Starting from Xiaoao and Going Retrograde

The writing is incomprehensible, I don't know what the protagonist is going to do? He has a very unpleasant personality. Originally, Linghu Chong wanted to stay in Huashan to recover from his injuries, but the protagonist decided to take Linghu Chong to find Ping Yizhi. Before Ping Yizhi, he took Linghu Chong to meet Ren Yingying, causing Linghu Chong to go down the same old path. Such people are deliberately harming others.

The protagonist's presence in this book is really weak, not as good as Linghu Chong's. It feels like the protagonist has traveled through time and space, but nothing seems to have changed. Moreover, Linghu Chong made mistakes, but other people turned their anger on the protagonist. It's really frustrating, and the protagonist is like a robot.

Chapter 36: So poisonous, is it deliberately connected to the plot of the TV series? It was obviously you who found Green Bamboo Lane by yourself, and then you made excuses to take Linghu Chong there, and then you pretended to say it was destiny. The protagonist is simply a psychopath.

The protagonist has been going to Huashan for more than ten years, but Huashan still hasn't changed much. It doesn't make any difference whether there is a protagonist or not. What's the point of having a protagonist?

The character of the protagonist is very important in Zhutianwen. The protagonist in this article is not likeable and it is very awkward to write. He can feel sorry for others when he kneels down, but he can also watch Yu Canghai wipe out a whole family. What does the protagonist want? Number one in the world. Then what? Do you want a sect? Isn't it easy for a future generation to develop a Huashan sect knowing that Feng Qingyang is there? How should you write about the future world? Will I be unable to continue writing?

The protagonist is like an NPC, with no purpose, no desire, and even no instinct for self-preservation.

The interpretation of Liu Zhengfeng and Qu Yang is really laughable. If you want to talk about your stance, just talk about your stance. If you want to talk about scheming, just talk about scheming. If you want to talk about romance and horses, you should forcefully bullshit!

The main character feels dispensable.

I really don't understand why everyone treats Dugu Nine Swords like a treasure. Damn it, will you die if you don't learn it? This thing depends on talent, and the protagonist learns it without even looking at whether he has such talent. It's really speechless.

If the author is a man, I feel like your writing is a bit like a time travel by a heroine.

