Fantasy Library

I feel that Ruqing's writing style is getting worse and worse, and the protagonist's structure is completely unmemorable. I think I can remember Noah and Fang Li even after several years. The current protagonist gives me the feeling of double standards and double standards.

Please stop complaining. I personally think that the plot design of the book written by Ruqing Ruchu is very logical and excellent. The general plot does not deviate from the original work, and it reads like a fan (after all, if the plot is changed to be different from the original, it will basically be some original character stories with the names of fan characters). After adding the protagonist, the details are changed, and the writing is full of two-dimensional flavor, which makes it very comfortable to read. To give a single example, the all-round fantasy content about Fairy Tail. Comparing it with the original work, you will find that the plot has been changed very comfortably. The protagonist Laxus' brothers in the Fairy Tail Civil War are antagonistic, his childhood relationship with Gray integrates into the guild, his childhood relationship with Lisanna and Mirajane, the sister-in-law, and Erza's (probably) childhood relationship that broke out Jellal. The Tenrou Island incident left a trump card for the guild in advance and saved the guild building, leaving money to barely survive. The guild was defeated by the Demon Director, and the guild demonstrated Fairy Tail's prestige by force, cutting off Zeref's immortal curse, accusing the other party of evading responsibility, and letting Zeref deal with the mess left by himself (the plot of the demon created by Zeref and the Western Continent, I won't write about the follow-up plot here and just skip it and stop at the end of the Demon Tail, which is perfect). I watched a lot of anime because I read a book that was so eloquent, Naruto: Soul Journey (I can't seem to find this book, it only writes about the plot of Naruto leaving the village, but the personal content is very enjoyable. Some of the unpleasant points in the early days of Naruto are due to the change of the protagonist) The Great Summoning of Girls (I was in junior high school when I read it, and it left a deep impression on me, and I dated Grand Battle, Sword Art Online, Illya, Star Dragon Knight, etc. Some of them have not read it. After reading Ru Qing's book, they read it and found that they couldn't stand it. The original plot was too frustrating; some of them have read it, and it was very enjoyable to read Ru Qing's book.) All-round fantasy (please click on the dungeon encounter to see if there is anything wrong. I have not read this series and read Ru Qing's book before reading it. When I watched it, I found that I couldn't watch it at all. Bell without the support of his predecessors was too frustrated. I felt that the whole series was just a history of Bell's crucifixion) It was a little cool, and I clicked on "Study to Fight the City" at the same time. I always thought that Boyie (ye) was the weapon in the original work. The name was so nice, but later I found out that it was an original weapon.) I haven't watched much of it since I died in the infinite. I even didn't finish watching the direct death in the infinite, so I didn't watch the side story of the "Strength Supremacy Classroom" in the "Infinite Death". Until the Summoner of Miracles (I am an old FGO player, Ruqing changed the time when Goetia appeared, from the fourth singular point London to the end of the fifth singular point, skipping Rome, Oceanus, and London. Goetia also explained why the fifth singular point came out. The reason is also very logical and there is a fan story with Luo Zhen, in which the skill girl, Tokyo Dark Crow and Blood Devouring Attack me. People think the changes are pretty good) Then I look forward to being in another world (did I make a mistake in looking for encounters in the dungeon? And the Fairy Kingdom in the Sixth Lostbelt, I personally think it is well written, and clicking on the Bone King at the same time, it is too strange to take through several levels of the Big Tomb in one go) The book is full of two-dimensional flavor, the details are processed, and some places can be seen as two-dimensional, but there are also disadvantages of being too two-dimensional, which is water. Because some of the plots of normal episodes are designed like this, and it is written like this. The second dimension is full of flavor, but it is indeed easy to become a watery word count (and it is easy to feel aggrieved in some places, such as Noah was forced to leave the family, and some people with short sight came to provoke him. Noah didn't have time to get angry, and was calmed down by the Loki family. The Loki family also knew that even if Noah didn't The ability value itself is also very strong. After all, he accidentally broke into the goddess bathhouse and later dealt with Aisi, but the gangster didn't know it. From the reader's perspective, it was a bit frustrating at the time, but it was full of flavor for a two-dimensional drama), but I personally don't think it is watery, because if you read this book as a two-dimensional drama, the plot does go like this. I really like RuTinRuTing's books, and they do have a lot of shortcomings, but to be honest, it's hard to find a fan with such a strong two-dimensional flavor, so I cherish them very much.

