magical skill, and it is not of much use to people at the level of the Five Kage. The protagonist already has a golden finger, so after learning this thing, it will be used as a runaway attack.

Workers work and work together, and all workers are superior to others. Ninjas are just tools, how can they have thoughts?

Single and more than nothing? The author can say something about his own work.

Forcibly showing off is the most deadly😥

So what about Uchiha's ninjutsu and other assets? Money too? Send TM to Konoha?

Why is the update unstable? Do you want it to be cool?

Three words after reading the last chapter

Why not design a unique fighting style for the protagonist instead of writing whatever comes to mind...

It's very well written, it would be better if it were updated more.

And still no mention of legacy? He also wants to let the weasel go to the rain ninja and disgust the remaining Uchiha clan members. Does the author love Sarutobi very deeply?

Although there are many shortcomings in all aspects, from a story perspective, it has attracted me. What I hate the most is when readers teach authors to write books. If you have opinions and ideas, you can raise them, but whether or not to adopt them depends on the author's intentions and ideas. Does the author have his own thoughts and ideas? Does he write according to the readers' ideas or is he writing the book himself? This is how I read books. I read them when I can, and I can't leave them alone.

It's interesting. This book is quite light-hearted. I was so angry with Naruto that I coughed after reading it. Leaving aside the author's personal stories, I feel that what attracted me to this book was the relationship and dialogue between the characters, which requires the author's understanding of the characters' personalities. Although I don't understand it this way, I don't deny others, and the author's writing is also very interesting. Although I don't like to give opinions to the author, I personally really don't like harems. When I see beautiful characters accepting them, I lose my IQ. If I can't stand it, I won't criticize others, but will just silently praise the victory.

Is this good feeling too fast? Just held an umbrella for Xiao Nan once and you already have a good impression? So what does Nagato's years of companionship mean?

Don't tell me, I can see it, but I feel a little... Indescribable, so I'll just watch it, I've almost done it now, let's take care of it for a while.

Exquisite!

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

To catch up with the latest, I think it's okay, at least there are no particularly embarrassing words. But I remember didn't Scorpion let the protagonist kill him? Why did Xiao join in later?

Man, if the third generation was greedy for power, why would he give up his position to the fourth generation? There is no rule in Naruto that the position of Hokage must be elected after a few years. The third generation simply gave up the throne because he was unable to do what he wanted. How come there are so many conspiracy theories?