Pirate: I Am a Strict Disciplinarian in the Navy

And it doesn't feel good at all, 90% of the time it's nonsense. The whole process contains private information, and the author interprets One Piece with his own understanding. In an extraordinary world where power is paramount, it tells the author's own understanding of One Piece, and also brings in criticism of reality, summarizing the literary youth and painful literature. . . .

Chapter 2, Physique v2, it takes a hundred days to recover from a broken bone, the original body knows six postures, plus other minor problems, do you think it looks good because you have never eaten good?

Why not call him Uncle Ji😌😌

In the current world view of One Piece, the top brass of the Navy can be said to be all villains. The Celestial Dragons have a "human hunt" every three years, massacring hundreds of thousands of civilians at a time. The top brass of the Navy more or less participate in it. There are not many high-ranking Navy leaders who are clean. The justice of the Navy is a complete joke. Garp participated in the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, so Garp is not a good person. He protected the Celestial Dragons who massacred civilians under Rocks, and Garp has indirectly become an accomplice of the Celestial Dragons.

It's good, but we should find some geniuses to design golden fingers like this, right? No matter how many soldiers there are, there won't be one genius who can help them. The gap is too big.

In this world where personal power is absolutely dominant, teaching these tactics in an elite training camp is a waste of other people's time to become stronger. The key to winning or losing a war lies in the victory or defeat of high-end combat power. Even if the miscellaneous fish wins, it won't have much effect.

I have only watched about two hundred episodes of One Piece, which is not much, so I don't know many characters. Many authors who write fan fiction will post a picture when a new character debuts to let readers who are not familiar with anime have an impression, but this author did not. This is harmless and not a poisonous point. Overall, the writing is not bad, and there are almost no minor flaws for me. But the most terrible and only poisonous thing is Gibran and Gion. The two of them fell in love with each other for no reason and without any emotional foreshadowing. Isn't it so relaxed? I don't know, I thought I was watching an American TV series. Is this trying to treat the readers as Americans? When this plot first appeared, there was a lot of scolding in the comment area. All of them didn't understand it and thought it was too abrupt. The author never mentioned this plot later, so I thought he knew his mistake and changed it. As a result, in Chapter 223, Gion hinted to Peacock that he had a "war" with Gibran. If you say that Kahlil Gibran and Gion are in love, then SEX is a plus. However, your free monthly treat of two strangers is probably only popular with Americans. To me, it just feels disgusting. I'm a fan of novels. When I heard this, I immediately went to the comment section. There was no scolding as I expected, not even a single chapter. Others' doubts are not a bad thing, it is the real bad thing that no one cares. I'm too lazy to post chapters anymore, so bye.

I don't recommend reading it, the free chapters are still okay, but the paid chapters are seriously off topic and have nothing to do with the title of the book. Squeeze others in the front, and export in the back. Inexplicably, he becomes a swordsman, and there is also the glory of the swordsman, and the anti-character design

A man traveled through time to become a pirate and became an artistic young man. Although he still had a golden finger, he didn't think about how to become stronger day by day. He just thought about saving this and that, and then plotting this and that... The author is gay, right?

The author of the first chapter is Yunzi. How could a lieutenant of the headquarters come to the East China Sea? What's more, how could he be injured in the East China Sea when he mastered the Six Styles and was just a lieutenant. . . At least they're all colonels

If God had not given birth to me, I would try the Poison Man. The poisonous path will last forever like a long night. The poison will come! The top of the immortal, proud of the world! With his poison, there will be heaven! The poison of the river comes from the sky! One poison spreads across the sky to suppress the world! Break the world of mortals! Kill all the immortals! One poison in hand, kill nine heavens! If there is no true immortal in the world? I would like to test the poison and become an immortal! Ahhh! I didn't expect that I would die from all the poisons I tasted. This book is poisonous——

It's not good to see people engaging in intrigues in a hot-blooded drama. I saw that it was all such a conspiracy before it was put on the shelves.

The writing is good, but the training method is somewhat mechanical. In reality, this is done because the difference in individual combat power after being armed is very small, and personal physical fitness is far less than the combat power bonus brought by the equipment. War relies on collective strength and equipment. So collaboration and discipline are important, and public support is also key. But in the world of pirates, the gap in individual combat power is too great. Equipment bonuses are far inferior to Devil Fruits, and physical fitness bonuses are not as large. What is important at this time is to develop the maximum ability according to the potential of different people, rather than giving everyone average physical fitness. War is a competition between the top combat power of both sides. The victory or defeat of the ordinary soldiers and elites below is not important at all. The victory or defeat of the top combat power determines everything. It is in the daily maintenance of order that ordinary soldiers play their role.

How did you learn the Six Moves when you started off so weakly? You don't think the Six Moves are just skills, right? You can't learn the Six Moves without a strong body. You start off with a weak start. Don't you get tired of writing about a trashy start?

Studio-written novel? What rubbish. Can such a weak protagonist be an instructor at the Navy Headquarters? The co-authored world view follows the protagonist, right? All kinds of mindless operations have no logic at all

Can inherit the training effect of people under pressure. As a result, the protagonist is in a naval training camp, with a thousand people, training for one year, and the training effect is at least 2 times. Even if he is an ordinary person, with the equivalent of two thousand years of training, the protagonist is still so rubbish. . .

The plot didn't advance at all, it was just water, the sea, it was all water!

Will it take a hundred days to recover from a broken bone? ? Everyone in the pirate world has a unique health lock. No matter how serious the injury is, they can recover quickly. How can your protagonist be so fragile if you are the only one who is disabled? ? ?

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It's too watery and getting more and more watery. The pressure system in the later stage has almost no sense of existence, the character attributes have not been refreshed for a long time, and the plot still revolves around the few places and people that appeared in the early stage. It is too boring.

It was fine up to now, and even the part about the People's Army was still a small climax. But after it was released, the author felt as if he had a sudden illness. Tezzolo's inexplicable pole dance directly made me? ? ? No, pigeons, you just watch him eat the golden fruit? I didn't pay attention to this, good guy, the advantage of the plot is not necessary, the knowledge and sex are for nothing, I came here just to show off, right? Then watch Tezzolo do a pole dance while trampling his personality after eating? Then there will be no more. Do you dare to be more inexplicable?

It's mediocre, with too few characters and plots. It keeps talking about everyday things around those few people. Come on, this is a pirate novel. Your passion is so weak.

He is a eunuch, it is still over 🙂,

I haven't watched it for a while, why haven't I updated it?

This is one of the few pirate novels with such good writing style that I have seen in Qidian. It is highly recommended. However, there are many sailors who are trying to criticize it, talking about conspiracy, water injection, literary youth and the like. Haha, maybe only those casual white novels are suitable for them 🤔

Good brother, are you still there? QAQ

Hello everyone, I am Gibran's younger brother-Gibran

Come on, everyone wants to be a Celestial Dragon. This is better than being a Celestial Dragon in the real world. You might have more fun after traveling through time, and the dark side of human nature will be fully amplified.