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It's the seventh day of the new year and it's still the first update. When will it resume?

The first comprehensive comic only has 1.5 Million words, is it no longer possible? Ha Jiqing😰

The whole 50 chapters are updated very quickly, and at the same time it is very popular. I loved it and hated it, so I could only watch it while dancing.

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Can you post what worlds there are 🤓

Let's talk about it briefly. From the all-round power cooling to the death-burning magic eye that burns the brain, to the summoning magic, every book likes to add various restrictions. To put it bluntly, your author's writing skills are not good, and you can't grasp the protagonist's combat power once it breaks the standard. The previous local error, full firepower, can push level 9, just to give a reason to overwhelm the combat power to level 7 and follow the plot. Once it deviates from the original plot, it will not be written. The main character If the fighting ability is beyond the norm, it will be suppressed. It is written that I always like to get a dancing clown to come out to provoke, but the protagonist really likes to watch him dance, and then take action after dancing. What kind of age is this kind of plot that makes people sick? No wonder the comic city is almost dead now. The masters with good writing skills have changed, and those with bad writing skills use the old-fashioned way of writing to reduce intelligence. I want to write the protagonist Yun Danfeng Qingqing and pretend to be cool, but the writing turns out to be a clown. The protagonist of this book is like a robot. Of the more than 80 chapters, there is only one chapter that feels a bit dark and windy blocking the road. The whole book is as bland as water. I hope there will be more improvements in the follow-up (can you change your habit of putting a limiter on the protagonist when you disagree)

​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​                                                                                                                Or "Zhixingwumuji" were almost all anime that were popular at the time, and none of the subsequent books followed the trend.       ，，，，， The most important thing is, don't overwhelm the protagonist's combat power. There are many high-combat worlds in the second dimension. Even if you imitate Lu Ge's start and simulate the Star Creation Map, you will still not be invincible. There are Saint Seiya, Hakoba, Sea Tiger, Dragon Ball, Day of Wrath, God's Throne, Warhammer 40K... A lot.

I hope there won't be any more original worlds added, it's really discouraging.

Ah? Being an experienced author, I really didn't expect that he would suddenly go crazy in Chapter 106. The reasons given are also outrageous. It's like gradually breaking through the constraints. You could just add some foreshadowing. He kissed her directly and forcefully. To put it bluntly, even the guy on the roadside who was slapped in the face by the protagonist in other books was also a gangster.

Author, are you Japanese? Otherwise, why would the protagonist still be Asasi? I'm still a virgin now. Even Japanese anime rarely write about this outdated setting.

Ruqing, if you continue like this, the only thing left in your book will be the filial son. Mountain breeze, Gu. The upper hexagram Genshan is [stop], the lower hexagram Xunfeng is [conformity]. Those above are stagnant, while those below are submissive. This is a phenomenon of decay and decay.

The author writes a variety comic very well, but it can't be separated from the plot. No matter how powerful the protagonist is, the plot generally remains the same, just like the plot. I hope the author writes better and better, everything is a personal opinion.

Why are you so nice to Rias? It's special training and it's breaking off the fragments of the holy spear to make artificial artifacts. No matter how cool you pretend to be, isn't the only thing you can do is lick it?

Are the artifacts you received in the first few worlds just decorations? The Zanpakuto can't beat others without using the God-killing Gear? When I read a book like yours, I just see the protagonist holding an artifact from another world and showing off his abilities. What is this thing you are writing about now?

The simplest thing is that if this book has no results and no income, Luo Qing will panic, unless he doesn't write it with all his heart.

One book is not as good as the other. The protagonist of the all-round fantasy is at least decisive in killing and does not talk too much nonsense in each chapter. Each subsequent book can only have one or two chapters of nonsense dialogue. Although I understand the author's idea of ​​​​just maxing out the word count, but it will be backlashed after all.

Rubbish, Che Zhuluo kept saying it over and over again. The whole article was full of useless nonsense that had no meaning, which greatly affected the reading experience.

