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I saw the protagonist coming home from the police station The narrative is not chaotic, but it seems a bit fragmented The protagonist's personality is also strange, looking like a psychopath

The book is a good one, but the main character's personality is too exciting, he uses too much force, and he looks stupid.

As an ordinary person, if you have to pay for the above ideas with your life, then after becoming stronger, can you let all those people die? After all, if the protagonist becomes stronger, then the top and bottom will be reversed, and the people below should sacrifice.

Long-winded, abstract, and incomprehensible writing

In the early hours of this evening, this book has entered the third round of recommendations. Thank you for your continued reading. As a new writer, I have various shortcomings. It is only because of your support that I can enter the third round of recommendations. I kindly ask everyone to work hard to read in the next three days (Sunday to Tuesday). Friends who are book lovers only need to turn to the two recently updated chapters, stop for a while, and then finish reading, and help me get a four-round recommendation. As for breaking out of the category, I don't want to, and I don't dare to think about it. Thank you again.

After Panda, it's a mess and I don't know what to write.

Inexplicable and wordy

If you use thunder ☁️ and add the clouds, shouldn't it mean that the weather is smooth? If you use thunder alone, you can be struck by five thunders. .

Early this morning, the fourth round of recommendations for this book officially started. Thank you for your continued reading. New writers know that they have many shortcomings. Many friends have given very pertinent suggestions. They want to change but have nowhere to start. However, they have written them down and pay attention to them in the future. Being able to enter the fourth round is, on the one hand, because of your love and tolerance and persistence in reading, and on the other hand, it is because of the unpopularity of the game channel. All I can do is write the rest of the story, keep updating it, and then finish it.

The plot of the novel makes no sense? ? ? What new narrative technique

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