Take Liu Tianxian to the World of Film and Television

There's nothing to say about the subject matter! The world of choice is okay, don't be picky! Mainly the male and female protagonists are in their thirties, and it's fine if they occasionally jump out, but if they do it all the time, they look like they are crazy...

Generally speaking, it is the daily world of an immortal imagined by an immortal. In the beginning, he pretends to be crazy and acts foolishly. Skipping through 10 chapters does not affect the reading. It is a pity that such a good subject matter, I will leave it for now.

Damimi

Sissi

The character described by this protagonist is flattering to say that he is a junior high school student.

Liu Yifei is still the heroine, but it's very embarrassing to still fall in love like a child at the age of 37. Especially when there are some serious signs of getting together, the plot is ruined by someone, which is embarrassing, cliche, and bloody. It's so nonsense that nothing happens when a normal man sleeps with Liu Yifei in his arms every day. The author writes this to shame the protagonist for his male dysfunction, or to shame Liu Yifei for being an old man. Also, Liu Yifei is 37 years old and still embarrassed to be controlled by her mother,,,,

The author is not very capable but can still write. What has the author experienced? .

When will Yang Mi come and see Liu Yifei's good looks? ? ? In the middle are Liu Shishi and Tang Yan. What? Did Yang Mi's smelly foot powder really make them stupid?

The author's idea is very good, but the character plot written by the author is too unrestrained, and the whole thing becomes funny and nonsense. As long as you make the characters more logical and the plot more normal and serious, just write the male and female protagonists in various worlds to struggle to survive and gain abilities, understand each other and support each other, and naturally get together, etc., It will be a good book, and the results will be much better.

The plot is off-kilter, written haphazardly, without an outline, and the protagonist simply doesn't have the IQ of a child at his age.

Really, can anyone tell me what this author has been through?

What a crap,,,,, The author apologizes like crazy. Such a good subject matter has been ruined. There is still a certain threshold when using a pen.

After reading a few chapters, my first impression was that it was a bit strange. It would be awkward to have a single female protagonist in this type of novel. If you don't spend a lot of time writing about multiple female supporting characters, then you will be able to write a lot less if you are just a fairy. But if you write about a harem, the setting is still fixed. To be honest, I came here from next door. The standard of the book next door is actually considered to be above average. Luozi's entertainment literature has reached the point where there is no bottom line. I saw in the comments that the author has opened a new book here, so I came back immediately. It has been almost a year since I wrote this book. As the author said, it depends on perfect attendance. In fact, you can try to open a new book with this type of theme, and then summarize the experience of these two books and create a harem-type movie series time travel novel. Compared to a two-hour movie, the TV series is still too long, but the main positions of these actresses are in the TV series (see if we can combine it, rely on movies for time travel, and make TV series in the real world). When his combat power collapses, try to slow him down. In the early stage, you can create some content from the ancient world or period dramas, which can not only cultivate feelings but also prevent numerical expansion. The real world still needs to be less disruptive. It's okay to live a proper life. You can make as much trouble as you want with the door closed, but you still need the personality you should have when you open the door. Tianxian and Damimi can both be written, but the timeline can be moved forward. These two people do have high traffic and are read by many people. In other words, they are very popular in the Internet literary circle. In comparison, Zhao Xiaodao, Bai Lu, and Reba are slightly behind. If the time travel world collapses, it will collapse. It is recommended that the main world should not collapse too quickly, otherwise the content that can be written will be greatly reduced. For entertainment articles, you can make more TV series and the like in the early stage, and make some contributions in the mid-term. This can take care of the book lovers who watch entertainment and movies to a certain extent. The reason why I followed the first book was actually because I saw the author's capital letters about Concubine Hua. After all, the eldest sister next door is really not popular. The way you wrote about her really made me shine (I am a fan of Jiang Xin, and I still respect such a dedicated and good actor). You don't need too many harem heroines, just 4-6, but you still need to plan carefully who you want to write about. If they are all actors, you may suffer from visual fatigue. You can add a singer or a host. The ideas mentioned by some book friends are also very good, such as letting the fairy sister directly travel through time and become the character she plays. In addition, you can add a setting so that each world has a chance to save your life, which increases the error tolerance and allows you to die more. After all, it is straightforward, and the whole book is complete. Finally, I hope the author will get better and better.

Is the author a woman? Why does she smell like a girl's porn? Such a good subject is written as a dog-licking article. It doesn't have the courage of a male porn at all. It seems okay at first, but it looks more and more wrong at the back. It is covered with Zhu Tianwen's daily dog-licking.

Do the first two worlds have any effect? ​​I feel like I haven't received any goods at all.

Coming from next door, let's see what the author's book is like

When will I start the latest novel?