Jin Yong's novels began as imitations of Liang Yusheng's first book, The Book of Swords, Enmity and Enmity. His own style is mature, and there are no real masters in the Green Forest Escort Agency. No matter how famous they are, they are all low-level. This is also realistic. In ancient times, escorting was not only dangerous, but also very hard, and you had to eat and sleep in the open. But also communicate with others and sell smiles. Isn't it good for a real master to sit on the ground and divide the spoils, collect filial piety, and establish a sect? Just like Yitianli, the most famous escort agency in the Central Plains region was also wiped out by the second-rate Yin Susu. The escort head is an outer disciple of Shaolin. It is logical to write this way. Those who work hard and make money are all peripheral forces of the sect. The core characters all specialize in martial arts. So, in Jin Yong's martial arts world view. When Lin Yuantu opened an escort agency, he should have hidden himself in the city. He had been pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, and he had a slight reputation. In fact, he was similar to Lin Pingzhi's grandfather, who was invincible with a golden sword and had a great reputation. On the surface, Yue Buqun wanted to give him some face. However, he is actually a second-rate person. His son-in-law's family was wiped out, and he didn't even dare to fart. Lin Yuantu is just such a character in the eyes of the public. His greatest achievement was to use the big to bully the small and defeat Chang Qingzi, who was not as good as Yu Canghai. The process was grinding and grinding, and the swordsmanship was still remembered by the local people. Even if Chang Qingzi lost, he was still unconvinced and eventually died of anger. Is Changqingzi undefeated in the East, or seeking defeat alone? Never lost? Why did you end up depressed because you were unconvinced? Isn't it because you looked down on the disgraceful escort? No one cares about the evil sword technique. Referring to Shooting the Condor, Wang Chongyang was not dead yet, Ouyang Feng was waiting outside. As soon as his mourning hall was set up, Brother Feng came in. This is the strength of the Quanzhen Sect, and only the Four Jue have the ability to be strong. It is an open secret that the younger generations of the Lin family are poor in martial arts. If Lin Yuantu is so powerful and famous for his evil sword skills, the Lin family has long been crushed to ashes. Lin Pingzhi's father may not have the chance to grow up. After all, even at the peak of Huashan and Wudang, there are demon sects who rush in to grab the secret books, and the Lin family is just a loser. So, the most logical thing is that Lin Yuan Tu is well hidden and in the eyes of the world, he is just a second-rate master, so the Lin family can be stable for decades. As for the Qingcheng faction taking action decades later, the so-called revenge secrets are just excuses. It has been said in the book that it is public knowledge that the Lin family's martial arts are not good. The Qingcheng sect really wants to take revenge and snatch the secret book. How can it be possible to wait for decades? This is martial arts, not fairy tales. In ancient society, decades were longer than many people's lifetimes. You know, at the beginning of the plot, Lin Yuantu's sons are dead, and Lin Pingzhi is his great-grandson. In addition to the wrong time, Qingcheng Mountain's actions are also weird. He said he was robbing secret books, but he acted very arrogantly and viciously, and even other provincial branches would kill him. More demonic than demonic sect. It is not the upright style of a famous family, which caused a sensation in the whole world. Is Yu Canghai the best in the world? After creating such a sensation and really grabbing the secret book, can he hold on to it? Hey, here comes a strange place. It caused such a sensation that the master of Qingcheng wanted to grab the magic secret book, but no one stepped in to fight for it. Only one underworld master intervened and pointed out that he was from outside the Great Wall. Why is this? ? Everyone knows that Yu Cang's revenge and the secret book are just a gimmick. In fact, Dongfang was hiding from Xiuhua, Xiang Wentian and others were causing trouble. The external pressure on Wuyue became smaller, and Zuo Leng thought about joining the faction. So, let Yu Canghai go out to test the wind. That's why the Qingcheng sect, who has a well-known family, is inexplicable. Because after decades of losing the martial arts competition, his elders became cruel and vicious and destroyed the whole family. This is not Yu Canghai's style. With his true style, even with the strength of the Qingcheng Sect, he would not be able to survive now. Such vicious methods are exactly the same as Zuo Lengchan's. So, before the secret book was found, Yu Canghai put aside decades of planning and went to Hengshan, a thousand miles away, to participate in Liu Zhengfeng's golden basin. So, in his opinion, decades of planning are not as important as Liu Zhengfeng's golden basin to wash his hands. The sword manual to ward off evil is just a gimmick. No one took it seriously, except for the famous camel outside the Great Wall, a country bumpkin from out of town. When Linghu Chong suddenly emerged as a new force and the evil-fighting sword manual became famous, Yu Canghai, who had made the world afraid to say anything in the early stage, was immediately hunted down like a dog. To sum up, Lin Yuantu is just a bodyguard with a slight reputation, and no one takes his evil-fighting sword manual seriously. Yu Canghai was Zuo Lengchan's son. After he destroyed the Lin family to test Jianghu's reaction, Zuo Lengchan immediately made up his mind to take action. First destroy the entire Liu family, frighten the Hengshan Gate, and even accept a golden-eyed crow as the second and fifth son. Then Huashan, Hengshan and Taishan are all similar. If Linghu Chong hadn't come out, he would have almost completed the detachment. Of course it's just almost, because he can't finish it, Shaolin Wudang will intervene, which is why the two Taishan Beidou, like Linghu Chong very much. ~~~~~~! In summary, if you want a logical and reasonable explanation. Lin Yuantu was very successful in pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. The evil-proofing sword manual was just a gimmick at the beginning, but later it turned out to be a fake. Yu Canghai's contradictory behavior is also because he is a pawn in Songshan and throws stones to ask for directions.