What should I say, I can't accept the protagonist's application of his own power system. All his strength is in weapons, and he rarely improves his skills. And then he doesn't use corresponding weapons according to various situations. So why does the protagonist collect so many weapons? If he has stronger weapons, he won't use the old weapons, right? The Cat Next Door also has a book about a weapon master like the protagonist. It seems to be called Weapon Master. The protagonist in that book also has a weapon-based system. But in the end, the weapons held by others appear to be bright because the protagonist himself is strong, unlike the protagonist in this book. Each weapon is stronger than the other, but the growth of the protagonist cannot keep up with the strength of the weapon.

The question is, author, how long has it been since you watched a new show? I mean really watch the new shows that you like and that are popular. You probably haven't done this for a long time, right? You didn't learn new ways of writing. If you keep spinning around in your comfort zone with new themes, you will become what you are now.

This time it's finally a comprehensive comic. Come on, keep talking. It's been so long since I've written a pure comprehensive comic. Let's slowly get the hang of it. I won't say that I'll just go straight to death. I'll be very satisfied if I can equal Qizhao.

From Fangli, I have been studying this bowl of rice for many years. Whenever I want to try something new, at least it is popular and popular. It's not that I don't want to chase it, but I am really tired of it and can't stand it anymore...

There are always a few fixed worlds, and the routines are written over and over again. If it weren't for the decline of zonghua now, no one would be willing to watch it except for the old fans who have been chasing you. When the protagonist interacts with the characters in these works, I can guess what to do next with my eyes closed, but it doesn't matter, as long as you don't be too smart and add some original plots, there are not many zongman fans who can watch it.

They don't work on the story itself, they just tinker with the original plot. Apart from changing some tragedies and parts that make everyone unhappy, it's still almost the same as the original work. If you continue with this old writing method, it won't matter whether you write an old series or a new series.

The following content contains spoilers The Death Chapter has a very outrageous plot. Probably after the original protagonist entered Soul Society, the protagonist went to the captain's office to kill Aizen for no reason. (The protagonist's so-called reason is revenge) From here on, the more losses the protagonist suffers, the more stupid he is compared to Aizen And during this period, the protagonist behaves like an inexplicable stupid kid. He has no plan for Aizen's fake death. I saw interesting things during the pursuit of Aizen ( Kurosaki Ichigo) stopped to play. The captain came after him and didn't run away, so he just played hard What's even more amazing is that he didn't show the strength to play hard at all. He was actually injured, and then he thought of running away (the author explained that the protagonist didn't want to use too strong abilities) Then what are you inexplicably hitting in front of you? If you don't want to use it, then don't fight with your teammates in the first place. As mentioned earlier, the protagonist is invincible in Shunpo. If you don't want to stay and play, you can just leave The protagonist initially cuts Aizen out of revenge, but Aizen has no direct losses until the protagonist is injured (it is an identity that must be given up sooner or later) and the protagonist has been cut by his teammates And further on, there is a plot where the protagonist's deputy captain is worried about him, because he does not know why the protagonist suddenly cuts Aizen. When I think about the author's previous description of the protagonist's lament that fortunately his mental age is not the clearest and stupidest, it becomes more and more abstract, because the protagonist's character is obviously not as stupid as his performance in this paragraph.

Overall, I had a bad feeling from the Battle of the City chapter, and skipped the Death chapter after reading the comments. The God-Killer chapter and the final blood-devouring attack chapter were also very bad, and I was completely uninterested in the extras To be honest, I felt that the protagonist was so concerned this time, and I thought he would be a cold and ruthless person, but it turned out not to be the case. The most difficult thing is that this time the protagonist knows the plot, and the author does not dare to make more changes to the original work, which leads to the protagonist sometimes sitting back and watching the situation get worse. He has become slow, his behavior is very childish, and in short, he is extremely stupid In the final analysis, the author is path dependent. He is used to the previous writing method and is too lazy to spend time on plot breakthroughs. There are so many fanfics that involve The plot of acg must be repetitive. Everyone is tired of the minor repairs. This is really not a problem of new and old shows. The author will have to put more effort into the next one. There is no future for fooling readers. I hope the lesson of this book is big enough

It's disappointing. It's already not that good in the original version, and it's even worse here. I won't be booking all of it directly in the future.

I read the new book and got poor grades, so I cut it again.