Peninsula: After Amnesia

The plot of the protagonist is that he is mute without eyes, always bumps into people, and doesn't scream when he meets people

There is no main plot, the male protagonist has amnesia at the beginning and it is difficult to survive, like a fool

I've read two books written by you, but none of them are finished. If you can't take this bite, don't eat it!

After reading a few chapters, I'm really invincible. Without telling you the character of the male protagonist, why can't you write the character's name? Petite, short, baby-fat beauty, at first I thought it was to highlight her features, but in the end, her name didn't appear in several photos, so I used this adjective instead. It's too discouraging.

From Chapter 8 to Chapter 10, you feel like you are sleepwalking and writing randomly. It's very uncomfortable to read. It really persuades me to quit.

It's written like a child playing house

How come the male protagonist in this article looks like a retard? It's really weird.

The subject matter is quite attractive, but can you write it using your brain?

What you wrote is so verbose, it sounds so tiring

When I found this book in Daily Guide, I thought I had read it wrong. It was impossible! It's simply impossible! How could someone write a novel at the starting point and play the amnesia card? ! Isn't this seeking death?

. I've read a few chapters and it's hard to finish writing.

A skinned bullfrog with a pig brain is the protagonist.

Dongdong

Yuzu who fell asleep

Sorry to ask what Mengnan is?

After reading a few chapters, I can't stand it anymore. Is the author going to write something that will make people disgusting?