Support the author. I finally found a fan novel that is a bit normal. Although it is cheating, it is not a big deal and it is within an acceptable range. As for the plot, it would be boring if it could completely overturn the original work. Behind any major event is the combined result of a large number of forces and factors. It is too difficult for an individual to turn things around without cheating. As for Yue Buqun, there is no need to worry. If you want to tear off the cloak of disguise as a hypocrite, at least the benefits must be far greater than continuing to pretend to be a gentleman. Otherwise, why pretend to be a gentleman? The so-called deeds do not care about the heart, and there is no good person in the heart. A hypocrite who pretends to be a gentleman all his life is a true gentleman. Judging from the current situation, Yue Buqun actually has no motive for going dark. Most of the crises in the original work have been resolved by the protagonist. The survival of Huashan - Yue Buqun knows the existence of Feng Qingyang and is not afraid of not being able to preserve the inheritance of Huashan. The heir to the sect—the protagonist's talent and ability are impeccable, and Yue Buqun has no son, so there is no problem of paving the way for his son. In the original work, Yue Buqun is not young anymore. No matter how obsessed with power he is, he will be unstoppable if he can be active for another ten or twenty years. In the end, he still has to pass on the position of leader. The protagonist has not cultivated cronies in Huashan, and Lao Yue is not worried about the protagonist's rebellion. In terms of martial arts, Huashan's martial arts may not be bad at the later stages. Lin Pingzhi may not be able to beat Lao Yue in front of the palace even if he has a sword manual to ward off evil spirits. Actually, the issue of self-imposed palace is not that big a problem. It is not that all eunuchs are perverts or that there are good people. The problem is the complete depravity with the palace as the node. Yue Buqun, who came from the palace, completely tore off the pretense, gave up the restraint on himself, and became only pursuing power and being controlled by desire. In fact, to give a counter-example, there is a master who attacks Huashan. In order to preserve the inheritance of Huashan, Yue Buqun decides to pass the headship to Linghu Chong and practice swordsmanship in his own palace to deal with powerful enemies. Isn't that so unacceptable?

Zhihu's novels about The Swordsman are rare, but the level is much higher than yours. They basically turn Yue Buqun into a saint. People who like Yue Buqun won't read your level of whitewashing Yue Buqun in the original work is a genuine villain, and it's annoying to watch him being cleansed in the original work, because he must be cleansed. Definitely destroys the logic of the original work For example, in the brothel, the original work has Yue Buqun watching Linghu Chong from the window, until Linghu Chong is about to be beaten to death, Lin Pingzhi appears, and then Lin Pingzhi is being pressed down to become a disciple before taking action. You changed it here to Yue Buqun lecturing, and he felt that Linghu Chong was being beaten before he wanted to take action. This is a logical flaw.

After persisting for more than ten chapters, this book is still suitable for those who are not familiar with the plot of Swordsman and martial arts lovers. Because the protagonist can be said to be completely loyal to the original work, the overall plot is supported by the original work. There is definitely no major flaws, and it can be considered exciting. The added protagonist's positioning is not inconsistent, and his behavior is quite smart with modern people. But if you expect the protagonist to be a great hero and proud of the world, you will probably be disappointed. To put it simply, it is as good as it should be with or without the protagonist.

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Chapter Six Time Summary: Yue Lingshan is 18, Linghu is 25, and Qin Zheng is in his 30s. As the most special outsider in this world, Qin Zheng always feels like he is on the outside watching a show. He really can't think too much, as he will easily get entangled if he thinks too much! Although it has been more than twenty years since the identity substitution happened and the flaws have long since been revealed, it is still difficult to complete. In addition to telling myself that I am a true disciple of Huashan after entering Huashan, every time I go down the mountain and walk around the world, I still easily feel like a spectator. This section of cognitive positioning is very important. Many friends looked at it awkwardly before, but maybe they ignored it here. I drew a line specifically for friends who are watching later!

The concept of this book is a bit different. The protagonist is a bystander or occasionally drives the plot. The concept is novel and worth reading.

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