
I, Uzumaki Naruto, Want to Be an Admiral
我,漩涡鸣人,想当海军大将
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- Completed
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- 339k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It seems like Naruto hasn't killed a few people with his own hands, right? You killed the pirates with one blow without even saying anything. Your personality changed too quickly.
? Why a general?
Can't he be a marshal? Can't you overthrow the Celestial Dragons? Can't he be the supreme leader of the world government? Can't it be the revolutionary army?
The title should read like this, "Naruto Uzumaki, I Want to Be the Dragon-Man's Dog"
It was okay at first, but after Naruto learned the truth, he refused to take revenge and competed with Danzo for Hokage. This disgusted the readers. I suggest that you forgive Danzo for being a dog to Konoha and just become a virgin bitch protagonist in the novel.
Speechless, being discriminated against, drinking expired milk, do you want to kill all of Konoha with a tailed beast jade? In the pirate world, you say you are dedicated to justice, but why don't you say you want to kill all the Celestial Dragons, and why do you continue to be dogs to the Celestial Dragons? This is too much of a double standard!
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There is still creativity, which is important! Otherwise, it would be useless without anyone coming in to read the book. But the author is too easily influenced by the readers, which is not good... Danzo's way of handling it makes me think that the author may not have an outline. If there is no need for post-production, the early stage may collapse. It's not that it has to be Danzo, but it should be logically closed, at least look reasonable, have cause and effect, and don't seem inexplicable (for example, in the first chapter, Kakashi was directly killed without any reason, and he would definitely be scolded. But if there is an appropriate description, for example, as the son of a teacher, he was not taken care of at all, and when he was the guidance jounin, he only cared about Sasuke, and finally decided to take revenge on Danzo, and the third generation was stopped. If this situation is not killed, it will at least be abolished, otherwise it will be rude not to deal with even a popular character). Appropriate explanations, logical plot arrangements, and clever guidance settings are what the author needs to spend time and brainpower to deal with, and what readers want to read. Even if it is a cool article, there is a huge difference between cool articles (for example: One Punch Man). The issue of combat power is also quite sensitive. The public is right and the mother-in-law is right, and the quarrel will never end. At this time, it depends on whether the author's setting is reasonable and whether the logic can be self-consistent. If it is handled well, it will at least be a good work. If it is not handled well, it will be scolded and the author will need to spend more time thinking about it. Evaluating the seedlings, they are a bit crooked and need to be observed.
Another weird plot. Zefa almost beat Naruto to death during training. Who wrote this kind of plot last time? It seemed like a book full of Overlord characters. Garp killed the protagonist during training, and the protagonist in turn felt that Garp did the right thing. It was weird.
Naruto's character is unlikely to want to be a navy admiral, and more likely he wants to be a pirate king, because Naruto needs a sense of identity. The pirate world is persecuted, and most people basically don't respect the navy or pirates... Secondly, Naruto's personality is out of the ordinary and he won't be too constrained to be a navy.
The changes were so messed up that I didn't even want to read them. I thought I could see the process, but the author listened to the orphan readers and made random changes? How about those orphans writing it? If Naruto is still bloodthirsty, then he might as well change the protagonist to Akainu.
So now the author really feels that which one is better to copy. The previous one wanted to be a god of death, and here is the one who wanted to be a navy admiral. Even if you think this idea is good, can you change the name? It's just like there are a lot of Shi Potian traveling through various worlds now, and it always gives people the feeling of being swept away by the studio.
People in One Piece like to brag about their fruit abilities, but in the end they can only bully those who are less domineering than themselves.
Umi Takako liked to lick the navy, but was stabbed in the back by Oda. There is justice in the navy
Talking all the time
The more I write about it later, the more it becomes more and more holy. The Nine Tails is too buggy and I have banned it. Maybe the novice bar has become more and more complete as it is written. No wonder it is falling out so fast. There are also problems with the plot handling of the two worlds. I am very tired from reading it. I think I will give up the book.
Let's compare the combat power. I think Naruto's combat power is greater than that of the pirate. Don't say that the pirate's physical strength is stronger than Naruto's. Isn't it because Naruto's attack power is greatly overflowed? The attack power and defense power of the pirates are roughly equal, so the battle can only be fought with endurance. Naruto's chakra is body + spirit. The pirate's side is the body. Ninjas can use chakra to perform ninjutsu with various magical effects, and they can continue to be developed. The pirate's side is the body and devil fruits. Devil fruits cannot be popularized and are difficult to develop. However, after the ninjutsu is developed, it can be popularized. Although it is difficult to master, it can be popularized.
After it was put on the shelves, there was a lot of difference. It said Ace's combat power was a candidate for a general, but then Smog's combat power was said to be a major general. Then after a 55-minute fight with the protagonist of Violence, it was said that the protagonist could hold the rank of general. I am not sure now that Ace's combat power was exaggerated.
It was just released and the update was discontinued twice and everyone dispersed.
Suggestion
Naruto's skill output is high, you might as well just write the One Piece world as having chakra restrictions. Skills in the pirate world are also limited in the ninja world. Otherwise, you will suffer the quarrel between Guang Huochu and Hai Chui.
It's time to punish these online eunuchs. Although it only cost a few cents, I still feel very unhappy about being cheated.
The bombs in Pirates are strengthened, and Xiao Di will become their nightmare when he comes.
In Naruto, you can set up a navy. In Pirates, you can work with Zefa to form a new navy. Zefa went crazy in his later years, but Zefa took away people with ideals. It would be more suitable for Naruto to be the leader. There is also the problem of military expenditures. After all, people with ideals are in the minority, and everyone has to eat.
Fruit
Is the author going to let Naruto eat the fruit?
Can't you just say a few words about the popular video? I thought the yellow flash would be reproduced.
If you want to watch the original version of Naruto, you can leave.
The heroine won't still be Hinata, right? Or fate 😅
Naruto shouldn't have accepted Nami's deal
"If this is the deal you said, then please forgive me for refusing!" Naruto's words made Nami pale, and she really shouldn't have hope for the navy. "It is the navy's duty to eliminate pirates, and my justice will not turn a blind eye to this." Naruto showed a smile common to passionate fools. "Why not, you are so talented, join the navy and be my navigator"
Have you seen the monthly pass? How can I vote for you with this amount of updates?
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Why not teach ninjutsu to the navy? As long as the Hokage learns from the Navy, pirates are not allowed to learn from the Hokage?
Can you change the update time back to noon?