Lord of the Mysteries: Prisoner Pathway

A big lump🤔

Oops, let me go, all the characters will be destroyed 🥵

I can't say that the writing is not good, I can only say that it relies on the history of Gu.

How to make it a bit difficult to start from the introduction 😠

When writing fan fiction, you still need to read the original work!

The author should go to Western Persimmon. This novel is not as good as the one at the starting point, but it would be much better to study Western Persimmon. , Really really

For me, who has read more than ten chapters, the overall feeling is that the plot is very compact and not bad, but regardless of the name of the protagonist or the close relationship between the characters, I really want to touch the protagonist of the Ring of Fate. And the most important thing is, I know the author writes very compactly, but after having written twenty chapters, I can't stop and write a special chapter about what the situation is now, what the protagonist should do, and what thoughts he has! ? These authors did not write clearly at all, so that the next event started before this event was over. And he is unwilling to stop and talk about the protagonist's own situation and thoughts and opinions on things (it feels like he is an indigenous protagonist, and he is also a copy of the indigenous protagonist of The Circle of Fate.) As a result, the readers are completely unable to follow the author's train of thought, and the novel is inexplicable! Yes, overall it feels really baffling! I obviously feel that the author's writing is pretty good, but I just feel that it's very confusing? !

Why is the male protagonist so... Well, childish or childlike😰😰

The name of the organization is a bit unflattering, the characters are too idiosyncratic, and the plot is a bit unreasonable.

Have you ever thought about how to become a god or even a Sequence One? After all, now the prisoner's One has an owner. One part of Si'a is bound and one is unique, and one part is in the hands of Demon King Fabuti. There is no chance at all. Although it seems that Si'a is not too strong in the original book, but when he fights, it is not that the main body does not come to fight, or he is resistant to the same sequence, or one plus one is stronger than him. If you really want to say that one Sequence One, Si'a may be the strongest after all, he is contaminated by cassava.